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    2018-2021年北京中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达

    一.书面表达(共10小题)

    1.(2021北京)题目

        北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。

        假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 "Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)"这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。

        提示词语:showtraditionallovetreasureimportant

        提示问题:In your opinionwhat's the cultural symbol of Beijing

                        Please describe it.

                        Why do you think it can be a symbol

        I'm Li Huafrom Class 1Grade 9.                   

        I hope my idea can be taken.Thanks!

    2.(2021北京)题目

        现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。

        某英文网站正在开展以"适应变化"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。

        提示词语:helpenjoynewchallengetake action

        提示问题:What is the change that happened in your life

                         How did you deal with it

                         What have you learned from the experience

        There are many changes in a person's life.               

    3.(2020北京)题目

    "不积跬步,无以至千里." 积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想.

    某英文网站正在开展以"积累"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获.

    提示词语:accumulate(积累),readkeepmake progress

    提示问题:What did you do to accumulate knowledge

    What have you learned from doing so

        Without accumulatingwe can hardly achieve anything__________________________

    4.(2020北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

    题目

    假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了.为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法.

    提示词语:losemake up(弥补),buysend

    提示问题:What happened to the book

    What will you do to make up for it

    Dear Peter

        How are you getting onI'm writing this email to say sorry_____________

    Yours

    Li Hua

    5.(2019北京)自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行.

           某英文网站正在开展以"自律"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处.

           提示词语: selfdisciplined(自律的),plangoalhabitimprove

           提示问题: What did you do to be selfdisciplined

                            What benefits have you got from doing so

           Selfdiscipline plays an important role in our life _________

    6.(2019北京)假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展"安全月"宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情.请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法.

    提示词语: designsafety rulecarefulprotectpicture

    提示问题: When should you hand in the poster

    What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster

    Dear Peter

        I'm glad to receive your email_________

        If there is anything more that I can help withplease let me know

    Yours

    Li  Hua

    7.(2018北京)"静以修身,俭以养德",勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德,无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节俭,拒绝浪费.

        某英文网站在开展以"节约是美德"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿.谈谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义.

    提示词语:thrifty(节约的),saveturn offmoneyvirtue(美德)

    提示问题:What do you do in your daily life

    Why do you do so

        It's one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty________________

    8.(2018北京)假如你是李华,你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加,请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备.

    提示词语:lecture(讲座),inviteinformationquestiononline

    提示问题:When and where will you have the lecture

                   What do you advise Peter to prepare for it

    Dear Peter

    How is it going

    There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school     

    If there is anything that I can doplease let me know

    Yours

    LiHua

    9.(2017北京)宽容是一种美德.人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊.面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光.

    某英文网站正在开展以"包容、谅解"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受.

    提示词语:hurtrealizeforgive(原谅),happy

    提示问题:What happened between you and him/her

    Why did you decide to forgive him/her

    How did you feel after forgiving him/her

        I still remember what happened between

    _____

    10.(2017北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

    题目

    假如你是李华,正在美国参加一个交换生项目.今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出,请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈MrsSmith 写一个留言条,告诉她你们要去哪里,去做什么,以及你回家的时间和方式.

    提示词语:parkmovie theatergo boatingwatch a movie

    提示问题:Where are you going

    What are you going to do

    When and how will you get home

    Dear MrsSmith

    My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon

     

    Li Hua


    2018-2021年北京中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达

    参考答案与试题解析

    一.书面表达(共10小题)

    1.(2021北京)题目

        北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市,这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等,都有文化的印记。

        假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动,其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送,现就 "Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)"这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言,推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志,对其作简要介绍,并说明推荐理由。

        提示词语:showtraditionallovetreasureimportant

        提示问题:In your opinionwhat's the cultural symbol of Beijing

                        Please describe it.

                        Why do you think it can be a symbol

        I'm Li Huafrom Class 1Grade 9.                   

        I hope my idea can be taken.Thanks!

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】【高分句型一】

    I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing .我相信京剧是北京的文化象征。宾语从句

    【高分句型二】

    That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.

    这就是为什么我认为京剧可以成为北京的文化象征。表语从句

    【解答】I'm Li Hua.from Class 1Grade 9.I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing .Jingju tells timehonored stories through singing and movementsshowing us what life was like in the past.The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.【高分句型一】

        Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages.Besidesas a national treasureit plays an important role in Chinese culture.That's why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.【高分句型二】

        I hope my idea can be taken.Thanks!

    【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

    2.(2021北京)题目

        现实中,大到自然环境和社会环境,小到个人生活和学习,变化无处不在,面对变化,唯有积极适应,才能有所进步和收获。

        某英文网站正在开展以"适应变化"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你生活中的一个变化,你是如何应对这个变化的,以及有什么收获。

        提示词语:helpenjoynewchallengetake action

        提示问题:What is the change that happened in your life

                         How did you deal with it

                         What have you learned from the experience

        There are many changes in a person's life.               

