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专题40 读后续写11 高分开头技巧（解析版）

目录
专题40 读后续写11 高分开头技巧（解析版） 1
Part 1命题解读 1
Part 2思维导图 2
Part 3 第一招：副词开头 2
Part 4 第二招：形容词短语开头 3
Part 5 第三招： 非谓语开头 4
Part 6 第四招：对话或独白开头 4
Part 7 第五招：背景描写 5
Part 8 第六招：行为描写 5
Part 9 模拟演练 6
1． （2022·江苏南京·模拟预测） 6
2． （2022·广东佛山·一模） 9
3． （2022·江苏·南京市第一中学二模） 12
4． （2022·广东广东·一模） 14
5． （2022·辽宁·东北育才学校一模） 17
6． （2022·江苏盐城·一模） 19
7． 读后续写模拟专练01 22
8． 读后续写模拟专练02 26

Part 1命题解读
一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。俗话说：“well begun is half done！”（好的开头就成功了一半）。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场上如何写出靓丽的开头呢？

Part 2思维导图


Part 3 第一招：副词开头
我们先来看两个例句：
Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。
Joyfully ，he skipped up the street.他很高兴地跳过了街道。
这里的carefully和joyfully把后面的两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。

我们来看 2016年高考真题。故事大致是这样的：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次救援但没有看见她，她感到很失望。

第一段开头的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.意思是：没有直升机来了，天又黑了。同学们，可以想一想，我们该怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们来看看下面的写法：
 Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 立刻，一片黑暗笼罩着森林。
这里就用了：时间副词immediately衔接 + 环境描写，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。


Part 4 第二招：形容词短语开头
我们先看两个例句：
Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走进了黑暗的洞穴。
这里的“Curious to know what was inside, 很想知道里面有什么东西”就是形容词短语，表明他进洞穴的原因。相当于：He was curious to know what was inside, and he tiptoed into the dark cave.

Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来，他就楞在了原地。
这里的“unable to say a word”也是一个形容词短语，表现了“楞在原地”这个动作伴随动作：说不出一个字。

我们来看2018年高考真题，讲的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩而迷路的故事。第一段开头给的提示句是：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。

怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.  意思是：我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。这里用情绪形容词+从句的形式，很好体现了后一个动作“喊叫cry”的原因。

我们来看这篇文章的 第二段开头： 
文章给的提示句是：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里，天变黑了。

怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
 Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 我又累又饿，想知道我们能不能找到回去的路。
这里用情绪形容词+从句的形式，很好体现了后一个动作伴随的情况：又累又饿！


Part 5 第三招： 非谓语开头
先看这个例句：
Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周，溜进了房间，轻轻地关上门。
这里的“Looking around him cautiously”意思是：小心翼翼地环顾四周，是一个非谓语动词短语。

我们来看 2016年高考真题第一段开头，刚才提到过，讲了妻子在森林里迷路的故事。
文章给的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。刚才我们用副词开头写了一个句子。现在我们用非谓语开头，怎么写呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：

 Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. 简感到失望，不得不再呆一夜。本句中的开头，用了doing的形式，即feeling disappointed感到失望。

我们再来看 2016年10月高考真题第二段开头： 
文章给的提示句是： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。
这里用feeling refreshed的形式，很好体现了后一个动作“walk”的伴随状态。


Part 6 第四招：对话或独白开头

先看一个例句：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。

类似的写法，我们来看 2017年高考真题，文章主要讲的是作者和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的故事。第一段开头文章给的提示句是：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. 汽车突然停在他面前。

怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写："Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac.  “上车！” 保罗对麦克喊道。


Part 7 第五招：背景描写

我们来看 2017年高考真题，文章讲了作者与健忘的妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
第二段开头的提示语是这样的：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way（我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多好风景。）

怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：
I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys, holding me entirely in their fascination. 
我望着车窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。

这里用“视觉+环境描写+拟人”的写作手法，也成功地抓住了读者的注意力！


Part 8 第六招：行为描写
Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.
当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时，Furry开始摇，绕着圈跑。 Furry准备好了晚上的散步。一连串有关Furry的动作链，像放电影一样，印刻在读者的大脑中。为后面情节发展做好了铺垫。

