高中英语UNIT3Theworldonline表达作文巧升格学案译林版必修第三册
展开UNIT 3 The world online
图表类调查报告
调查报告属于应用文的范畴，旨在将调查结果真实、详细、有条理地呈现出来。有关调查报告的书面表达常以图表作文的形式呈现。题目往往让学生根据要求将图表信息以文字的形式进行转述。
图表类调查报告通常会采用三段式的写作模式：首段进行简单的介绍，点明调查报告的主题；第二段转述图表信息并进行分析；第三段得出结论并发表个人看法。
[基本框架]
1．开头
开篇要明确地指出调查的目的，这样也就明确了调查报告所要传达的信息。
2．主体
主体段落呈现调查信息并分析原因。对于图表类调查报告而言，主体段落是最终实现图文转换的段落。写主体段落时要注意以下几个方面：
(1)确定所要转换的信息时，要在题目的具体要求下提取信息，并对信息进行明确地分类。
(2)重组信息时，要注意根据题目要求确定信息表述的详略，重要的信息要进行详细说明，次要的信息一笔带过即可。
(3)转述所给信息时，要使用不同的表达方法，也就是要使用不同的词、词组和句型等。
(4)分析原因时要以具体的调查数据为依据，描述原因时要注意采用多样化的表达方式。
3．结尾
末段通常是对调查结果的总结，也就是根据调查结果得出结论或是针对调查结果发表个人看法。写此段时，考生要注意结论的客观性和看法的合理性，不可妄加评断。
[常用词块]
1．with the development of society 随着社会的发展
2．many reasons involved in this situation这种情况有很多原因
3．vary from person to person因人而异
4．hold the opinion that持有……的观点
5．arouse the public's great concern 引起公众极大的关切
6．have different choices on how to travel关于旅行出行有不同的选择
7．a variety of brands to choose from多种品牌可供选择
8．the advantages and disadvantages of the goods该商品的优缺点
[常用语句]
精彩开头
1．I made a survey of...我做一项关于……的调查
2．In order to work out/find out..., I made a survey...为了弄清楚……，我做了一项调查……
3．Recently, a survey has been done about...
最近，做了一项关于……的调查
4．Recently, we've conducted a survey to find out...
最近，我们调查发现……
正文佳句
1．As the survey/chart/diagram shows，...
根据调查/图表/示意图所展示的……
2．According to the survey/chart/diagram，...
根据调查/图表/示意图……
3．Some students think...while others argue that...
一些学生认为……，而另一些则认为……
余味结尾
1．It can be seen/concluded that...可以得知……
2．We can make a conclusion that...
我们可以得出如下结论……
3．In conclusion，...总之，……
4．I think that...我认为……
5．In my opinion，...我认为……
某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，调查结果如下。请根据表格1所给出的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
表格1：网购吸引用户的几个方面
37% | 商品种类丰富 |
33% | 商品价格合理 |
30% | 不受时间、地域限制 |
表格2：网购用户担心的几个方面
55% | 质量问题 |
27% | 售后服务 |
18% | 交易安全 |
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet._____________________________________________________________
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【学生习作】
Recently，a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.The results are here.
Chart 1 tells us why people buy online. Some people think there are many kinds to choose from. Some people think the prices are OK. And the rest people think they can buy any place and any time.
Chart 2 tells us what people are worried about. They include：quality, service and safety.
I think it is good and easy to go shopping online.
点评：1．句式过于单一，并列结构句式过多；
2．内容过于简单，未能详述调查结果。
【参考范文】
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.
37% think that there is a wide variety of products in online shops. About one third of them say that the reasonable price is the most appealing factor for them. And 30% of them hold that online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anywhere at any time.
However, many consumers also express their concerns about online shopping. The quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention.
Personally，we should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.
上个月，我们公司以35岁以下的人群作为调查对象，选取了1 000人进行了关于“网上购物”的一项调查，调查情况如下：
你是否愿意在网上购物？ | ||
结果 | 64%愿意 | 36%不愿意 |
原因 | 1.方便，在家可买到所需物品 2.网上商品比较便宜，而且可选择的品牌多 | 1.害怕买到赝品 2.担心被骗钱 |
结论 | 只要防范网上购物的弊端，将有越来越多的人选择网上购物 | |
根据以上数据，写一篇调查报告，内容包括：
1．调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；
2．愿意网上购物的人占调查人数的百分比；
3．人们愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
4．人们不愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
5．本次调查的结论。
注意：1．文章必须包含以上内容，并且内容要连贯；
2．词数80左右；
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping online among 1，000 interviewees younger than 35 years old.________________________________
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【参考范文】
Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping online among 1，000 interviewees younger than 35 years old.
64% of those interviewed think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods online are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money.
In conclusion，only by guarding against the disadvantages of online shopping will more and more people choose to shop online.
