民族希望与未来 热点03-备战中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点03 民族希望与未来

一、话题作文

1．每个人都有自己引以为傲的东西，那么让你感到骄傲的是什么呢？是我们伟大的祖国，是努力拼搏的自己还是可亲可敬的家人呢？请以“I'm so proud of____________”为题写一篇英语短文。

要点：1. 让你引以为傲的是什么；

2. 你为什么以此为傲；

3. 你有什么期望。

要求：1. 请补全标题，如myself或my father或our country等；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数100左右。

【参考范文】 ：

I'm so proud of our country

     I'm so proud of our country. China has such a long-standing history. It has so many resources. We Chinese people are clever and hard-working. China has made much progress in many fields in recent years. We successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Athletes have won many gold medals in international competitions. Scientists have launched many kinds of man-made satellites. Great changes have taken place in people's lives. We can get a good education. Now all of us can get free medical care. Till now China has successfully controlled the new coronavirus and has made remarkable achievements.

We are sure to take the lead in the world in the future, for our problems are big but our dream is even bigger.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文为话题作文，要求以“I'm so proud of…”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：陈述是什么让你引以为豪；为什么以此为傲；有什么期望。

2.写作指导：本文叙述发生过的事情用一般过去时，讲述已取得的成就用现在完成时。书写时要依据提示，分层次有条理地从 “什么让你引以为豪；为什么以此为傲；有什么期望” 三个方面阐述。

二、材料作文

2．随着我国经济的飞速发展,世界与中国的联系越来越紧密,中国在世界舞台上扮演着越来越重要的角色。几位外国友人正在谈论对中国的看法,同学们更需要全方面了解自己的祖国,才能为世界介绍好中国。请根据提示信息,写一篇英语短文。

提示信息:

1.来自美国的Bruce曾经在中国学习过,喜欢中国的校园,和中国的朋友交朋友。

2.来自英国的Carol来中国几次,喜欢中国的名胜（places of interest）和美食。

3.来自加拿大的David喜欢中国产品,喜欢在中国购物和移动支付（mobile payment)方式。

4. …

要求∶

1.短文必须包含提示的所有内容,可以适当发挥;

2. 90词左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of China.

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【参考范文】

With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country. Three foreign friends are expressing their opinions on China.

Bruce comes from America. He once studied in China. He thinks there are lots of beautiful schools in China and most students are smart and friendly.

Carol is an English woman. She has visited China many times. She thinks China is a great country with lots of places of interest. What's more, people can taste all kinds of delicious food in China.

As for David, a Canadian, he enjoys shopping in China. He thinks products made in China don't cost so much but are of very high quality. And mobile payment in China is quick and convenient.

As a Chinese, I love my beautiful country with a long history. I hope my motherland will be stronger and more beautiful.

【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“外国友人对中国的看法”为文章的主线展开描写。要根据文中题目给出的几个不同的外国友人的看法具体的描写，最后可以加入自己的看法，要注意语言的逻辑性和词语要恰当。

2.点评：文章分五段描写。第一段总的指出外国友人对中国有不同的看法；第二段至第四段主要是分别描写三位外国友人对中国的不同的看法；第五段主要写作为一个中国人的一些期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言流畅，用词恰当，语句通顺意思易懂。

3.高分亮点：

短语：come from；lots of；places of interest；What’s more；all kinds of；enjoy doing。

句型：She thinks+宾语从句；There be句型；and引导的并列句。

三、电子邮件

3．书面表达

随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你

最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下

面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。

注意事项:

1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;

2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David,

I'm really happy to tell you something interesting about China.  China is a country with a long history.

I'm sure you'll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【参考范文】

Dear Thomas,

I’m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.

It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.

“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.

Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes.

I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：●What's the season in China now? ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。

句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。

【高分句型二】I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。

you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。

四、讲稿

4．实现中华民族伟大复兴，是中华民族近代以来最伟大的梦想。作为一名即将毕业的中学生，为此，你有什么人生规划？你们学校将围绕这个主题举行一次英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。写作提示：

(1)中华民族历史悠久，文化灿烂，今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科学技术处在世界领先地位，身为一名中国人倍感自豪！

splendid culture 灿烂的文化 motherland 祖国 with…efforts在……的努力下 technology 科技  Lead in the world 领先世界

(2)为实现中国梦而奋斗。学会做一个感恩、守规矩、善良并诚信的人，不怕困难，努力学习更多的知识，提高自己的能力，将来成为……(写出自己理想的职业及理由) make…come true, grateful (感恩的) , well-behaved (守规矩的)

写作要求：

(1)不得使用真实的姓名和校名：

(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；

(4)词数80 左右 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。

Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that _____________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

【参考范文】：

Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that the Chinese nation has a long history and splendid culture. Today, our motherland is becoming stronger and stronger with all Chinese people’s efforts. Many technologies are Leading in the world. I’m very proud of being a Chinese.

