【期末复习】（译林三起）小学英语 2023-2024学年六年级上册 专题训练 专题13 写作提分法精讲+单元话题写作精练(含范文)

这是一份【期末复习】（译林三起）小学英语 2023-2024学年六年级上册 专题训练 专题13 写作提分法精讲+单元话题写作精练(含范文)，共12页。试卷主要包含了具体描述等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第一招 “三步三要素法”写假期旅游类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头(引出话题)、具体描述、写结束语三个思维步骤写作，“三要素”指在具体描述时从人物去了哪里、怎么去的、做了什么活动三个方面描写。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头（引出话题) → 表达整体感受I/人名 had a ... hliday
→去了哪里 I/He/She/We went t ...
具体描述 →乘坐哪种交通工具 I/He/She/We went there by bus/train ...
→做了什么事情I/He/She/We visited the Great Wall ...
结束语 → 描述旅游后的心情I/He/She/We had a gd/ lvely time in ...
Ⅲ. 经典词句
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
Mary had a happy hliday last summer. She went t Beijing with her parents. They went there
开头 去了哪里 怎么去的
by train. She visited the Great Wall in the mrning. They ate Beijing Rast Duck. Her father said it
做了什么事情
was delicius. Then in the afternn, she went t the Summer Palace. She saw a beautiful lake. There
were sme bats n the lake. She had a gd time in Beijing.
结尾
提分练1：
请以“My favurite hliday”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
My favurite hliday






第二招 “三步两要素法”写介绍节日类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头(引出话题)、具体描述、写结束语三个思维步骤写作，“两要素”指在具体描述时写出节日时间、节日活动。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头（引出话题) → ... is my favurite festival.
→节日时间 It’s usually in ...
具体描述
→节日活动 We / I + 动词（短语）...
结束语 → We / I have a gd time n that day.
Ⅲ. 经典词句
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
My favurite festival is the Spring Festival. It’s usually in January r February. It’s the mst
开头 节日时间
imprtant festival in China. It’s Chinese New Year. On New Year’s Eve, we usually have a big
节日活动
family dinner and watch TV tgether. We eat dumplings. In the mrning, I wear my new clthes and
visit relatives and friends. I get lucky mney frm my parents and grandparents. I lve the Spring
Festival. I have a gd time at the Spring Festival.
结束语
提分练2：
请以“Plans fr Chinese New Year”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
Plans fr Chinese New Year
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第三招 “两类法”写规章制度类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“两类法”即抓住关键词：规章制度，用祈使句写应该做什么或禁止做什么。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头 → There are lts f rules in ...
→ 应该做的事 以动词原形开头
中间
→ 不应该做的事 以dn’t加动词原形开头
结尾 → I want t be a gd student. I will fllw the rules.
Ⅲ. 经典词句
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
Cmputer Rm Rules
There are lts f rules in the cmputer rm. Let’s lk at sme rules.
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开头
1. Keep quiet.
应该做的事 2. Listen carefully in class.
3. Keep it clean.
4. Dn’t eat r drink in the cmputer rm.
5. Dn’t talk r run in the cmputer rm.
不应该做的事 6. Take gd care f the cmputers.
7. Turn ff the cmputers when yu leave.
I want t be a gd student. I will fllw the rules.
结尾
提分练3：
请以“Public signs”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
Public signs
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提分练1：参考范文：
My favurite hliday
My favurite hliday is Children’s Day. It’s n the first f June. On this day, we ften have a party at schl in the mrning. We sing and dance. In the afternn, my friends and I ften g t the park, We can play ftball and fly kites there. We ften have a gd time n Children’s Day. Besides, n Children’s Day, my parents ften buy sme gifts fr me. Can yu tell me abut yur favurite hliday?
提分练2：参考范文：
Plans fr Chinese New Year
Tday is 26th January. It’s ging t be Chinese New Year. Tmrrw I’m ging t clean my huse. And I’m ging t buy sme new clthes and fd the day after tmrrw. In the evenng, I will help my mum make sme tangyuan and jiazi. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, I’m ging t have a big dinner with my family at hme. Then, I will g t shps t buy sme flwers. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I am ging t visit my friends and we’re ging t watch a lin dance in the evening. On the secnd day f Chinese New Year, I’m ging t visit my grandparents. They will give me a big red packet.
I’m ging t have a lt f fun at Chinese New Year.
提分练3：参考范文：
Public signs
Tday is Sunday. Li Ping is in the library. She is reading a bk abut signs. It is very interesting. Nw she knws that we shuldn’t shut but keep quiet in the library. We als can’t eat r drink in the library. In public places, we can’t litter. And we shuldn’t pick flwers in the garden. If we see a sign f “Danger”, we shuld be very careful and stay away frm it. Nw Li Ping can’t wait t let her classmates knw mre abut signs.
第二部分：单元话题写作
Unit 1 话题写作 “童话故事”
【话题分析】
本单元我们学习了如何用一般过去时来描述发生在过去的事情。现在，让我们根据以下提示并发挥想象，也编写一则英文小故事吧。不少于50词。
提示：1.Lng lng ag,there were/was. 2.He/She liked. 3.He/She culd.
【思路点拔】
写作时，首先要介绍故事发生的时间、地，点、人物、起因；然后，按照时间顺序或情节发展顺序详细描述故事的经过，可适当增加人物的心理描写，使故事更生动；最后，写清楚故事的结局。
注意：故事的写作一般采用一般过去时态进行描述，所以句中的谓语动词要用过去式。
【写作练习】





