专题02 三个句式搞定情感描写-备考2024年新高考英语读后续写六大招式

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万能句式一：adj 1 and adj 2, 主句，ding… / 独立主格结构
句式来源：Tired and hungry, he went hme, nt saying a wrd.
他回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。
用法示例：
1. 他站起身来领奖。
He std up t accept the prize.
句式升级：Surprised and delighted, he std up t accept the prize, feeling prud. 又意外又开心，他站起身来去领奖，感到非常自豪。
2. 他交了很多朋友。
He made a lt f friends.
句式升级：Mdest and easy-ging, he sn made a lt f friends, getting alng well with them. 因为谦虚，随和，他很快交到了很多朋友，并和他们相处地很融洽。
3. 我们早早在校门口集合。
We gathered at the schl gate early.
句式升级：Eager and enthusiastic, we gathered at the schl gate early, chatting and laughing all the time. 满怀热情和渴望，我们早早就在校门口集合，又说又笑。
用法体验：
非常兴奋，我们全神贯注地和同学商讨着并写下我们的建议，希望能帮助解决这个问题。
Excited and whle –hearted, we were discussing with ur classmates and writing dwn ur suggestins, hping t help slve the prblem.
极度惊讶和困惑，我一篇接一篇地看着日记，每一篇表现的主题都很相似。
Greatly surprised and cnfused, I read diary after diary, each expressing a similar theme.
3. Thrilled and enraptured, Jane quickened pace and sprinted t the helicpter, knwing that she wuld be rescued eventually. 简欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升机冲去，她知道自己终于获救了。
4. Satisfied and cntent, my sister stared at the flwers, regarding them as the mst marvelus wrk in the wrld. 心满意足的，姐姐看了看这些花，认为它们是世界上最奇妙的作品。
用法实战：
1. 既害怕又无助，他一动不动站在那好一会，不敢相信刚才发生的一切。
Scared and helpless, he std still fr a mment, nt believing what had just happened.
2. 又绝望又疲惫，Jane 跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。
Desperate and exhausted, Jane knelt dwn, with tears rlling dwn her cheeks.
3. 我们好奇而兴奋, 迫不及待地想要和外国学生交换礼物，以表达我们彼此真挚的友谊。
Curius and excited, we culdn’t wait t exchange gifts with the freign students，cnveying ur sincere friendship t each ther.
4. 非常兴奋，我们全神贯注地和同学商讨着并写下我们的建议，希望能帮助解决这个问题。
Excited and whle –hearted, we were discussing with ur classmates and writing dwn ur suggestins, hping t help slve the prblem.
5. 句式改造He walked int the classrm. (害怕)
Cautius and even a bit scared, he swiftly slipped int the quiet classrm, bag n back and sweat n frehead.
万能句式二：量词 + 表情感状态的名词 + 动词 + sb
常用量词：a burst / wave / fld / surge / sense f…
常用动词：seize, grasp, take hld f，crawl／creep爬，swallw吞噬，well up涌出，surge 涌动，sweep ver 冲；卷，verwhelm充溢，压倒
用法示例：
1. 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
When she knew the result f the test, she felt excited.
句式升级：The instant she was infrmed f the result f the test, a surge f excitement seized her.
2. 她伤心不已。
She felt extremely sad.
句式升级：She was seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help crying bitterly.
3. 我感到很害怕。
I felt very scared.
句式升级：I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr with my palms sweating.
用法体验：
1. 看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。
At the sight f his cnfident smile, a sense f jy swept ver / flded ver me.
2. 听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
Hearing what he said, Alice grinned frm ear t ear, a wave f happiness flding ver her.
3. 电话里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头, 一阵愧疚向我袭来, 脸上发烫。
Hearing his wrds n the phne, I hung my head shamefully, a wave f guilt sweeping ver me with my face burning.
句式变化：ding…, sb. felt a great sense f + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging thrugh sb, ding… “某人感到一股强烈的在内心升腾、奔涌。” 句首可以加上ding sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因；句尾可以加上ding sth或which, 表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
1. Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl, Jane felt a great sense f jealusy welling up in her heart and surging thrugh her，thrwing the tea cup at the girl.
2. Seeing his daughter safe and sund, he felt a great sense f relief welling up in his heart and surging thrugh him.
3. Swing their skirts and imaging they were the mst attractive wmen at the ball, the wives felt a great sense f pride welling up in their heart and surging thrugh them.
万能句式三：（ding…），s + adj / adv +部分倒装 + that…, (ding…)
用法示例：
1. Jane忍不住哭了。
Jane culdn’t stp crying.
