中考英语一轮复习考点详解+专项训练专题38 书面表达之观点看法类（含解析）

这是一份中考英语一轮复习考点详解+专项训练专题38 书面表达之观点看法类（含解析），共42页。试卷主要包含了 加套语， 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明等内容，欢迎下载使用。

观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。
一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示＂启＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first f all, at first, in the first place, firstly, t begin with, t start with, recently, nw, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示＂承＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有secnd, in additin, besides, then, mrever, what’s mre, what’s wrse, fr example, certainly, bviusly, in ther wrds, still, at the same time, n dubt等。
3. 用于表示＂转＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, hwever, n the ther hand, n the cntrary, therwise, while, despite, in spite f等。
4. 用于＂合＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a wrd, in shrt, abve all, after all, finally, therefre, as a result, n the whle, in summary等。
总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——fr example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语（词块）
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
一、开头句型
As far as cncerned
It ges withut saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the prverb says ...
It has t be nticed that...
It’s generally recgnized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly t much t say that...
What calls fr special attentin is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s n denying the fact that... 毫无疑问，无可否认
Nthing is mre imprtant than the fact that...
What’s far mre imprtant is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in pint is ... As is ften the case...
As stated in the previus paragraph 如前段所述
But the prblem is nt s simple. Therefre... 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……
But it’s a pity that...
Fr all spite f the fact that... Further, we hld pinin that...
Hwever, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we shuld pay attentin t... nt (that) (that)... 不是……而是……
In view f the present statin... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentined abve... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
Hwever, we have t lk at the ther side f the cin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……
三、结尾句型
I will cnclude by saying... Therefre, we have the reasn t believe that... All things cnsidered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefre, in my pinin, it’s mre advisable...
It can be cncluded frm the discussin that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the abve chart as an example t illustrate this.
It remains t be further studied... There’s questin is hw...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The tpic f 主题 is becming mre and mre ppular recently. There are tw sides f pinins abut it. Sme peple say A is their favurite. They hld their view fr the reasn f 理由一 . What’s mre, 理由二 . Mrever, 理由三 . While thers think that B is a better chice in the fllwing three reasns. First, 理由一 . Secnd(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
Frm my pint f view, I think 我的观点 . The reasn is that 原因 . As a matter f fact, there are sme ther reasns t explain my chice. Fr me, the frmer (later) is surely a wise chice.
（2022·湖南岳阳中考真题）
某英语网站开展关于“Hw t Imprve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.__________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.
First, I need t exercise ne hur every day. It is bad t stay at hme and play games fr a lng time. Secnd, I shuld be respnsible fr myself and my family. I shuld be independent instead f depending n my parents t ften. Third, in face f the prblems, I have t take up the challenges and wrk them ut rather than run away frm them. Next, I will develp my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead f being interested in nthing. Last but nt least, I will cmmunicate with thers and be a gd team player.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．（2022·湖南衡阳中考真题）
随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。
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【答案】例文
Hw t Be a Happy Student
Everyne wants t be happy. As a student, what can we d t be happy? Here is my advice.
It’s necessary fr us t have learning gals. The gals can make us be clear abut what t d every day and live a busy and meaningful life. T be healthy is t be happy. S remember t have gd life habits and d mre exercise. We can d sme sprts, such as running r playing basketball. Als, we shuld be ready t help thers. When we help thse in truble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the mst imprtant fr us is t stay in a gd md. If we are in gd spirits, we can study better. We shuld have a psitive attitude and be ready t help thers.
I believe if we d s, we can have a happy life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．（2022年湖南怀化中考真题）
国家提出将“劳动教育（labr educatin）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；
2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It’s reprted that labr educatin will be included in the educatin f middle schls and primary schls in China. I think it’s necessary. Because it is gd fr ur health. We can relax frm the hard study by ding labr.
I usually d labr at hme such as ding the dishes, sweeping the flr and taking ut the rubbish. At schl I ften clean the classrm and water flwers. I can nt nly keep healthy, but als develp gd habits frm it.
As fr hw t run the curse in ur schl. I have sme ideas. The schl can ffer different kinds f labr classes t teach us hw t d the cleaning and grw plants. What’s mre, the schl can als hld cmpetitins abut the labr skills t see wh is the best. Such activities make ur schl life mre clrful and meaningful.