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】【高分句型一】

    When I entered middle schoolI felt lonely.当我进入中学时,我感到孤独。when引导时间状语从句

    【高分句型二】

    When change comeswe should face it and take action.当变化来临时,我们应该面对它并采取行动。when引导时间状语从句

    【解答】There are many changes in a person's life.When I entered middle schoolI felt lonely.【高分句型一】(什么变化)I missed my old friendsbut I knew I had to fit in.I offered help to my classjoined in the afterschool activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party.GraduallyI made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.(怎么面对的)

        From this experienceI get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities.When change comeswe should face it and take action.【高分句型二】(感受)

    【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

    3.(2020北京)题目

    "不积跬步,无以至千里." 积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想.

    某英文网站正在开展以"积累"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获.

    提示词语:accumulate(积累),readkeepmake progress

    提示问题:What did you do to accumulate knowledge

    What have you learned from doing so

        Without accumulatingwe can hardly achieve anything__________________________

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】【高分句型一】

    First of allI attentively listened to the teachersparentsand the others who could provide me with much knowledgeconsidering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. 首先,我认真地听老师、家长和其他可以给我提供很多知识的人讲,认为这是最有效的充实自己的方法之一.

    who引导的定语从句;that引导的宾语从句.

    【高分句型二】

    So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. 所以我明白了只有一步一步地获取知识,我们才能实现我们的目标和梦想.

    that引导的宾语从句;以only by开头的倒装句.

    【解答】Without accumulatingwe can hardly achieve anything. (点题)As for meI have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledgeFirst of allI attentively listened to the teachersparentsand the others who could provide me with much knowledgeconsidering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself.【高分句型一】 In the second placeI used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything importantLast but not leastwhen having spare timeI chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.(如何积累知识的)

    In a wordI have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledgeJust as an old saying goesRome was not built in one dayThat is to sayone cannot succeed without persistent accumulationSo I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream.【高分句型二】 In the futureI will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.(学到了什么)

    【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.

    4.(2020北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

    题目

    假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了.为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法.

    提示词语:losemake up(弥补),buysend

    提示问题:What happened to the book

    What will you do to make up for it

    Dear Peter

        How are you getting onI'm writing this email to say sorry_____________

    Yours

    Li Hua

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】【高分句型一】

    UnfortunatelyI won't make it because I lost it by accident. 不幸的是,我做不到,因为我不小心弄丢了它.

    because引导的原因状语从句.

    【高分句型二】

    Unexpectedlywhen I went back on that afternoonthe book was not where it had been before. 那天下午我回去的时候,没想到书不在原来的地方了.

    when引导的时间状语从句;where引导的表语从句.

    【解答】Dear Peter

        How are you getting onI'm writing this email to say sorry.(写信目的)RecentlyI planned to return the book that you lent to meUnfortunatelyI won't make it because I lost it by accident.【高分句型一】 I took several books to the park nearby to read last Saturday morningAfter finishing readingI hurried home without putting the book into my bagUnexpectedlywhen I went back on that afternoonthe book was not where it had been before.【高分句型二】 I searched and searched but failed to find it. (发生了什么)

    How I wish I would give it back to you! HoweverI have no choice but to break the bad news to youI really hope to make up for your loss and have bought the same book onlineI will send the book to you as soon as possible.(怎么弥补) Hopefullyyou will understand my situation and accept my apology

    I'm looking forward to your reply

    Yours

    Li Hua

    【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.

    5.(2019北京)自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行.

           某英文网站正在开展以"自律"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处.

           提示词语: selfdisciplined(自律的),plangoalhabitimprove

           提示问题: What did you do to be selfdisciplined

                            What benefits have you got from doing so

           Selfdiscipline plays an important role in our life _________

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】【高分句型一】

    And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates

    我可以不仅尊重我所有的老师,而且和同学相处得很好.not only but  also不仅而且

    【高分句型二】

    Secondlymy life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved

    其次,我的生活和我的学习效率高,所以节省了很多时间.so that引导目的状语从句.

    【解答】Selfdiscipline plays an important role in our life. (点题)

    To be honestI am a person who is selfdisciplined  I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at schoolAnd I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates.【高分句型一】At homeI was able to balance housework and homeworkI usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goalAfter finishing all the taskI developed the habit of getting up early and going to bed earlyIn the societyI spared no effort to improve myself all the time.(如何自律的)

          In a wordI have benefited a lot from being selfdisciplinedFirst of allI have had many good habitswhich makes my life easier and more regularSecondlymy life and my study have been of high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved.【高分句型二】 Thirdlybeing selfdisciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter futureIn the futureI will continue to be a selfdisciplined person.(自律的好处)

    【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.

