上海高考英语写作分类训练：开放式作文

开放性作文

1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你们学校的英语报正在征稿，请你以“A Memorable Experience in Senior High School”为题写一篇短文，介绍过去一学期中令你难忘的一段校园生活经历以及你从中获得的体验、认识或感悟。(注：请勿透露本人真实姓名和班级。)

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2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

针对中学生在校期间是否需要统一穿着校服，大家看法不一。说说你是赞成还是反对统一校服，并且说明你的理由。

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3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

从“食物选择”的角度，谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法，怎样做到“低碳生活”，提出合理建议，并说明理由。

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4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

某英文网站刊登了一则征文广告如下：

按照以上要求写一篇文章。

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5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括：

1) 你印象最深的一件事情；

2) 此事对你的启发和影响。

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6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：

1. 对你校社团进行分类；

2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。

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7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120~150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是森林中学的学生牛威，最近你们学校的校报正在举办“我理想中的教室”征文活动，打算在学生中征稿。请你写一篇文章投稿，你的文章必须包括：

1.描述你理想中的教室

2.谈谈你这样设想的原因

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8．课文《2050》向我们展示了2050未来的生活。有同学认为机器人给我们带来很多方便，也有同学认为机器人会带来很多麻烦。请你谈谈未来机器人的带来的利弊，并谈谈你的看法。

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9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：

描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。

(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)

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10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请结合生活实际，谈一下你对乔布斯过说的这句话“Stay Hungry, Stay Foolish”的理解。

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1．A Memorable Experience in Senior High School

In the last term, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was that my class prepared for a team debate competition.

In order to win the competition, we all went for it during the weeks before it. We often prepared debate materials after school. Although it was a hard task, every participant took it seriously and did their best to get ready for it. Thanks to our effort, finally we won the second prize. Hearing the exciting news we were all cheered with joy.

This activity reminded me of an old saying: Chance favors the prepared mind. Hard work as it is, during the course of preparation we developed a deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding among us.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“高中一段难忘的经历”为题介绍过去一学期中令你难忘的一段校园生活经历以及你从中获得的体验、认识或感悟。

【详解】1.词汇积累

许多：many→plenty of

为了：in order to→so as to

比赛：competition→match

准备：get ready for→prepare for

2.句式拓展

句式升级

原句：Thanks to our effort, finally we won the second prize.

拓展句：It was thanks to our effort that finally we won the second prize.

【点睛】【高分句型1】One of the most unforgettable things was that my class prepared for a team debate competition.(运用了that引导的表语从句)

【高分句型2】Hard work as it is, during the course of preparation we developed a deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding among us.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装)

2．     As for whether students should wear the uniform at school, we hold different opinions. In my view, students should wear the uniform at school.

First, wearing uniform not only looks neat, but also standardized and beautiful. Students wearing uniforms will consciously abide by the rules and regulations of the school. In addition, wearing the same school uniform can help students avoid keeping up with the Joneses. As is known to us all, each family has different financial situation. Parents from rich families will buy brand clothes for their children, with the prices ranging from hundreds to thousands to tens of thousands, while students from ordinary or poor family will wear old or low-end clothes. This as a result will creates a sense of imbalance in the students and eventually make them keep up with the Joneses. If all their thoughts are used wrongly on this, it will naturally make them neglect their learning.

Considering all these above, I think it necessary to wear the uniform at school.

【导语】本文是议论文。要求考生对中学生在校期间是否需要统一穿着校服发表自己的观点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关于：As for→as with

穿：wear→be dressed in

在我看来：In my view→in my opinion

此外：In addition→besides/what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In my view, students should wear the uniform at school.

拓展句：In my view, students should wear the uniform when they are at school.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As for whether students should wear the uniform at school, we hold different opinions.（由whether引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】If all their thoughts are used wrongly on this, it will naturally make them neglect their learning.（由If引导的条件状语从句）

3．When it comes to food choices, first of all, I prefer the vegetables grown in natural sunlight instead of in the heated greenhouses and those not stored in plastic containers because they are eco-friendly. We can also avoid the imported foods since more fuels are used and lots of emission is released when we transport food over long distances. What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable. Last but not least, I’d eat less meat. Cows, sheep and pigs produce more gases that are bad for the environment such as methane when their food is digested.