I am lking frward t taking the curse in the new term. I believe I will d well in it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动教育”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍劳动对我们的好处；第二段介绍自己在家里和在学校的劳动经历；最后一段提出对劳动教育课程的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．（2022·江苏苏州中考真题）
《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对该谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；
3. 你的感悟，
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have yu heard f the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ____________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Practice makes perfect
Have yu heard f the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we shuld practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able t perfrm it perfectly.
The practice f learning English is a gd example. We are nt living in an English speaking cuntry. S, in rder t learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English bks, ging t English crners, r cmmunicating with freigners. Yu can’t master English just by sitting at yur desk. As anther example, if we want t be skilled in using the cmputer, we als need t practice using it. Sme children becme little experts in cmputer, just because they play with it everyday. On the cntrary, if we just stick t bks, we will still feel cnfused when using cmputers. Judging frm the evidence ffered, we might safely draw the cnclusin that practice makes perfect.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．（2022·山西中考真题）
有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
Students’ Favrite Kinds f English Hmewrk
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
A pssible versin:A schl did a survey amng 1,267 students abut their favrite kinds f English hmewrk. Here are the results. ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A pssible versin:
A schl did a survey amng 1,267 students abut their favrite kinds f English hmewrk. Here are the results. 42% f the students like listening and speaking hmewrk best, and 29% enjy reading and writing. The percentage f the students wh like the hands-n prject is 22% and 7% chse ther kinds f hmewrk.
As fr me, I like the hands-n prject best because it cnnects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ag, we were asked t make an English pster abut Dragn Bat Festival. Then I cllected lts f infrmatin n the festival. Finally, nt nly did I finish the task perfectly, but als I gt a deeper understanding f ur clrful culture. In my pinin, it’s the hands-n prject that aruses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．（2022·四川广元中考真题）
理想（ideal）是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点：
1. 你的理想是什么？
2. 为什么有这样的理想？（不少于两点理由）
3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想？（不少于两点做法）
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点：
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名：
3. 词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：ideal adj. & n. 理想的：理想
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very imprtant fr us t be a middle schl student with an ideal. ___________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 My Ideal
In the new times it’s very imprtant fr us t be a middle schl student with an ideal.
I wish t be an English teacher when I grw up. First, I like English. I want t use it ften in my daily life. Secndly, I like wrking with students and enjy being asked questins and answering them. Thirdly, I’m gd at English. Nw what I shuld d is t study hard and get high marks in English test, and try t practice speaking English as much as pssible. Only in this way can I realize my dream f being an English teacher ne day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据写作要点提示，写一篇作文关于如何做一名有理想的时代新人。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时从三个方面，先介绍自己的理想，其次介绍原因，最后介绍如何实现自己的理想。文章要保持语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
7．（2022·四川乐山中考真题）
在中国共产主义青年团成立100周年之际，你校将开展“如何成为一名优秀学生”的征文活动。为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并倡议越来越多的同学入团。内容包括：
1.爱国爱家，了解团史；
2.与人和睦相处，乐于助人；
3.努力学习，养成良好习惯；
4.锻炼身体，保持健康。
注意：
1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4.参考词汇：the Cmmunist Yuth League f China ( CYLC ) 中国共产主义青年团；anniversary n.周年纪念日
This year is the 100th anniversary f the funding f the Cmmunist Yuth League f China. Our schl will hld an activity abut hw t be an excellent student. I think we shuld d the fllwing things._____________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文
This year is the 100th anniversary f the funding f the Cmmunist Yuth League f China. Our schl will hld an activity abut hw t be an excellent student. I think we shuld d the fllwing things.
First f all, it’s imprtant t lve ur cuntry and family. Thanks t them, we can live a happy life. Learning abut the histry f the Cmmunist Yuth League f China is necessary fr us. Secndly, we shuld get n well with ur teachers and classmates. Especially, when peple are in truble, we shuld be ready t help them. In rder t achieve ur Chinese Dream, we shuld try ur best t study hard and get gd habits. Finally, we shuld keep healthy by exercising.
In a wrd, if we are strng, ur cuntry will be strng. S I hpe mre and mre junir schl students will jin the Cmmunist Yuth League f China.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文，倡议同学加入中国共产主义青年团；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：文章已给出；第二段：阐述从4个方面（团史、与人相处、学习以及健康）倡议同学们入团；第三段：总结全文。
8．（2022·四川成都中考真题）
越来越多的人将阅读作为一种生活习惯。假如你是李欣，你校校园电视台英语栏目正在征集以阅读为主题的视频，请根据以下图示撰写视频文稿。
1. ___ways___ 2. ___family___
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80—100，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
Hell, everyne. I’m Li Xin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hell, everyne. I’m Li Xin. Mre and mre peple have a reading habit. S d I. I like reading very much. Because I think it can pen up a new wrld fr me. I can als learn mre frm it.