【参考范文】
A magic brush
Lng lng ag,there was a by in a small twn.He liked drawing very much.He culd draw beautiful pictures.One day,he met an ld man.The ld man was hungry.The by gave his bread t the ld man.The ld man gave the by a brush.The by culd draw real things with it."What a magic brush!"he said.Then he helped many peple.Hw happy he was!
Unit 2 话题写作
【话题分析】
本单元主要涉及的是英文日记的写作和相关内容，英文日记的写作有特定的格式，如下：
Sunday, 20th September, 2022 sunny
星期和日期写在左上角，天气写在右上角；
日期格式为：日月年（英式）或月日年（美式）都可以，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。
如要写星期，星期需紧挨日期，它既可以放在日期前面，也可以放在日期后面，星期也可以省略不写。
天气情况的描述：天气一般用一个形容词如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snwy等表示。
【小试身手】
根据提示，补全下面的日记，介绍某个周末你和你的家人或朋友做了什么。
要求：语言规范，信息内容完整，不少于5句话。
短语提示：cludy and windy, d my hmewrk, watch a film, d the husewrk, g t the park by bike, have a picnic, fly a kite, a lt f
【参考范文】
Unit 3 话题写作
【话题分析】
去年的国庆节假期你是怎样度过的？请以“Last Natinal Day hliday”为题，写一篇英文短文和大家分享一下吧！不少于5句话。
【思路点拨】
参考词汇：
Shanghai
Bund外滩
Shanghai Museum上海博物馆
Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Twer上海东方明珠塔
pan-fried prk buns(生煎包)
Beijing
the Great Wall长城
the Summer Palace颐和园
the Palace Museum故宫博物院
the Bird’s Nest鸟巢
the Frbidden City紫禁城
Nanjing
Xuanwu Lake Park玄武湖公园
Jiming Temple鸡鸣寺
Qinhuaihe River秦淮河
The Cnfucius Temple夫子庙
Presidential Palace总统府
【小试身手】








【参考范文】
Last Natinal Day hliday, I went t Shanghai by plane with my parents. It was sunny and cl there. We visited the Bund and the Shanghai Museum. We als went t Disneyland. There were a lt f peple. We tk many phts there. I ate much delicius fd in Shanghai. I like pan-fried prk buns very much. I had a gd time during the hliday.
Unit 4 话题写作
【题目要求】
请你根据以下图片提示，以“过去和现在”为主题，写一篇英语小短文对比布朗太太(Mrs Brwn)过去和现在在生活方式上的变化。不少于50词。
【小试身手】







【思路点拨】
这是一篇根据图片提示，描写布朗太太过去和现在在生活方式上变化的英语小短文。同学们在写作前，可以先仔细观察所给图片。因为是将过去和现在进行对比，所以在写作时需要注意一般过去时和一般现在时这两种时态的使用，同时还要注意文章是否连贯、完整等。
【参考范文】
Hi, everyne! I am Mike. Five years ag, my mther liked buying new clthes fr me. She always bught them frm shps. But nw she can buy things n the Internet, s she begins t buy clthes fr me n the Internet at hme. In the past, she used the telephne at hme and in the ffice t call peple. Nw she uses her mbile phne t call peple anywhere.
Unit 5 话题写作 “标识”
【话题分析】
请你根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语小短文，不少于50词。
提示：海伦星期日去图书馆查找有关标识的图书，她从中学到了很多。例如，她知道不同标识表示不同的意思。她还了解了在图书馆里应该保持安静，不能饮食，不能吸烟，也不能乱扔垃圾等。
【思路点拨】
这是一篇根据中文提示写有关标识的英语小短文。同学们在写作时可以先对所给的中文提示进行翻译，然后适当加上一些语句作为补充，使短文更加完整、连贯。由于“海伦”是第三人称单数，因此在写作时需要注意动词的第三人称单数形式的使用，还要注意情态动词后面接动词原形。
【写作练习】