    6.(2019北京)假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展"安全月"宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情.请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法.

    提示词语: designsafety rulecarefulprotectpicture

    提示问题: When should you hand in the poster

    What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster

    Dear Peter

        I'm glad to receive your email_________

        If there is anything more that I can help withplease let me know

    Yours

    Li  Hua

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】高分句型一:

    First the basic safety rules are of great importancewhich should be included in your poster

    首先,基本安全规则非常重要,这应该包括在你的海报里.be of great importance非常重要,which should be included in your poster. 非限制性定语从句

    高分句型二:

    In additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable

    另外,为了使之更生动、更可接受,在海报上画几张图片也是好想法.so as to 目的是,为了,make it +adjmake it more lively and acceptable使之更生动、更可接受

    【解答】Dear Peter

    I'm glad to receive your emailAs it is requiredyou are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.(海报上交的时间)

    Being your close friendI am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with youFirst the basic safety rules are of great importancewhich should be included in your poster. 【高分句型一】Secondfollowing the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its importance and advise them to be careful both in and out of schoolThird  adding a few suggestions about safety awareness is necessaryIn additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.【高分句型二】(设计海报的一些想法)

    If there is anything more that I can help withplease let me know

    Yours

    Li  Hua

    【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.

    7.(2018北京)"静以修身,俭以养德",勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德,无论生活富足与否,我们都应该提倡节俭,拒绝浪费.

        某英文网站在开展以"节约是美德"为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿.谈谈生活中你是怎么做的,以及这样做的意义.

    提示词语:thrifty(节约的),saveturn offmoneyvirtue(美德)

    提示问题:What do you do in your daily life

    Why do you do so

        It's one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty________________

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】高分句型:

    It's a good idea to start on in our daily life.在我们的日常生活中提倡它是个好主意.这里It's a good idea to do sth表示做某事是一个好主意.

     I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue.我认为每个人都应该采取行动来坚持这一美德.这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句.

    【解答】It's one of our traditional virtues to be thriftyBeing thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generationIt's a good idea to start on in our daily life(高分句型).(提出话题:节约是美德  )

    First of all I constantly check the lights and the taps to make sure that they are off when leaving the house Besidesnever have I wasted any foodwhat's moreI don't spend too much money on unnecessary things and save money regularly.(介绍在日常生活中做了什么)

    The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my lifeAs the old saving goes"Waste notwant not"I make up my mind to be thrifty as much as possibleI think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue(高分句型).(论述这样做的原因)

    【点评】本篇为议论文话题作文,主题为"节约是美德",考生需要从两个方面作答,第一个方面是介绍日常生活中你都做了什么?第二个方面 你为什么这样做?

    8.(2018北京)假如你是李华,你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座,你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加,请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备.

    提示词语:lecture(讲座),inviteinformationquestiononline

    提示问题:When and where will you have the lecture

                   What do you advise Peter to prepare for it

    Dear Peter

    How is it going

    There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school The Peking Opera will start at 1000 this Friday morning in the school hallI am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture

    In the lecture we can not only get some useful information about the Peking Operabut also get close to the traditional Chinese culturewhich can benefit us a lot

    There are some suggestions for you to prepare for itFirst of allremember to be there on timewhat's moredon't forget to bring a camera with you which can record the precious momentlast but not leastit's a golden chance for you to come up with some questions that you are willing to learn about. 

    If there is anything that I can doplease let me know

    Yours

    LiHua

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】高分句型:

    I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture.我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲.这里invite sb to do sth表示邀请某人做某事.

    If there is anything that I can do please let me know.如果有什么我能做的,请告诉我.这里let sb do sth表示让某人做某事.

    【解答】Dear Peter

    How is it going

    There'll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school.(引出话题)The Peking Opera will start at 1000 this Friday morning in the school hallI am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture.(高分句型)(讲座时间和地点)

    In the lecture we can not only get some useful information about the Peking opera but also get close to the traditional Chinese culturewhich can benefit us a lot

    There are some suggestions for you to prepare for itFirst of allremember to be there on timewhat's moredon't forget to bring a camera with you which can record the precious momentlast but not leastit's a golden chance for you to come up with some questions that you are willing to learn about.(需要做的准备)

    If there is anything that I can do please let me know.(高分句型)

    Yours

    Li Hua

    【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.

    9.(2017北京)宽容是一种美德.人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊.面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光.

    某英文网站正在开展以"包容、谅解"为主题的征文活动.假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受.