Secondly, I want to tell you that I’ll work hard to make our Chinese Dream come true. I’ll learn to be a grateful, well-behaved, kind and honest person. I’m not afraid of the difficulties. I’ll try to learn more knowledge and improve my own abilities. I’ll become a scientist and make contributions to our country in the future.

That’s all. Thank you!

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一篇演讲稿；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先表达中华民族通过自身的努力变得更加强大；

第二步，具体阐述通过怎么做来实现中国梦；

第三步，最后是表达感谢。

[亮点词汇]

① stronger and stronger 越来越强大

② be proud of 为……感到骄傲

③ come true实现

④ be afraid of 害怕

[高分句型]

① Secondly, I want to tell you that I’ll work hard to make our Chinese Dream come true.（that引导宾语从句，句尾动词不定式作目的状语）

② I’ll try to learn more knowledge and improve my own abilities.（and并列两个动词短语）

5．实现中华民族伟大复兴，是中华民族近代以来最伟大的梦想。作为一名即将毕业的中学生，为此，你有什么人生规划？你们学校将围绕这个主题举行一次英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。

写作提示：

（1）中华民族历史悠久，文化灿烂。今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科学技术处在世界领先地位，身为一名中国人倍感自豪（long history and splendid culture, motherland, with … efforts, technology, leading position）；

（2）为实现中国梦而奋斗。学会做一个感恩、守规矩、善良并诚信的人，不怕困难，努力学习更多的知识，提高自己的能力，将来成为……（写出自己理想的职业及理由）（make ... come true, grateful, well-behaved, difficulty, knowledge, ability）。

写作要求：

（1）不得使用真实的姓名和校名；

（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；

（4）词数100左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thank you!

【参考范文】：

Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that I’m very proud of being a Chinese. In the past, our excellent traditional culture has influenced the world. Today, our motherland is becoming stronger and stronger with all Chinese people’s efforts. Many technologies are in the world’s leading position.

Secondly, I want to tell you that I’ll work hard to make our Chinese Dream come true. I’ll learn to be a grateful, well-behaved, kind and honest person. I’m not afraid of the difficulties. I’ll try to learn more knowledge and improve my own abilities. I’ll become a scientist and make contributions to our country in the future.

That’s all. Thank you!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示，将自己的人生规划与国家民族的复兴结合起来写一篇演讲稿。

2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态可用一般现在时或在表达未来规划时使用一般将来时。写作时可用Firstly … Secondly等词，使文章衔接自然，所给要点必须全部包含。文章中应避免出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。

6．习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。

要点提示：

(1)爱国爱家，诚实守信；

(2)努力学习，做个有创造力的人；

(3)参加体育锻炼，保持健康；

(4)其他方面等等。

写作要求：

(1)词数80左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；

(2)根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；

(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

Boys and girls,

My name is Li Hua. Today I`m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Boys and girls,

     My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us. Second, we should study hard and be creative. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. Fourth, we should be good at discovering the beauty in life and learn to love nature. We must take good care of our home. Fifth, we should also take an active part in all kinds of labor in and out of school. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据要点提示，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称行文。写作时除了叙述所给的三点外，围绕主题可适当发挥，添加几点其他内容。文章力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

7．假如你是李华，你所在的学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下思维导图，以“I am proud of our country”为题写一篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、传播中国文化以及太空工业等方面的发展与变化，并谈谈你的感受。词数90左右。

注意事项：

(1)必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

(2)意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范；

(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名和地名。

I am proud of our country

Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【参考范文】

I am proud of our country

Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.

Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality.

I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.

That’s all. Thanks for listening.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“I am proud of our country”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明自己很高兴可以做演讲；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“环境、文化、航天工业等”几个方面重点介绍；

第三步，表达自己的感受；

第四步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①take place发生

②For example例如

③At the same time同时

[高分句型]

①At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（which引导的定语从句）

②I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.（and连接的并列句和省略that的宾语从句）