句式升级：Recalling the scene, s regretful was Jane that she culdn’t stp crying, tears sparking ut her eyes.
回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。
2. 小鹿很害怕。
Sptting this, s frightened was the deer that she shivered and trembled all ver like a leaf.
看到这儿，小鹿吓得像一片叶子一样浑身颤抖。
3. 看到那头狼，我很害怕。
Catching sight f the frightening wlf, s scared did I feel that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。
用法体验：
1. 保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。
Recalling these hurtful wrds, s irritated was Paul that he strmed ut and slammed the dr heavily, striding away withut lking back.
2. 杰克激动得走上舞台，给了妻子一个温暖的拥抱。
S thrilled was Jack that he stepped int the stage, giving his wife a warm hug.
技法综合体验：
1. 听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来，眼睛像星星一样闪烁。
Hearing this gd news, he jumped up in happiness, with his eyes sparkling like shining stars.
2. 亲眼看到他的榜样, Jayce开心到说不出话来，只能站在那里，嘴巴张的很大。
Seeing his rle mdel in the flesh, Jayce was t thrilled t say a single wrd but stand here with his muth pen wide.
跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。
Having tld the teacher the truth, she sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crssed and her heart punding like a drum.
4. 用灼热的目光怒视着我，他几乎控制不住自己的怒火，声音因愤怒而颤抖。
Glaring at me with burning eyes, he culd hardly/scarcely cntain his rage, his vice trembling with anger.
5. 觉得冷得无法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道该如何应对这种可怕的情况。
Feeling unbearably cld and extremely exhausted, Jane was quite at a lss as t hw t cpe with the terrible situatin.
6. 一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。
In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was tuched beynd wrds.
7. 听到这话，Bb感到很尴尬，扭动并使劲揉搓他的手，似乎是想在这刺骨的冬日里取暖。
On hearing this, Bb became embarrassed, twisting and rubbing his hands () ver and ver again seemingly t get warm in this freezing winter.
8. 从未想过我会陷入如此的两难境地，我感到无比尴尬和恐慌。
Standing frzen as ice, never had I thught abut being trapped in such a dilemma that I was flded with verwhelming awkwardness and panic.
素材积累（转）
开心：
Learning the children’s idea, Mrs. Meredith was s 1. verjyed (高兴的) that she smiled brightly. Then, the children gt dwn t preparing ppcrn 2. cheerfully (高兴地). With a basket f ppcrn, they left fr the Bernard’s 3. jyfully (高兴地) t share with Bernard the gd plan. Hearing what they said, Bernard 4. danced with jy (高兴地雀跃), with tears filling his eyes. At the sight f the basket f ppcrn, his parents were als 5. seized with jy (非常高兴). Later, 6. much t his delight (另他非常高兴的是), the ppcrn was s tasty that it sn sld ut. He sn returned, his whle face 7. beaming with delight（高兴得满脸通红）. 8. Laughter lingered arund the rm. (笑声在房间里萦绕）
伤心
I was selected t represent my schl in the appraching cntest this year. But I was s prud that I neglected the imprtance f practicing fr the cntest. On the day f the cntest, I began t lse cnfidence in myself and suffered frm stage fright. In the end I walked ff the stage, 1. my eyes filled with tears (眼里饱含泪水).Finally, results were annunced after the cntest. I did nt win any prizes. I bit my bttm lip 2. with sadness filling her heart (心里充满悲伤). I dragged my heavy legs 3. with a sinking heart (心情沉重) and mved ut f the lecture hall. 4. I hung my head in sadness, great srrw cluding my eyes (我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼). On entering the classrm, 5.disappintment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed dwn my cheeks（悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落）. The next fllwing days, I felt like she was 6. flating in an cean f sadness. (我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里), nt wanting t d anything.
3. 生气
The dr pened and in came a yung man. Shcked t see us packing things int ur suitcase, the yung man 1. let ut a yell f anger, with his eyes shining with annyance（愤怒地大叫了一声,眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒。）. 2. He was in a furius passin, and went stamping abut（他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去）. He accused us f illegally entering his rm and threatened t call the plice, which scared my children t death. Just at that mment, my husband returned after his grcery shpping. Hearing the man's rude wrds, 3. a fire f rage burning in his heart（一股怒火在心中燃烧）. It seemed that n settlement wuld be pssible, and the situatin reached a biling pint. 4. Quarrels fueled his anger and he erupted like a vlcan（争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了）. Eventually, 5. unable t cntain his anger, my husband strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him（无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间,狠狠地摔上门）.