我们来看 2017年高考真，仍然是作者与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
文章的第一段的提示句是：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.（第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。）怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：

 Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom?   爸爸和我相互看了一眼。 为什么不露营来满足妈妈？

这里就用到了动作描写+问句衔接。很好勾起了读者的兴趣。

Part 9 模拟演练
1． （2022·江苏南京·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our driveway—two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic, with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.
Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a peeping(唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.
A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose fashion, used it as a latrine(公共厕所). My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew a loop(圈) around the house, and then came back again once the porch was clean.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2020, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings. One day, when Dad threw Peeper into the air, he just flew away and didn’t come back. With night falling, all of us became increasingly worried. We looked for him, called his name and even peeped like him, anxiously expecting his return. But the special buddy never appeared again. Suddenly losing the special companion, everyone was very, very sad. It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. Meanwhile, we could only pray he found his parents and went off on his natural way. Twenty years passed, and Peeper became a fond memory for my family.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home. He did all of the same things Peeper used to do in Peepers old ways, and much to my surprise, he even responded to the name Peeper. It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later. This experience has been as meaningful to me as anything in my life. Looking beyond our reach high in the sky, birds have feelings like human beings, so do many other living things. We human beings should learn to get along well with them. We need each other’s care and protection.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家在一次运动后回家，看到了两只成年大雁和一只小雁，成年雁由于受到惊吓，留下不能飞的小雁走了。小雁把作者一家当成了自己的家人，怎么也赶不走，就这样，小雁在作者家生活了下来。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在我们意识到之前，这个小东西已经长成了一只拥有一双有力翅膀的大鸟。”可知，第一段可描写小雁飞走了，以及它飞走后作者全家的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“2020年，一只成年大雁回到了我的家，这让我非常惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写那只雁飞回来后所做的事情和作者的感受。
2.续写线索：飞走——不再出现——回来——感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①飞走：fly away/fly off
②失去：lose/miss
③回来：return/come back
④和睦相处：get along well with/live in harmony with
情绪类
①担心：worried/anxious
②惊讶：surprise/astonishment
【点睛】
[高分句型1]It took a long time before we accepted the fact that he was missing. （由连接词that引导的同位语从句）
[高分句型2]It became clear to me that my old best friend had returned, 20 years later.（由连接词that引导的主语从句）