【参考范文】
Tday is Sunday. It is sunny in the mrning. Helen is in the library nw. She wants t knw smething abut signs. Lk! She is reading bks abut signs. She learns a lt frm these bks. She knws different signs mean different things. She als knws we shuld keep quiet in the library, we can't eat r drink in it, we can't smke here and we can't litter either.
Unit 6 话题写作 “保护环境”
同学们，为了保持我们的城市干净，你们将会怎么行动呢?下列图片中的行为你们将会做哪些以及不会做哪些呢?请根据下列图片提示，以短文的形式谈谈你们的计划，可适当发挥想象。
要求：语句通顺，表达正确，不少于50词。






【参考范文】
Our city is s dirty nw. T keep ur city clean, we shuldn't pur rubbish int the rivers r thrw it n the streets. We shuld put rubbish in the bin. We shuldn't use t many plastic bags either. We shuld use paper bags r clth bags. We shuld plant mre trees t keep the air clean. We can als walk r ride bikes t schl r t wrk.
Unit 7 话题写作 “保护地球”
【话题分析】
请你根据以下图片提示,以“Hw t prtect the Earth”为题,用句型“We shuld/shuldn't ...”写一篇有关保护地球的英语小短文。不少于50词。
Hw t prtect the Earth
【思路点拨】
这是一篇要求根据图片以及参考句型写有关保护地球的英语小短文。同学们在写作时要先弄清楚每幅图片所表达的意思，并运用所提供的句型，适当加上一些语句作为补充，让文章更加完整、通顺。另外，写作时还需要注意可数名词与不可数名词的正确使用。
【写作练习】






【参考范文】
Hw t prtect the Earth
T prtect the Earth, we shuld save and reuse water. We shuld save energy. We shuld plant mre trees and save wd. We shuld use paper bags and glass bttles.
T prtect the Earth, we shuld nt waste water. We shuld nt drive s much because cars use a lt f energy. We shuld nt cut dwn t many trees because trees help keep the air clean. We shuld nt use t much plastic.
Unit 8 话题写作 “新年计划”
【话题分析】
春节就要到了，你有哪些计划呢? 请你以“我的春节计划”为主题，写一篇英语小短文，不少于50词。
【思路点拨】
这是一篇要求写春节计划的英语小短文。同学们可以先计划好自己在春节期间要做的事，写作时结合春节的特点，并适当补充一些活动以及自己在春节期间的感受，使文章更加完整、通顺。因为这篇文章写的是春节的计划，所以在写作时注意时态需要用一般将来时。
【写作练习】






【参考范文】
Chinese New Year is cming sn. It's the mst imprtant festival in China. I'm very excited,because I can d a lt f things. I am ging t buy sme flwers, new clthes and fd befre Chinese New Year. I'm ging t have a big dinner with my family n Chinese New Year's Eve. My parents are ging t give me sme red packets. I am ging t watch firewrks with my friends. I am ging t visit my grandparents n Chinese New Year's Day. I think I will have a gd time.
必备单词、短语
必备句型
介绍地点
Beijing, the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Lndn Eye
... went t ... with
介绍交通工具
bus, bike, plane, train
... went there by ...
具体活动
take phts, g shpping / swimming, climb the muntain, have a picnic, fly the kite
... tk phts f ...
表达感受
happy
... had a gd time in ...
必备单词、短语
必备句型
介绍喜欢的节日
favurite, festival, the Spring Festival, Thanksgiving Day...
My favurite festival is ...
... is my favurite festival.
节日时间
January, February, March...
It’s usually in ...
节日活动
meal, special, eat, mn cakes, delicius, say thank yu, g t see the dragn bat race, d dragn dances, hang lanterns, sing sngs
We have a special meal.
We eat mn cakes.
We g t see the dragn bat race.
We sing and dance.
抒发对节日的感情
happy, lve
I lve ... We have a gd time ...
必备单词、短语
必备句型
开头
rules
There are lts f rules in ...
规章制度
keep, quiet, eat, drink, clean, run, talk
肯定祈使句，以动词原形开头否定祈使句，以dn’t加动词原形开头
结尾
gd student, fllw the rules
I want t be a gd student. I will fllw the rules.
Mnday, 13th September
Last weekend, it . I was very busy.
On Saturday, I .
.
.
On Sunday, I .
.
.
I .
Mnday, 13th September
Last weekend, it cludy and windy . I was very busy.
On Saturday, I finished my hmewrk first. Then I watched a film with my parents in the Xinghu cinema.
On Sunday, I went t the park by bike with my friends in the mrning. Then, I had a picnic there. We flew a kite tgether.
I had a lt f fun.