害怕
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts. 1. A burst f hrrr held me entirely in its pwer, and I was unable t mve an inch (恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了). 2. Extremely frightened/panicked, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating (惊恐不已,我觉得两腿发抖,手心冒汗). Beside me was my wife, wh was rted t the grund, 3. wh was rted t the grund, frzen with fear (吓呆了). At the sight f the plar bear’ bldy muth, 4. she was nearly dead with fright (吓得要死）.The furry creature launched an attack n the fence, instantly leaving a narrw pening n it. 5. We felt that the bld in ur bdy frze (我们感觉浑身血液凝固了）because f the terrible sight. Our thrats tightened and ur knees felt weak. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air.
5. 紧张
When I finished her testing perfrmance, I thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result wuld be psted n the dr f the chral rm the next day.1. I culdn’t fall asleep , tssing and turning in bed fr a whle night（我在床上辗转反侧了一整夜，无法入睡）By the next mrning, I hurried t the schl and 2. nervusly（紧张地）glanced at the list n the dr f the chral rm, 3. feeling as if my heart were in my muth (感觉好像我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了）. There, at the tp f the list was psted my name. Inspired, I practiced even harder fr the day f perfrmance. Finally the day fr the perfrmance came. When I was standing backstage, 4. nervusness/tensin came flding ver me (紧张感席卷全身）.When my name was called I culd 5. feel butterflies in my stmach (我感到心里忐忑不安）. My trembling legs brught me nstage, and I culd 6. feel my palms sweating and heart racing (我手心冒汗,心跳加速。）. The hall crwded with audience made me even mre 7. uneasy（不安的）. 8. My heart was punding/thumping hard, as if it were abut t pp (我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了). At that mment, my eyes parked n Mr. Butler at the crner. He ndded and exchanged a determined glance with me, which timely put my heart back in place. With the music rising, I began my singing. When I finished, the auditrium erupted int a sea f cheers.
感动
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. We decided t camp alng the river. The views n the jurney were surprisingly beautiful, 1. a wave f excitement taking hld f Mm (妈妈激动不已). Every time we gt t a new place，Mm culd hardly 2. cntain her excitement (抑制兴奋), and wuld 3. cheer up (振奋起来) like a child. She wuld get ff the car, laughing and dancing arund 4.with excitement (兴奋地).The mment we arrived at the camping place, 5. letting ut a scream f thrill (激动得尖叫起来), Mm lcated a clearing and immediately guided us t pitch the tent 6. With eyes glittering \twinkling with excitement (眼里闪着激动的光芒)，we sat n the grass, enjying the splendid nature.
尴尬
By nw we were standing in the lng hliday line t pay the bill. and I figured it was a gd chance. I threw myself n the grund, screaming, “l want that telephne.” ver and ver again. “Becky, yu’d better get up at nce”, my mther said with a trembling vice, 1. embarrassment written in her red face (涨红的脸上写满了窘迫).Turning a deaf ear t her, I was still in full tantrum. 2. feeling the bld rushing t her face (羞愧不已), my mther std there, 3. feeling the bld rushing t her face (觉得血液涌上脸颊). She suddenly lay dwn beside me n the flr, likewise kicking and screaming ut fr a string f such items as she was eager t pssess. Seeing that, 4. I became increasingly embarrassed and culd feel my heart thumping wildly, my face burning badly (我越来越尴尬，能听见自己心跳加速的声音，脸烧得厉害).5. All the air seemed t disappear and I felt as if the whle wrld was watching us (所有的空气似乎都消失了，我觉得整个世界都在注视着我们). “Mama, stp. Mama, get up.” I tearfully pleaded. She gave me a lk and rse up, brushing the dust frm her clthes.
惊讶
I threw myself n the grund, screaming, “I want that telephne.” Over and ver again. All the Christmas shppers lked n 1. in astnishment（震惊地） . 2. A spark f surprise flashed acrss my mther’s face（脸上闪过一丝惊奇）, she rdered angrily, "Get up right nw." Turning a deaf ear t her, I was still in full tantrum. 3. What shcked me was that（令我震惊的是） was that my mther suddenly lay dwn beside me n the flr, likewise kicking and screaming ut fr a string f such items as she was eager t pssess. Seeing that, I was 4. numb with shck, as if rted t the grund（我呆住了，动弹不得） . All the n-lkers glued their eyes t us, 5. with jaws drpping t the grund（惊掉下巴）. 6. Dumbfunded（目瞪口呆） initially, they then burst int thunderus applause, shwering praise n my mther.