2． （2022·广东佛山·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Daniel got a job as a delivery man to work his way through college. His parents couldn’t save up all the money he needed to get into law school, so since he was 15, he would take summer jobs and find some other jobs between studies to earn extra cash.
The boy was determined and every day he would wake up at 5 a.m., summer or winter, riding on his old bike to deliver parcels. It wasn’t an easy job, especially during winter. Besides that, his old bike was slow, making things harder. But that wasn’t a problem for Daniel.
Daniel’s schedule was always the same every day and people in the neighborhood already knew him.
He called them by their names, and they would often wave and greet him as he passed.
It was a normal day and Daniel was delivering parcels as usual. “Morning, Daniel! Check out my brand-new mountain bike!” called out a man whose home Daniel visited frequently. “Morning, Mr. Warren! That’s a really fancy bike!” Daniel screamed back at him as he rode towards his first delivery. He couldn’t help imagining what it would feel like to own a bike like the one Mr. Warren had just shown him. “My deliveries would double with that” he thought longingly.
Suddenly, Daniel lost balance and fell on the road. He got up and leaned the bike against the wall to see what had happened. He found a nail stuck in the back tire (轮胎) and he unluckily had a flat tire.
As he turned around and tried to think of what to do, he saw something unusual. A strange man Daniel had never seen before furtively (鬼鬼祟祟地) looked around and placed a package under his jacket. “Hey!” Daniel shouted at the man. “Hey there! What are you doing? That’s not yours!” The man heard Daniel and started to run as fast as he could.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After having a look at his bike’s flat tire, Daniel quickly started to run after the man.
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After having a look at his bike’s flat tire, Daniel quickly started to run after the man. “Stop! Thief!” Daniel cried out as he ran. The man was fast, but Daniel was faster. Daniel was gaining on the thief with every step he took. The desperate thief had to look over frequently to check the distance between them. Suddenly he tripped over a stone and fell. Daniel immediately caught him by the arm. The thief struggled to his feet, waving his fist toward Daniel in an attempt to escape. Daniel was holding the thief tight when he heard someone shouting “Here I come!”
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Mr. Warren arrived on his new bike, and then helped pin (压住) the thief down. Daniel told Mr. Warren what had happened and called the police. Shortly afterwards, a policeman arrived and took the thief away. When Daniel was about to leave, Mr. Warren stopped him and offered his new bike to Daniel and told him it was a gift for him. When Daniel tried to refuse such a generous gift, Mr. Warren insisted he take the bike, saying that it was actually a reward for Daniel’s bravery. Tears in his eyes, Daniel said, “Thank you so much! I’m glad to be of any help to you guys!”
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了靠打工赚学费的丹尼尔这天早上依旧骑他的旧自行车送包裹，在沃伦先生展示他的新自行车时，丹尼尔的车爆胎了且有一个人偷了他的包，丹尼尔最终追上小偷并将他绳之以法，沃伦先生后来将他的新自行车送给丹尼尔的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“丹尼尔看了一眼他的自行车爆胎后，迅速开始追赶那人。”可知，第一段可描写丹尼尔追赶小偷。
②.由第二段首句内容“沃伦先生骑着他的新自行车到达，然后帮助把小偷制服。”可知，第二段可描写沃伦先生的善举。
2.续写线索：追赶——绊倒——协助——奖励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.检查：look over / check/ examine
②.坚持要：make a point of / be intent on/ insist on
情绪类
①.感谢：thank for/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude/be grateful
②.绝望的：desperate / beyond hope
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Daniel told Mr. Warren what had happened and called the police.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] When Daniel tried to refuse such a generous gift, Mr. Warren insisted he take the bike, saying that it was actually a reward for Daniel’s bravery.这句话运用了动词现在分词作状语。

3． （2022·江苏·南京市第一中学二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At eleven years old during my summer holiday, my main concern was money. I wanted to buy the new must-have thing my classmates had. I already had a “job” as a sales representative with a kids-based sales company, and I sold wrapping paper and greeting cards with the best of them. On my bedroom floor, I arranged the bills and change from my purse to see what I had. I wished it would multiply before my eyes, but of course it didn't. I went to my mom. "Mom, I need more money,” I said, leaning against the kitchen counter while she cooked dinner.” What else can kids do for a job around here?” Mom responded with a smile, “Okay, let me ask around.”
The next day, she had an answer “Your grandmother will pay you to help her deliver lunch each day to the elderly.” Yes! I pumped my fist into the air. I couldn't wait to start my new job on Monday after school dismissed for the summer.
When my grandmother picked me up, I thanked her for the job and started asking the job. “It's simple. We pick up a large container full of hot meals in a nearby town and then we go on our delivery route,” she answered.
We arrived at the pick-up kitchen and got dozens of little shiny silver boxes with white lids that were hot. After our load was arranged in the backseat, my grandmother drove us to our first stop: a small white house. I took a meal and a small box of milk from the back and walked beside my grandmother to the front gate. She opened it and nodded to me to go in. I walked along the cracked walkway. Tall grass tickled (使发痒) my ankles.
Did someone really live here? I couldn't imagine that. The house didn't look nice, but I kept going. In front of the door leading to the enclosed front doorway, I paused, and my grandmother called out, “Mrs. Hershel, we've brought you some lunch.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The reply in a low voice came from my left, “Come on in.”
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On the road home, my grandmother said,” For some of them, we're the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.”
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The reply in a low voice came from my left, “Come on in.” I turned around and found an old lady in the corner looking at me. She was in her nineties with grey hair. She was sitting in a rock chair in a loose dress. When I drew near to her, she smiled at me. My grandmother introduced me to her. She thanked me again. However, I stared at her and just stood there holding the food, unsure what to do. Under the guide of my grandmother, I placed the food on her kitchen table. I was unwilling to stay there and withdrew at once.
On the road home, my grandmother said, “For some of them, we're the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.” And she asked if I would try it again the next day. With the lonely woman coming to my mind, I nodded. The next morning, I saw each person a little differently. I smiled at each one and greeted them. With those smiles I saw true happiness in their eyes. That summer I did something incredible not only earning money but making a difference to someone.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的时候很需要钱，奶奶给了他一份给人送午餐的工作。
【详解】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我的左边传来一个低低的声音:“请进。”可知，第一段可描写作者跟随奶奶去到一个老奶奶家所看到的情形。
②由第二段首句内容“在回家的路上，我的祖母说:“对他们中的一些人来说，我们是他们唯一能看到的人，一句友善的话语和一个微笑会有很长的路要走”可知，第二段可描写作者听了奶奶的话以后的感受和改变。
2. 续写线索：走近她——盯着她——退了出去——微笑——打招呼
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①走近她：draw near to her/approach her
②盯着她：stare at her/gaze at her
③退了出去：withdraw/back out
④打招呼：greet/say hello
情绪类
①感谢：thank/show her gratitude
②孤独的：lonely/solitary
【点睛】
[高分句型1]However, I stared at her and just stood there holding the food, unsure what to do.（用现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]That summer I did something incredible not only earning money but making a difference to someone.（用现在分词作状语）