In short, there will be greenhouse gases released into the atmosphere because of human’s daily activities. Therefore, we, as global citizens, should shoulder duties to protect our earth.

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生从“食物选择”的角度，谈谈对“低碳生活”的看法，怎样做到“低碳生活”，提出合理建议，并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

此外：What’s more→In addition

提供：provide→ supply

对……有害：be bad for→be harmful to

因为：because of →due to

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable.

拓展句：What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags which are provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable.

【点睛】【高分句型1】We can also avoid the imported foods since more fuels are used and lots of emission is released when we transport food over long distances.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】Cows, sheep and pigs produce more gases that are bad for the environment such as methane when their food is digested. （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）

4．The Most Useful Thing I Have Ever Learned

In my view, the most useful skill I’ve ever learned is first-aid. It is the provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury. I learned some first-aid skills in an activity that was held in our school and I put that into practical use the other day.

One day, on my way to school, I saw an old woman that just got hit by a bus. I came up and found that she was bleeding. Remembering some first-aid knowledge, I took out my handkerchief, covered wounds, and held the wound vigorously to stop the bleeding. When the doctor came, he spoke highly of what I did, saying that I did the right thing. This is why I think first-aid is the most useful thing I have ever learned.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就“我学过最有用的东西”写一篇作文，要求文章中讲到谈谈是从哪儿学到的，以及为什么如此重要。

【详解】1.词汇积累

在我看来：In my view → As far as I am concerned/In my eyes/In my opinion

最初的：initial → first/primary/beginning

活动：activity → event

用力地：vigorously → hard

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In my view, the most useful skill I’ve ever learned is first-aid. It is the provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury.

拓展句：In my view, the most useful skill I’ve ever learned is first-aid, which is the provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I learned some first-aid skills in an activity that was held in our school and I put that into practical use the other day.（运用了that引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】I came up and found that she was bleeding.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型3】When the doctor came, he spoke highly of what I did, saying that I did the right thing.（运用了When引导的时间状语从句、what引导的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

5．

One possible version:

During the past three years in the Guangming senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying-No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding!

【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节是“说说你的故事”，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对你的启发和影响。

【详解】1.词汇积累

难忘的：unforgettable→memorable

 为了：in order to→in an effort to

 困难的： hard→ tough

 由于：thanks to→owing to

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句： Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.

拓展句： When we heard the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.

【点睛】【高分句型1】One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. （运用了when引导的表语从句）

 【高分句型2】Although it was a hard job,every participant took it seriously and did their best. （运用了although引导的让步状语从句）

6．                                                        Clubs in My School

To enrich students’ life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club.

Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills.

Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on.

All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：对你校社团进行分类；具体描述每一类社团的特色。

【详解】1.词汇积累

等等：and so on→and the like

此外：Besides→In addition

机会：chance→opportunity

同时：Meanwhile→At the same time

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.

拓展句：Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．

   The classroom is where we study. It is important to us.　　

   My ideal classroom must be more spacious and brighter than the present classroom, surrounded by Windows, and the roof of the classroom is equipped with many eye-protection solar energy saving lamps, which are both bright and protective. Walls covered with white porcelain with touch-sensitive functions, whenever the teacher speak what content, it can be shown, to facilitate more vivid image of the lectures, stimulate students' interest in learning. And the teacher doesn't need chalk to write in class. Just write on the touch screen with your finger and it will show up right away. This is convenient and clean, and the classroom will no longer be polluted by chalk dust.

    I believe that with the progress of science and technology, everything is possible.

【导语】这是一篇应用文。假如考生是森林中学的学生牛威，最近你们学校的校报正在举办“我理想中的教室”征文活动，打算在学生中征稿。请你写一篇文章投稿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

重要的：important→ significant

出现：show up→ appear

进步： advance→ progress

激起：stimulate→ arouse

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：The classroom is where we study. It is important to us.　　.

拓展句：The classroom is where we study，which is important to us.　　.