I like reading bks in the schl library. There are different kinds f bks in it. When travelling, I enjy reading n the plane t kill time. Nw we nt nly read paper bks, but als read e-bks. I prefer t read paper bks. Because spending t much time n screen is bad fr my eyes. Our family all like reading bks, especially my grandfather. He likes reading bks abut travelling. Amng the bks, I like histry bks best. Because I can learn mre abut Chinese culture. I always read bks at least half an hur befre bedtime.
S if yu like reading, take actin frm nw n.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。围绕“阅读”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段讲述阅读的重要性；第二段介绍自己的阅读习惯；最后一段呼吁人们现在就开始阅读。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．（2022·湖北十堰中考真题）
假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
提示词：schlyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. I am writing t tell yu sme things that have affected ur schl life.
There are many advantages in ur schl. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schlyard is beautiful and big. But there are still sme prblems. First f all, we are faced with endless hmewrk every day. Sme students have t stay up very late t deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secndly, as we all knw, clrful ut-f-class activities are f great imprtance t ur healthy grwth, but we can hardly spare time t participate in them.
In my pinin, we shuld have mre free time t balance ur study and life. We shuld have mre clrful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．（2022·云南昆明中考真题）
Me after the “duble reductin” plicy
“双减”政策(the “duble reductin” plicy)实施之后，同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。同时，大部分学校围绕文娱、体育、户外等主题开展了丰富多彩的活动，给大家的生活增添了生机与活力。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以”双减”为主题的征文活动，请用所给题目写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述一下”双减”后你的变化及感受。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
Dear Editr,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Editr,
I’m a middle schl student. Since the “duble reductin” plicy was released, my life has changed a lt.
I used t d my hmewrk till midnight and have n time fr my hbbies. At the same time, I always attended many training curses at weekends. S I had less time fr exercise and felt very tired all the time.
Hwever, with the supprt f the “duble reductin” plicy, thugh I g hme late, I have mre interesting activities I like. I feel very excited when I jin in these activities. Mrever, I can have mre time t cmmunicate with my parents because I have little hmewrk after schl. I have mre time t develp my hbbies.
I think the “duble reductin” plicy is very gd. I believe I can study happily and have fun at schl because f the “duble reductin” plicy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”之后自己的变化及感受等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
11．（2022·江西中考真题）
学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（persnality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hell, everyne! It’s my hnr t intrduce an astrnaut her — Wang Yaping. _______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu!
【答案】例文：
Hell, everyne! It’s my hnr t intrduce an astrnaut her — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 2-year-ld wman brn in a small village in Shandng Prvince. She likes playing sprts very much.
Wang Yaping is the first female astrnaut wh perfrmed spacewalk by Shenzhu XIII. She deserves ur highest respect fr her persistence in hard training. She lves her wrk and never gives up.
T learn frm Wang Yaping, I am ging t reflect n ur weak pints and wrk hard t d better. I’m ging t vercme the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard wrk can pay ff.
Thank yu!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。
2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
12．（2022·陕西中考真题）
学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以 “Schl Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。
参考词汇：
be patient (with), care abut, encurage, share, help, understand, lve, have fun, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Gd afternn, everyne!
I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”.___________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur time!
【答案】例文
Gd afternn, everyne!
I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”.
First, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me t study math better. Secnd, my classmates help me a lt. I’m nt gd at sprts. My friend Li Yun helped me with running and I ran faster. Als, I care abut my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cld and I tld her t drink mre ht water. She felt warm and thanked me.
I believe if we understand and help each ther, ur schl will be a better place.
Thank yu fr yur time!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Schl Is a Big Family”为题，并结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点描述同学和老师对我的帮助，以及我对他人的帮助；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2022·黑龙江·大庆市第三十六中学九年级期末）
朋友，是一首歌，驱散我们心中的阴霾。朋友，是一盏灯，指引我们前行的道路。朋友，是一支笔，记录我们人生的点滴。初中四年你一定交到了很多知心的朋友，请你以“Hw t make friends”为题，谈谈你的看法。
要求：
1. 书写工整，卷面整洁，行文连贯，结构完整；
2. 词数90-100；
3. 文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hw t make friends
Friends are imprtant in ur daily life. Here are sme tips fr yu t make friends.