4． （2022·广东广东·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once—you had been waiting for a long time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter. However,the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open. However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）, I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody's assistance.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily,the man didn't seem to be angry.
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Luckily, the man didn't seem to be angry. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place. Quite a lot of people had entered the room, so I didn't care about having an unhappy experience with one of my future peers. I was embarrassed, however, when I finally learned that the man to whom I had been rude minutes before was our professor of the first lecture.

Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well. After the class was dismissed, I came to him to apologize for my bad manners earlier in the day. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. The incident helped me realize that I should not let emotional strain and anxiety prevent me from communicating with people openly and pleasantly.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开。作者在大学第一天时很紧张，当天去听讲座时迷了路。一位好心的教授想要帮助他却被作者粗鲁地拒绝了。后来，他发现原来想要帮助他的人就是当天讲座的老师。最后作者向那位教授道了歉并且明白了不应该让情绪紧张和焦虑阻碍自己与人开诚布公、愉快地交流。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，这个男人似乎并不生气。”可知，第一段可描写作者听讲座的时候发现了做讲座的教授正是想要帮助他的人，感到很尴尬。
②由第二段首句内容“马修斯教授是一位出色的演讲者，讲座进行得非常顺利。”可知，第二段可描写作者向教授道歉及自己的感悟。
2.续写线索：进入教室——发现真相——感到尴尬——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.进入：enter/get into
②.意识到：realize/recognize
③.证明：turn out/prove
情绪类
①.生气：angry/filled with anger
②.尴尬：embarrassed/awkward
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place.（由where引导的限制性定语从句 ）
[高分句型2]. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. （由that引导的宾语从句）