【点睛】[高分句型1] . My ideal classroom must be more spacious and brighter than the present classroom, surrounded by Windows, and the roof of the classroom is equipped with many eye-protection solar energy saving lamps, which are both bright and protective.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]  I believe that with the progress of science and technology, everything is possible（that引导的宾语从句）

8．One possible version:

With the development of science, an increasing number of people are confused about whether it is good or bad to let robots replace human beings in some fields. Every coin has two sides. Robots bring not only much convenience to our life but also unemployment of many people. As far as I am concerned, it has some positive effects on our life.

The advantages of robots are far more than the disadvantages. To begin with, robots make our life more convenient. We can do a lot of things with the help of robots that couldn’t be done in the past. Additionally, robots can be used in industrial production. Factories can reduce production costs by using robots. And robots don’t get sick, which is very good for producing goods. Last but not least, robots can save more people in case of disaster, because they don’t feel pain, they can save more people without feeling tired.

All in all, the world is changing, and we should change our thinking. If robots became a part of our life, our life would be more colorful.

【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇议论文，要求学生就未来机器人的带来的利弊，谈谈自己的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

越来越多：an increasing number of→a growing number of

疲惫的：tired→exhausted

而且：additionally→in addition/what’s more/furthermore

在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion/from my point of view

2.句式拓展：

原句：Additionally, robots can be used in industrial production. Factories can reduce production costs by using robots.

拓展句：Additionally, robots can be used in industrial production, by which factories can reduce production costs.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

With the development of science, an increasing number of people are confused about whether it is good or bad to let robots replace human beings in some fields.（运用了whether引导宾语从句。）

【高分句型2】

And robots don’t need to eat or get sick, which is very good for producing goods.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。）

9．Schools in 50 years

50 years later, the school uses robots to teach students, and students sit in a transparent classroom on all sides to learn. Besides, students’ performance in class and learning feedback are all conducted by AI equipment. The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. The school 50 years later is very intelligent, and students’ needs can be met in an instant. The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so it is so convenient.

Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet. I will be shocked by all modern devices and intelligent functions. It’s great to feel the learning efficiency brought by the infinite power of modern science and technology, feel the friendship between classmates, and carefully taste the magic of knowledge.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

用、利用：use→make use of

此外：besides→what’s more

智能的：intelligent→smart

震惊的：shocked→astonished

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

拓展句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later, which will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. (运用了what引导的表语从句)

【高分句型2】The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so everything is so convenient. (运用了who引导的定语从句)

10．Steve Jobs once concluded his speech with the sentence “Stay Hungry, Stay foolish.” It means we should have an inquiring mind and hold a modest attitude towards knowledge. The saying carries much importance in this changing world because it is the precondition of innovation and it is innovation that propels the development of our society.

Numerous stories in the real business world illustrate this point. Koda and Nokia used to lead the photography and mobile phone industries. However, they lagged behind the digital trend because they stuck to the old-fashioned products and lost their alertness to the keen competition in the market. By comparison, under the leadership of Steve Jobs, Apple marched ahead with its tireless pursuit of better technology. It has brought about numerous technological breakthroughs in handy gadgets and keeps its lead in the market.

From where I am standing, this saying also reminds common people of the importance of modesty. When we stay hungry for knowledge, we regard taking in new information as a joyful matter. The acquisition of knowledge helps to broaden our horizons. When we stay foolish, we can detect the shortcomings in ourselves and know better about ourselves.

“Stay Hungry, Stay foolish” is the legacy Steve Jobs left to this world. We should maintain an attitude of modesty and always be ready to embrace everything innovative and revolutionary, thus keeping up with the times.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生结合生活实际谈一谈对乔布斯过说的这句话“Stay Hungry, Stay Foolish”的理解。

【详解】1.词汇积累

许多的：numerous→a number of

然而：however→nevertheless

重要性：importance→significance

保持：maintain→keep

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Steve Jobs once concluded his speech with the sentence “Stay Hungry, Stay foolish.” It means we should have an inquiring mind and hold a modest attitude towards knowledge.

拓展句：Steve Jobs once concluded his speech with the sentence “Stay Hungry, Stay foolish”, which means we should have an inquiring mind and hold a modest attitude towards knowledge.

【点睛】[高分句型1] The saying carries much importance in this changing world because it is the precondition of innovation and it is innovation that propels the development of our society. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和强调句)

[高分句型2] “Stay Hungry, Stay foolish” is the legacy Steve Jobs left to this world. (运用了that/which引导的定语从句，省略了that/which)