2024届高考英语复习写作专题13热点话题学案

Ⅰ．应用文写作

推荐信

(2020·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：

1．条件及要求；

2．表示感谢并提醒注意防护。

注意：1．词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

Yours，

Li Hua

Dear Jim，

How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you．

Our school's drama club plans to start practising．①Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place．②Would you please recommend one for us?

He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching．

Thank you for your help．Please take care of yourself．③Remember to wear a mask when necessary．

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be away, be in one's place, recommend, native English speaker, currently, experienced, take care of等。

2．句式美：①句Since you're away in Britain是Since引导的原因状语从句。

②句Would you please recommend one for us？是委婉请求的高分句式。

③句when necessary是when引导的时间状语从句的省略句，其中省略了it is。

假定你是李华，你的笔友Chris 想申请加入学校的汉语俱乐部，需要展示一项中国特色的才艺，他写信向你求助，希望你能推荐一项中国特色的才艺展示。请给他写一封回信。内容包括：

1．推荐才艺；

2．推荐理由；

3．表达祝福。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Chris，

Yours，

Li Hua

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Dear Chris，

I know that you want to participate in the Chinese club in our school, where you need to show talents with characteristics．And I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese taste．Such a choice can arouse Chinese people's great awareness to Chinese food．As we all know, our Chinese people attach great importance to eating．If you can introduce a dish, I believe they can be attracted a lot．Moreover, learning to cook is an amazing thing for all of us．

Best wishes to you! I hope you can achieve it successfully．

Yours，

Li Hua

Ⅱ．读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I am a doctor, so I love my job．I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment．[悬念1] With a pandemic sweeping through the world, people are avoiding hospitals as possible as they can．

However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital．Babies still need to be born．

Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened．Their families are separated from them due to safety measures．We've always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support．Unfortunately, some of the women have caught coronavirus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk．Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts．You don't know if someone is carrying coronavirus or not．

I didn't want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them．As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realised I had to make a very tough decision about my family's safety when the country went into lockdown．Giving up work wasn't an option for me．I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little children behind either．[悬念2]

At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties．I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up．When I explained the situation to my children and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go．On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen．[悬念3]

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

After that, my workload increased because some of my co-workers fell ill．                                                                      

A week later, it came to Xiaoyong's birthday．

一、理清文章大意

关键：Who: a doctor

Where: in the hospital

When: while a pandemic sweeping through the world

What: During the epidemic period, the author had to make a choice．

How: The author left her children to her sister．

大意：本文讲述了作者是一位有着两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位医生，在疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给她妹妹一家照顾。

二、挖掘文中悬念点

悬念1思考：作者此刻为什么感到当医生特别骄傲？

悬念2思考：作者会想出两全的办法吗？

悬念3思考：孩子会适应妈妈不在场的生活吗？

三、分析段落开头语

段首句1思考：

①工作量具体增加了多少？

②作者都做些什么？她有时间陪孩子吗？

③作者还记得儿子小勇的生日吗？

段首句2思考：

①作者在儿子生日时能回家吗？不能的话，是不是要拍照，和家人视频庆祝生日呢？

②家人会怎么安慰和鼓励作者？

③作者有什么感受？

通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：

Paragraph 1：工作量增加→全身心投入工作→没时间留给孩子→为孩子生日做补偿

Paragraph 2：在医院和家人视频聊天→和同事一起为儿子唱生日歌→感想

After that, my workload increased because some of my co-workers fell ill．We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work．Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell fast asleep．As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital．I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding．However, it troubled me that I didn't have time for my own kids．Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon．I had to do something to make up for him．

A week later, it came to Xiaoyong's birthday．I made a video call to them from the hospital．I greeted them on the screen with mask and goggles on．Surprisingly, they recognised me at once, shouting excitedly．I took the phone to the hall, where my co-workers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong！” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face．My children's understanding and my co-workers' support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones．We are sure to win．

1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。

①nothing but用得恰到好处，表现出主人公全力以赴投入工作。

②completely exhausted表明主人公工作辛苦。

③warm一词用得精妙，概括了医生大家庭的温暖，人们互助、互爱，共渡疫情难关。

2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。

①be dedicated to是be devoted to的高级表达。

②poured all my efforts into是一个增分点。

③As soon as引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句，that引导主语从句。

④with mask and goggles on是with复合结构，是一个增分点。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

As we get older, there are certain gifts standing out in our memories for a variety of reasons．

One gift I was given and treasured most was a doll named Patsy．She wasn't originally mine but was my younger sister's New Year gift, but on holding Patsy I immediately fell in love with her and couldn't bear to part with her．Luckily, my sister was quite happy to exchange dolls．From then on Patsy was my baby and I continued to love her dearly．

Another gift I offered my Mum has been shining in my mind．On a Saturday, I was on my way to the local cinema when I happened to glimpse (一瞥) at the window of the gift shop at the corner of our street．There were lovely gloves, pretty flowered handkerchiefs, and rose patterned teacups and saucers, all in pretty boxes．Seeing all these lovely gifts reminded me that it would soon be Mother's Day and my mother's birthday．Wouldn't it be nice, I thought, if I could give my mother something really special, something I'd bought myself? So I stepped inside the shop and admired a dressing table set, which was a green cut glass with ornamental tray (装饰托盘) and several matching pieces．I was sure my mother would love it．

The lady must have seen my disappointment when she told me the price．But she had a suggestion which immediately lifted my spirits．She pulled out a large notebook and wrote my name in it and the gift I wanted to buy, and in return I paid her a penny from my pocket money．It meant no sweets that day but I didn't care．At the age of nine, I'd made my very first lay-by (分期付款) ...and felt like a grown-up．From then on, every Saturday I dropped in at the shop on schedule and paid a penny, which the lady dutifully recorded in her notebook．

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

The day before Mother's Day I paid the last two pence．                                                                      

Too excited to wait till Sunday, I excitedly presented the gift to my mother．

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The day before Mother's Day I paid the last two pence．As the lady wrapped the gift in brown paper and tied it with string, I attentively signed the notebook to say I had completed my lay-by．I thanked her and excitedly left the shop．“Be careful not to drop it，” she called after me．Securely, the gift tucked under my arm, I skipped the short distance home．

Too excited to wait till Sunday, I excitedly presented the gift to my mother．I placed the parcel on my mother's lap and I stood by her side, hopping from one foot to the other, as she painstakingly untied every single knot in the string and slowly peeled away the brown paper as if she were unfolding butterfly wings, to reveal the box．My heart was racing．Then, as I bit into my bottom lip, she carefully began to lift the lid．“Do you like it, do you like it？” I asked excitedly, “Yes, I love it so much and I'll keep it with me，” said my mother．She was delighted, smiling sweetly．The special gift survived many house moves, and it was still sitting on my mother's dressing table．