5． （2022·辽宁·东北育才学校一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two fast friends were Willie and his little dog Bounce. Willie could never think of taking a walk without Bounce. Cake and play were equally shared between them. Willie taught his dog many cunning tricks, and often said that Bounce could do almost anything in the world but talk. Then on a bright summer afternoon, Willie had strolled with Bounce down to the river, which was not more than two blocks from his father’s store—Mr. Brown’s store.
Willie began to throw stones into the water, and to watch ripples as they made one circle after another. Bounce lay on the grass, watching the flies buzzing around his nose, and catching any that came too near.
There were some logs floating in the river near the bank. Willie jumped upon one of them to see if he could throw a stone across the river. He drew back, sent the stone with all strength, just as it left his hand, the log turned and he fell into the water. He was frightened, for he did not know how to swim, and there was no one to hear, though he called as loud as he could for help.
If he had been a big water dog, he could have jumped in and brought his master out.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
He ran up and down the bank two or three times, barking, looking first at Willie and then around.
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He ran up and down the bank two or three times, barking, looking first at Willie and then around. Then he started, as fast as he could run up the street to the store. When he got there the door was shut, but he scratched against it and barked loudly, until some one came and opened it. He caught hold of Mr. Brown’s clothes, then ran to the door, then back again, catching at him, barking and jumping. Noticing the dog’s abnormal behavior, Mr. Brown realized something must have been wrong. He put on his hat and went with the dog. Bounce, seeing Mr. Brown take his hat, started for the river.
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Finally, the father came to the river. He saw Willie’s hat floating on the water, and his small arm throw up. Without thinking twice, he sprang in and caught him just as he was going down for the last time, and quickly carried him to the bank. On the bank, Willie was given first aid and came to life after a while. When he got over his fright, no one seemed to be more delighted than Bounce, his true friends.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Willie和他的小狗Bounce外出时，Willie掉进了水里，多亏了Bounce及时回家通知Willie的父亲，让Willie及时得救了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他在河岸上跑了两三次，汪汪叫着，先看了看Willie，然后又转了一圈。”可知，第一段可描写Willie落水后，小狗回家通知他的父亲。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，父亲来到河边。”可知，第二段可描写父亲救出Willie的经过以及被救后的反应。
2.续写线索：Bounce跑回商店——Bounce叫来Willie的父亲——父亲来到河边——父亲救出Willie——Willie得救
3.词汇激活
行为类
关闭：shut /close
看见：see/spot
苏醒：come to life/come to oneself
情绪类
奇怪：abnormal/strange
高兴：delighted /glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When he got there the door was shut, but he scratched against it and barked loudly, until some one came and opened it. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Bounce, seeing Mr. Brown take his hat, started for the river. (运用了现在分词作状语)

6． （2022·江苏盐城·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。
December 5, 2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.
When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012. For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.
In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭). Still, Bethany struggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center, where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions. She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.
When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up.
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参考答案：
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scared they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethany’s anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home. (77 words)
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany now lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethany’s 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny young lady who would talk your ear off.   (77 words)
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。Josephine和Scott Lansing几年来相继收养了Cloe，Josie，Annabelle三位女孩，并给她们提供了健康幸福的成长环境。因为家庭原因，Bethany不得不接受寄养家庭，但是她的童年经历使得她不信任任何人，在Helping Hand Home工作人员的帮助下，她的性格有了些许好转，但是在与Lansing一家会面时，还是有些抵触。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但Lansing一家并不打算放弃。”可知，第一段可描写Lansing一家合力劝导Bethany。
②由第二段首句内容“后来，Bethany经历了许多激动人心的事情。”可知，第二段可描写Bethany的经历和变化。
2.续写线索：女孩们分享经历——Bethany不再抗拒——外出游玩——Bethany的变化
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.想做某事：want to do/would like to do
②.看看：see/have a look at
③.返回：return to/go back to
情绪类
①.害怕的：scared/frightened
②.幸福的： happy/blissful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. （运用了when引导的状语从句）


7． 读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On July 8，2017，eight members of a family in total，were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle，Florida．As the sun sank lower on the horizon，the two boys Noah，11，and Stephen，8—swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing．Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea．After trying and failing to swim back，they started waving and screaming for help．But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening．
The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha，a couple from Georgia，heard them．They dived into the water and soon reached the two brothers．But after a few minutes，they were all trapped in a rip current(离岸流)—a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then，some teenagers had heard the cry．One of the teens rushed into the water，grabbed Jacky，and pulled him back to shore．Meanwhile，Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out．She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone．    
Onshore，Jacky was terrified．A man stopped．“What’s wrong?” asked Shaun，who was heading back to his car．“My wife is drowning!” Brittany said．Shaun immediately strode(大步跨)into the water．But several minutes later，a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys．He knew that if he continued，he’d become another victim．He turned around to seek help．
It was about that time that Roberta，the boys’ mother，returned from the bathroom and  looked around for her children．She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than  they were allowed to go．She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them，but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction．Looking around，Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help．
注意：
    1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
    2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
    3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
    4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha，a risky idea came to them．
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By then，more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain．
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翻译小练习：
1. 为了不让自己在激流中失去立足点，他们开始互相抓住，形成一条从海滩一直延伸到挣扎的人和塔巴塔的人类链。
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2. 他们紧紧地联系在一起，把脚牢牢地插在沙子里，以确保他们的安全。
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3. 然而，这需要更多的链接，可能有几十个。
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4. 肖恩在海滩上发现了其他的游泳者，喊道：“别光站在那儿！来帮忙吧。”
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5. 一个接一个，一个接一个，完全陌生的人走进海浪里，紧紧抓住对方的手腕，决心不让任何人死在海滩上。
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6. 最后，他们成功了，Tabatha和两个兄弟得救了！“海滩上的那些人是地球上的天使，”罗伯塔说。
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7. “不管是第一个人还是最后一个人，他们都是我们的英雄，帮助我们的家庭摆脱了困境。
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参考答案：
1. 为了不让自己在激流中失去立足点，他们开始互相抓住，形成一条从海滩一直延伸到挣扎的人和塔巴塔的人类链。
To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current, they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling and Tabatha.