First, it’s hard t make friends if yu stay alne all the time. S yu’d better take an active part in activities with peple arund. Secnd, dn’t be afraid t shw peple what yu are really gd at. Talk abut the things yu like best. Third, lk at peple in the eyes when yu talk t them. Be a gd listener. Let peple talk abut themselves befre yu talk abut yurself. Last but nt least, be friendly t a lt f peple. Try t help yur friends when they are in truble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
In this way, yu’ll have a bigger grup t chse frm and have mre chances t make friends.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，要求以“Hw t make friends”为题，谈谈如何交朋友。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时行文，人称不限；第一段点题；第二段谈如何交朋友，给出具体的建议和方法；第三段总结。行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
2．（2022·湖南衡阳·九年级期末）
随着科技的发展，电子书越来越受到人们的欢迎。假如今天的英语课上，你班同学分组就“Will paper bks be replaced by e-bks?”这一话题展开了讨论。你们小组的成员对此持反对意见，以下是反对的理由。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍你们小组的讨论结果并谈谈你自己的看法。
反对的理由：
1. 改变人们传统的阅读方式很难；
2. 读纸质书对眼睛伤害小一些：
3. 读纸质书更容易体验阅读的乐趣。
要求：
1. 内容须包括以上三个要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3. 词数不少于80，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Tday my class had a discussin abut whether paper bks will be replaced by e-bks r nt. Here is ur grup’s pinin. __________________________________________________________________ ___________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Tday my class had a discussin abut whether paper bks will be replaced by e-bks r nt. Here is ur grup’s pinin.
We dn’t think paper bks will be replaced by e-bks. Here are ur reasns. First f all, it’s difficult t change peple’s reading habits. Fr many peple, paper bks are always their first chice when they decide t read. Secndly, reading paper bks is better fr ur eyes. It’s easier t get shrt-sighted when we read e-bks. Thirdly, cmpared with e-bks, it can be easier t experience the fun f reading when we take ntes in paper bks.
As fr me, I like reading bth paper bks and e-bks. Because each f them has their wn gd pints and they ffer me different reading experiences.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，站在反方角度，谈谈为什么纸质书不会被电子书取代。
2.写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时首先承接开头，点明观点；然后给出理由；最后是总结并重申观点。注意主谓一致，语法正确，内容全面，条理清晰，无拼写和标点错误。
3．（2022·湖南·岳阳市岳阳楼区教育科学研究室九年级期末）
自“双减”政策进校园后，学生学校生活发生了一系列的变化，学校精心设计了丰富多彩的校园活动。给学业做减法，给成长做加法，多元的校园活动已成为孩子们每日翘首以盼的内容。请根据表格中的要点提示，以“Changes in ur schl life”为题写一篇短文，并简要阐述你的看法。
要求：1．词数80-100；必须包括所有提示信息，课适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总数
Great changes have taken place in students’ schl life since the “duble reductin” plicy（政策） came int ur schl. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Changes in ur schl life
Great changes have taken place in students’ schl life since the “duble reductin” plicy（政策） came int ur schl. In the past, we had t stay at schl fr nearly 9 hurs, but nw, we just stay at schl fr n mre than seven and a half hurs. That makes us nt s tired. Mst f the time, we had t have classes n weekends and during the hlidays. Hwever, we dn’t have classes during these time perids any lnger. That’s cl, and we can have mre free time f ur wn. As fr the after-schl activities, there were few and they were bring, in fact. Nw everything has changed. We have plenty f wnderful club activities, such as playing ball games, singing, dancing, painting, playing chess and s n.
The great changes really d a lt f gd t us students. We can n lnger be t tired r t stressful. The mst imprtant thing is that we can lead a mre clrful schl life nw.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“Changes in ur schl life”为题，说明学生的学习情况和校园生活的今昔对比，并阐述自己的观点或看法，因此写作时按说明文格式来写。
2. 写作指导：本文采用以第一人称为主来写，时态以一般过去时及一般现在时为主。写作时，第一段须承接短文开头，接着在四个方面进行今昔对比，写作时注意时态的正确使用；第二段阐述自己的观点并结尾。
4．（2022·山东·枣庄市台儿庄区教育局教研室九年级期末）
下面列举了一些家规，请从中任选两条家规，并根据你选的家规写一篇短文，表明你对这些家规的看法，并说明为什么。如果不同意这些家规，你认为应该怎样改变，词数100左右。
1. can’t play cmputer games
2. can’t watch TV
3. must be hme fr dinner every day
4. can’t stay ut late and must be back by ten.