    提示词语:hurtrealizeforgive(原谅),happy

    提示问题:What happened between you and him/her

    Why did you decide to forgive him/her

    How did you feel after forgiving him/her

        I still remember what happened between

    _____

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】高分句型:

    句型一:

    My father bought it for me last yearand I like it very much.去年我爸爸给我买的,我非常喜欢它.

    buy sth for sb为某人买某物

    句型二:

    Keeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us.记住一些不愉快对我们没有好处.

    keep sth in mind记住

    does no good to sb对某人没有好处

    【解答】YesterdayI had a fight with my friend TomHe took away my pen without my agreement.(我们之间发生的事)My father bought it for me last yearand I like it very much.【高分句型一】His behavior hurt meI was very angryFor his sorryhe wrote a card"Sorryplease forgive me"He felt ashamed for what he doAt last I realised that I was too stingyI choose to forgive him.(我为什么原谅他)He was very happy for my  forgivenessI was very happytoo.(我的感受)Through this matterwe became good friends

         As the Chinese old saying goes"To err is human"In our whole long lifeI believenobody can make no mistakesChildren may broke bowlsstudents may cheat or do something against the teacherand grownups may do something wrong on their work or even something against the lawKeeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us.【高分句型二】Letting the unhappy matters go brings happiness and pleasure back to our life.(建议)

    【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.

    10.(2017北京)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作.文中已给出内容不计入总词数.所给提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.

    题目

    假如你是李华,正在美国参加一个交换生项目.今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出,请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈MrsSmith 写一个留言条,告诉她你们要去哪里,去做什么,以及你回家的时间和方式.

    提示词语:parkmovie theatergo boatingwatch a movie

    提示问题:Where are you going

    What are you going to do

    When and how will you get home

    Dear MrsSmith

    My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon

     

    Li Hua

    【考点】提纲作文.

    【分析】高分句型:

    句型一:

    Finallywe are going to go boating in the lake.最后,我们在湖里划船.

    be going to do sth  打算做某事

    go boating 划船

    in the lake在湖里

    句型二:

    I'm sure to have a lot of fun.我肯定会玩得很开心.

    be sure to do sth一定会做某事

    have fun玩得开心

    a lot of 许多

    【解答】Dear MrsSmith

         My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoonI'm writing to tell you  that  we will meet in the park.(在哪见面)Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movieFinallywe are going to go boating in the lake.【高分句型一】(做什么)Don't worry about meWe will be back at 600 pm.  Jim's father will send me home by taxi.(回家时间和方式)I'm sure to have a lot of fun.【高分句型二】Waiting for my back

                                                                                                                            Yours

                                                                                                                            Li Hua

    【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力,涉及学生的词汇量,正确运用单词的能力,对所学语法的掌握程度,能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等.


    考点卡片

    1.提纲作文

    【概念】

    提纲作文是近几年中考英语书面表达的热点题型.命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查,使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强.

    1.提纲作文的特点

    提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出,请考生据此进行写作.这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定.因此,提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到,一个也不能遗漏.

    2.思维空间灵活、开放

    为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.因此,该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性,能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力.

    3.提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为:审题,明确文体形式;构思,根据提纲全面构思文章内容,根据内容构思词语和句型结构;写作完稿,根据构思的词语和句型结构,按照合理的顺序和语言要求,连句成文.注意句子间的正确联系,注意词语的丰富和句型的多样.

    【写作举例】

    假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈.

    要点:1、简单介绍妈妈.

    2、感激妈妈的理由.

    3、如何感激.

    注意:1、词数100左右.

    2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.

    3、开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数.

    Everyone has a person he wants to say thankyou to in his

    deep heartI owe my great gratitude to my mother

    案例分析

    第一步:审题

    本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你们学校英语报社征集以"我最感激的人﹣﹣妈妈"为主题的英语作文,请你根据要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈, 写作时注意以下几点:一、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:1、简单介绍妈妈. 2、感激妈妈的理由. 3、如何感激. 二、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.四.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.

    第二步:构思

    文章应该按照"总述﹣﹣分述"的结构分为四段段.

    第一段:点题,说明要感激的人.

    第二段:简单介绍妈妈.

    第三段:感激妈妈的理由.

    第四段:如何感激.

    第三步:完稿

    根据要点,按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料,力求拼写正确,行文连贯,连接自然,语言规范,词语丰富,句型多样,语法结构准确无误,表达简明扼要,慎用长难句.

    高分范文

    Everyone has a person he wants to say thankyou to in his deep heartI am very grateful to my mother

    My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a normal university.(高分句型一)She is a devoted mother as well as a kind and patient teacher.(简单介绍妈妈)She takes good care of me every dayespecially this year when I am in Junior ThreeShe often cooks delicious food for me and helps me clean up my room

    What's moreshe even accompanies me deep into the night every time I am doing my homework.(高分句型二)Most important of allwhenever I get upset or lose heartshe will encourage me until I have been cheered upShe always says"Heaven will always leave a door openAs long as you work hardyou will definitely succeed"(感激妈妈的理由)

    Now I try my best to study and spend almost all my time on my lessons in order to get into a good high school next yearThis is the best way for me to thank my mother.(如何感激)

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