2. 他们紧紧地联系在一起，把脚牢牢地插在沙子里，以确保他们的安全。
They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand.

3. 然而，这需要更多的链接，可能有几十个。
However, that required more links—probably dozens of them.

4. 肖恩在海滩上发现了其他的游泳者，喊道：“别光站在那儿！来帮忙吧。”
Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted, “Don’t just stand there! Come and help.”

5. 一个接一个，一个接一个，完全陌生的人走进海浪里，紧紧抓住对方的手腕，决心不让任何人死在海滩上。
One by one，link by link，total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists，determined that no one would die on that beach．

6. 最后，他们成功了，Tabatha和两个兄弟得救了！“海滩上的那些人是地球上的天使，”罗伯塔说。
At last，they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth，”said Roberta．

7. “不管是第一个人还是最后一个人，他们都是我们的英雄，帮助我们的家庭摆脱了困境。
“Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain，they are all our heroes，who helped get our family out of trouble．”

参考范文：
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha，a risky idea came to them. To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current, they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling and Tabatha. They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand. However, that required more links—probably dozens of them. Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted, “Don’t just stand there! Come and help.”

Paragraph 2
By then，more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain．One by one，link by link，total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists，determined that no one would die on that beach．At last，they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth，”said Roberta．“Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain，they are all our heroes，who helped get our family out of trouble．”

8． 读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch(胸针) in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the price－five dollars－was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family. 
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home, the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to support their five children but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless, he opened the shop's weathered (风化的)door and went inside, Standing proud and straight in his flour－sack(面粉袋改做的) shirt and washed－out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, "But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for some time?
"I'll try," the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags(装钉子的麻袋). People built their own buildings in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used nail bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.
That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph l: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.
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翻译小练习：
1. 鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
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2. 为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
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3. 尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
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4. 商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
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5. 经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
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6. 他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
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7. 五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
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8. 鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
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9. 当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
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10. 多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
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11. 她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
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参考答案：
1. 鲁本又冷又饿，在街上徘徊，小心翼翼地寻找指甲袋。
Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. 

2. 为了省更多的钱，他甚至决定一大早送报纸。
To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning.

3. 尽管他感到筋疲力尽，但他仍然坚持这个计划。
Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan.

4. 商店橱窗里的胸针提醒他，他所做的是值得的。
It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. 

5. 经过长时间的努力，他终于成功了。
After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.

6. 他拿出汽水罐，把硬币倒出来，开始数。
He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count.

7. 五美元！他的努力得到了回报！
Five dollars! His hard work paid off! 

8. 鲁本拿着汽水罐，冲到商店去买胸针。
Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.

9. 当他拿到漂亮的胸针时，他冲进前门，把它放在朵拉和阿普斯的手里。
 The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand. 

10. 多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。
Never had Dora received such a gift.

11. 她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.

参考范文：Paragraph 1: Every day after school, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered the streets, searching for the nail bags carefully. To save more money, he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning. Exhausted and tired as he felt, he still stuck to the plan. It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him that what he did was worthwhile. After a long time of hard work, he made it eventually.
Paragraph 2: Finally the time came! He took out the soda tin, poured the coins out and began to count. Five dollars! His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora&apos’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.







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