注意：短文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
In China, family rules are an imprtant part f ur traditinal culture. In my family, there are sme rules. I can’t stay ut late and must be back by ten. I can’t watch TV. I think my parents are really strict with me. Smetimes I shuld be allwed t watch TV. Because I can learn much knwledge frm it. Smetimes if I g t a student party, I shuld be able t cme back later.
Althugh these rules are annying, they d make me develp gd habits and becme a better persn. Of curse, these rules als prve that my parents care abut me.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“家规”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的家规；第二段发表自己对家规的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．（2022·广东东莞·九年级期末）
相对于传统节日而言，世界上还有很多特色的节日，它们都有着自己独特的内涵和魅力。现《21世纪英文报》正在征集各地有特色的节日。阅读完以上文章，写一篇文章来介绍该节日。内容包括：
1. 表达你对上文中所描述的特色节日的看法；
2. 简要介绍你所知道的特色节日的寓意及其节日期间的活动；
3. 期待特色节日能够永久传承。
写作要求： 1. 必须包含以上写作内容，并适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰。
3. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。词数不少于80。
After reading the passage abut the three special festivals, I think _________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文：
After reading the passage abut the three special festivals, I think all these three festivals are interesting and clurful. I als think f a Chinese special festival—the Water-Sprinkling Festival.
The Water-Sprinkling Festival is the mst characteristic festival f the Dai peple. The festival is celebrated during April and usually lasts 3-7 days. Peple will pur the water t each ther, which means t wash away the unhappiness and the bad luck during the last year, s the gd thing will be arund. The mre water peple get, the mre luck they will get in the cming year. Peple feel great jy during this festival.
I sincerely hpe these special festivals can be passed n t the next generatin frever.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求表达对上文中所描述的特色节日的看法，并介绍自己知道的特色节日，包括寓意和该节日期间的活动，并最后点明期待所介绍的特色节日能够永久传承。节日要求要点全面覆盖，可适当扩充。
2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称和第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作时注意表达观点时的常用句式。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，保证内容清晰完整，条理清晰。
6．（2022·湖北武汉·九年级期末）学校校刊正在征集“家有家规”的征文。假如你是李华，请你以“My Family Rules”为题写一篇稿件，介绍父母为你制定的家规并发表自己的看法。
内容要点如下：
1. 诚实友善，尊重他人；
2. 分担家务，与父母沟通；
3. 每天锻炼半小时；
4. 允许安排周末时间；
5. 补充一两点个人看法。
注意：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：60-80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：respect v. 尊重 cmmunicate v. 沟通 allw v. 允许
My Family Rules
As the saying ges, “As a cuntry has its laws, a family als needs rules.” ____________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Family Rules
As the saying ges, “As a cuntry has its laws, a family als needs rules.” My parents make rules fr me, t. They expect me t be hnest and kind. And I shuld respect thers. At hme, I need t share the husewrk. When I have prblems, I’m suppsed t cmmunicate well with them fr advice. What’s mre, I have t exercise 30 minutes every day. I’m allwed t plan my weekend. Smetimes, I’m trying t make my wn chices and decisins, that’s great!
In a wrd, family rules help me grw up happily.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述父母制定的家规，讲述在为人处世、与人交往、家务活、身体锻炼、周末安排等方面的具体要求。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，从至少五个方面进行讲述家规的具体要求，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
7．（2022·河北·石家庄二十三中九年级期末）
随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动。假定你是某校学生，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。
参考词汇：be addicted t沉迷于
注意：
（1）内容须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
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【答案】例文
Tday, many peple, especially yung peple, are phne freaks. They are addicted t their mbile phnes. They always spend t much time chatting r watching mvies n their mbile phnes. They have less time t cmmunicate with their friends and family members. They ften feel anxius withut mbile phnes.
Depending n mbile phnes t much is a kind f illness. It’s bad fr yur health. Lking at mbile phnes t ften is bad fr ur eyes. Playing with mbile phnes is a waste f time and gets in the way f study.
Phnes can help us cmmunicate mre easily and knw mre abut what’s happening arund the wrld. If we can use them at prper time and in prper situatins, they can help us have a better and happier life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求针对沉迷手机这一问题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍沉迷手机的表现；第二段介绍沉迷手机的危害；第三段给出自己的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
8．（2022·江西上饶·九年级期末）
学习第二语言是很重要的事情,有人认为如果要学好第二语言就得去国外，而另一些人认为留在国内同样可以学好它。你的看法是什么呢？请根据以下表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法并说明原因。
要求:
1、短文应使用所给的写作提示,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2、不少于80词,可适当发挥;
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Shuld students learn a secnd language by ging abrad r staying at hme? Different peple have different ideas. In my pinin, ging abrad t learn a secnd language is better. The fllwing are my reasns.
First, ging abrad t learn a secnd language is gd fr practicing the spken language. We can practice speaking the language with native speakers every day and this can help us imprve it greatly.
Secnd, studying a secnd language abrad is an excellent way t help students learn abut the freign culture and custms. And we can get a new experience at the same time. Finally, freign language curses are helpful and als fun.
In a wrd, ging abrad t learn a secnd language is better in many ways.
I hpe my pinins can be helpful t yur secnd language study.
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于材料作文。就“如果要学好第二语言是要去国外还是留在国内”这一话题表达自己的看法并说明原因；文章给出的表格列出了两种观点并给出了这些观点相应的理由，学生们需按照表格表明自己的观点和理由并进行合理地拓展，把文章写得更具体、更充实。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时应用一般现在时，以第一人称展开叙述，注意格式规范，符合作文的语境表达。第二点：写作的开头要表明自己的观点，接下来按照材料给出理由，并可适当发挥给出别的合理的理由，最后再次表明自己的观点并总结全文。第三点：内容要包含所要求的提示信息，并在此基础上选用合适的连词、短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
9．（2022·四川宜宾·九年级期末）
近日，教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，根据不同学段制定了“整理与收纳”、“家庭清洁、烹饪” 等日常生活劳动目标，可见劳动在学生学习生活中的重要性。假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter给你发来电子邮件，询问你中国孩子做家务的情况。请你根据以下写作提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
要求：80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1.你在家做家务的情况；2.部分中国孩子很少做家务，因为……3.你对孩子做家务的看法及原因；4.你想了解他们国家孩子做家务的情况。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t get yur e-mail. Nw let me tell yu smething abut kids ding chres in China._____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What d yu think f ding chres? I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t get yur e-mail. Nw let me tell yu smething abut kids ding chres in China.
As fr me, I ften help my parents d chres, such as taking ut the rubbish, ding the dishes and taking care f my little brther. Hwever, a number f Chinese children hardly ever d chres. Sme f them think ding chres makes them tired and is a waste f time. Sme f them are busy taking parts in kinds f after-schl activities. Sme even think it’s their parents’ jb t d them. But I disagree with these ideas. I think children shuld share chres. Why? Because it can help us understand ur parents. Als, it can make us becme smarter. What’s mre, ding chres can help us learn t be independent. It’s better fr ur life in the future.
What d yu think f ding chres? I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“中国孩子做家务”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己在家做家务的情况，部分中国孩子做家务的情况和原因，自己对做家务的看法和理由，并在最后说明想了解彼得国家的孩子做家务的情况，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
写作指导：本文是书信，注意格式。写作时应该使用第一人称。时态应运用一般现在时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分以回信的方式引出要阐述的话题；第二部分根据要求展开，分述题目中要求的内容，要具体，要阐明理由；第三部分，表达感受，希望了解对方的有关情况。
（2022·河北·曲阳县教育和体育局教研室九年级期末）
如今随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承正面临着巨大的挑战，有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课，但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike，请你用英语写一封邮件，给你们学校的英语报投稿，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。
内容要点：
1. 你的观点：很有必要开设传统文化课。
2. 你的理由：是中国文化之根，激励民族自豪感，传播中国文化。
3. 你的建议：号召更多学校开设此课程。
注意：
1. 词数80-100；
2. 你的理由：是中国文化之根，激励民族自豪感，传播中国文化等等。
3. 邮件中不能出现于本人相关的信息。
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
提示词：根rt n. 激励bst v.
Dear editr,
As we all knw, Chinese traditinal culture is facing a great challenge because f the rapid develpment f internatinal technlgy nwadays.______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Mike
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear editr,
As we knw, Chinese traditinal culture is facing a great challenge because f the rapid develpment f internatinal technlgy nwadays. In my pinin, it’s necessary fr schls t set up traditinal culture classes.
First, traditinal culture is the rt f Chinese. As Chinese, we shuldn’t give up ur traditinal culture and run after Western culture. Secnd, traditinal culture classes can give students chances t knw mre abut ur natin. They can raise their sense f natinal pride. Last but nt least, setting up traditinal culture classes can spread and develp ur Chinese culture.
All in all, it is f great imprtance t set up traditinal culture classes in schls. Let’s call n mre schls t set up traditinal culture classes!
Yurs,
Mike
【详解】题干解读：本文要求根据要点提示，给英语报写一封邮件，谈谈自己对开设传统文化课的看法。
写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一、三人称；写作时，首先承接开头介绍中国传统文化当前面临挑战，点出自己的观点，即很有必要开设传统文化课；然后具体阐述为什么要开设传统文化课；最后是号召更多学校开设此课程。注意主谓一致，叙写的顺序要符合逻辑，无语法和拼写错误。
（一）
学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。
Our City f the Future
What will ur city be like in 2050? ________________________________________________________
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【答案】 Our City f the Future
What will ur city be like in 2050? I think it will be quite different frm nw. The living envirnment will be greatly imprved in the fllwing ways.
The huses will be bth green and smart. Everything will be made by envirnmental-friendly materials. What’s mre, the huse will be cnnected t the shps and hspitals s that yu can rder all kinds f services withut ging ut. Mst f the time peple will wrk at hme and they will have fewer wrking hurs because f new technlgies. If yu want t g travelling, there will be n traffic jam at all. Yu can take different kinds f transprtatins, such as the flying buses: and the driverless cars. The mst exciting thing fr students will be the widely use f E-bks and VR technlgy at schl. As a result, there will be paperless exams and mre fun in learning.
Our city in 2050 will be full f hpe and we shuld wrk hard t realize it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；
第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；
第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s mre而且
②such as比如
③As a result结果
④be full f 充满
[高分句型]
①the huse will be cnnected t the shps and hspitals s that yu can rder all kinds f services withut ging ut.（s that引导的目的状语从句）
②If yu want t g travelling, there will be n traffic jam at all.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（二）
假设你是某“学生”，昨天在街上乱丢垃圾，被环卫人员发现并被告知要注意环保。请以此事为题材写一篇记叙文，略谈自己对这件事的感想，并就如何保护环境发表四点看法。
参考词汇： frm smewhere, dustman(环卫人员), feel shameful(羞耻), realize(意识到)
注意事项：
1、包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范，词数 80 左右；
3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Yesterday when I was walking n the street, I threw sme rubbish abut. Just as I was leaving, I heard….__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Yesterday when I was walking n the street, I threw sme rubbish abut. Just as I was leaving, I heard smene shuting at me frm smewhere. I fund he was a dustman. He tld me t prtect the envirnment. I felt very shameful. I realized I have dne smething wrng. I think this city is ur hme. It is ur duty t prtect the envirnment.
As a student, I think we shuldn’t thrw abut the rubbish. We shuld reuse water and recycle used paper and plastic bags. We shuld turn ff the electricity when we leave the rm.
Please lve ur envirnment frm nw n.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写自己的一次经历；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括自己的行为以及通过这次行为受到的教育等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的具体的行为以及对自己的懊悔；
第二步，介绍作为一名学生应该如何保护环境；
第三步，最后呼吁人们都要保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
① shut at对……大喊
② tell sb t d sth告诉某人做某事
③ turn ff关闭
[高分句型]
① Yesterday when I was walking n the street, I threw sme rubbish abut.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think this city is ur hme.（省略that的宾语从句）
（三）
为响应我市“创建国家卫生县城”的号召，近日，许许多多的市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“我的城市我来建”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
要求：1． 80词左右（首句已给出，不计算在总词数内）。2． 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息。
参考词汇：citizen市民， traffic jams交通拥堵
Let’s Build a Green City Tgether
As a citizen, it’s ur duty t help build a green city. ______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Let’s Build a Green City Tgether
As a citizen , it’s ur duty t help build a green city.
We can avid the traffic jams and reduce the air pllutin by riding bikes r walking. We mustn’t thrw rubbish r spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep ur city clean and tidy s that we can live a cmfrtable life. And we’d better plant mre trees t prtect the envirnment and make ur city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it int the dustbin wherever I g. I can als save the energy by turning ff the lights when leaving the rm.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“具体做法以及你的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍如何建造绿色城市；
第二步，联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①had better最好
②pick up捡起
③turn ff关闭
[高分句型]
①In this way, we can keep ur city clean and tidy s that we can live a cmfrtable life. (s that引导的目的状语从句)
②In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it int the dustbin wherever I g. (wherever引导的地点状语从句)
（四）
假如你是李华，你的笔友 David 想要了解 “双减” 政策（duble reductin）自颁布实施以来，你的学习、生活发生了怎样的改变。请根据以下思维导图给 David 回复邮件，向他介绍“双减” 政策对你的学习压力、亲子关系和课外活动等方面有何影响并谈谈你对“双减” 政策的看法。词数 80 左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含图示所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名等。
Dear David,
Hw is it ging? As yu knw, my life is different since duble reductin plicy was released. Let me tell yu smething abut it. ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Hw is it ging? As yu knw, my life is different since duble reductin plicy was released. Let me tell yu smething abut it.
I used t have much hmewrk, but nw I have less hmewrk than befre and the hmewrk is less bring and mre creative. Therefre, I have mre free time t develp my hbbies, such as reading and drawing. I ften play ftball with my classmates after schl.
What’s mre, I can spend mre time with my family ding family activities, such as ging hiking, which helps imprve ur relatinship a lt.
In my pinin, it’s truly necessary t have the plicy because it can develp ur interests. Mre imprtantly, ur life als becmes clurful.
Lking frward t yur reply sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的内容，并在此基础上适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述“双减” 政策对你的学习压力和课外活动的影响；
第二步，具体阐述“双减” 政策对亲子关系的影响；
第三步，表达你对“双减” 政策的看法，认为“双减”政策是有必要的。
[亮点词汇]
① used t d 过去常做
② develp hbbies 培养爱好
③ spend time ding sth. 花时间做某事
④ in my pinin 在我看来
[高分句型]
① I can spend mre time with my family ding family activities, such as ging hiking, which helps imprve ur relatinship a lt. （which引导非限制性定语从句）
② In my pinin, it’s truly necessary t have the plicy because it can develp ur interests. （“It is +adj.+t d sth.”句型）
（五）
看图作文：自从2021年党中央颁布“双减”政策以来，孩子们的课余生活变得丰富多彩了。请看下面这张照片，这是大明一家在公园里度周末时照的。假如你是照片中画画的男孩大明（Daming），请以“A Happy Family Day”为题，写一篇英语短文，准备在班里作文课上展示。
写作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要内容，可适当发挥，增加一些细节，写成一篇连贯、通顺的文章；
2.文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
参考词汇：
A Happy Family DayHi, everyne. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less hmewrk nw. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Happy Family Day
Hi, everyne. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less hmewrk nw. S I went t the park with my family last Sunday. Lk! This is a picture f my family in the park. My father was taking pictures. My mther was reading. My grandpa and grandma were sitting n the grass and drinking tea. The little by wh was drawing is me. My brther was riding a bike. My sister was playing with her tys. We enjyed urselves in the park.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和过去进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据图片，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍周末活动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。要分别介绍每位家庭成员做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“玩得很开心”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a picture f一张……的照片
②sit n the grass坐在草地上
③enjyed urselves玩得开心
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①I feel happy because we have less hmewrk nw.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The little by wh was drawing is me.（wh引导的定语从句）
1. 你对劳动教育的看法
be gd fr health;
relax frm the hard study…
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受
at hme: d the dishes; sweep the flr…
at schl: clean the classrm; water flwers…
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议
ffer different kinds f labr classes;
hld cmpetitins abut labr skills…
WORD BANK
aruse interest 微发兴趣
enrich experiences 丰富经历
prmte cmpetence 提升素养
优点
不足
优秀的老师
课外活动少
友好的同学
休息时间短
美丽的校园
……
你的建议……
写作要点
具体内容
1. Persnal infrmatin
●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandng Prvince
●Hbby: sprts
2. Persnality
根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Yur plans
①________
②________
…
在校时间
作业时限
假日安排
课外活动(after-schl activity)
过去
9个小时
4个小时
周末和节假日上课
少而乏味
现在
不超过7个半小时
不超过1个半小时（90分钟）
不上课
丰富多彩，如：打球、唱歌、跳舞、绘画、下棋等社团活动
表现
沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天、看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少……
危害
对健康不利；影响学习……
你的建议
……
study abrad
study at hme
practice speaking the secnd language
stay with the family
learn abut the freign culture and custms
save mney
...
...
主题
Let’s Build a Green City Tgether
具体做法
方式
益处
1． 骑车、徒步出行
1． 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
2． 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰
2． 让城市变得干净舒适
3． 植树造林
3． 美化城市，保护环境
你的建议
联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议
Family members
Activities
grandma, dad, mum, Daming, brther, sister
take pictures/phts 照相
paint/draw a picture 画画
sit n the grassland 坐在草地上
drink/have tea 喝茶
ride a bike 骑自行车
read a bk 看书
play with (tys/a pet...)玩（玩具/宠物……）