英语外研版 (2019)Unit 6 At one with nature测试题

这是一份英语外研版 (2019)Unit 6 At one with nature测试题，共9页。试卷主要包含了语篇内容解读，文章脉络分析，写作建议等内容，欢迎下载使用。

写作题目
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In schl and at hme, mst f us have been sclded r even gt punished fr daydreaming. The majrity f peple say that by daydreaming we waste ur time and energy n smething that is nthing less than unprductive things. But many medical studies have stressed the fact that daydreaming wrks wnders n ur imaginatin, creativity and situatin-handling techniques. In fact, many prblems can be easily slved when we daydream.
The greatest benefit f daydreaming is that yur md gets imprved. By separating yurself frm the wrld arund yu, yu tend t enjy the peace in yur mind and get relaxed by daydreaming, as yu think abut smething that calms yur sense. When yu start visualizing(设想) things while daydreaming, yu need t frget all stress and tensin (紧张). Then yu get happiness frm it and this happiness changes int a surce f energy that keeps yu in a gd md t wrk.
Many psychlgists have said that peple wh daydream tend t have a sharper memry. It's true that when yu are daydreaming, yu tend t get carried away imagining varius situatins, either real r unreal. Yu tend t act differently in different situatins, trying t satisfy yur mind by ding what yu want in yur dreams. When yur mind gets satisfied, yu are in a better psitin t cncentrate mre n yur wrk. Since daydreaming activates the nerves f yur brain, yu tend t have better attentin and yur ability t remember things develps.
When yu daydream, yu autmatically visualize yurself listening t yur heart and therefre, yu get t knw yurself better. Yu als start realizing the mistakes yu've made in life and yu start trying yur best t avid repeating them. Such visualizatin techniques help yu cnnect yurself with yur sul.
文本分析
(1)语篇解读:
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与自我。本文讨论了空想的好处:改善心情;激活大脑神经,让人的记忆力更好;更好地认识自己,更有利于人们认识到自己所犯的错误并尽量避免犯同样的错误。
(2)段落主题
本文是典型的“总—分”结构,即提出问题—分析问题,结构明确,要点清晰。全文共分为四段。
每段主旨如下:
第一段:Daydreaming wrks wnders n ur imaginatin, creativity and situatin-handling techniques.
第二段:The greatest benefit f daydreaming is that yur md gets imprved.
第三段:Peple wh daydream tend t have a sharper memry, since daydreaming activates the nerves f the brain.
第四段:When yu daydream, yu get t knw yurself better. Yu als start realizing the mistakes yu've made in life and yu start trying yur best t avid repeating them.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
要点1 第一段的主要内容可概括为要点1,该要点含有相对立的两部分信息,可用 引导的让步状语从句来表述; 可同义转换为daydreaming is a waste f time and energy; daydreaming wrks wnders n ur imaginatin, creativity and situatin-handling techniques可提炼概括为 。
要点2 第二段的主要内容可概括为要点2,该要点可和要点1进行整合,用非限制性定语从句衔接; 可同义转换为lift yur spirits;该要点与要点1可整合为ne f which is that daydreaming can lift yur spirits。
要点3 第三段的主要内容可概括为要点3,该要点进一步介绍白日梦的好处,和要点2之间属于并列关系,用短语in additin连接;peple wh daydream tend t have a sharper memry可同义转换为 ;daydreaming activates the nerves f yur brain可同义转换为 。
要点4 第四段的主要内容可概括为要点4,该要点和要点3之间也是并列关系,为避免重复,用mrever连接;get t knw yurself better可同义转换为 ;realizing the mistakes yu've made in life and yu start trying yur best t avid repeating them可提炼概括为 。
答案 要点1 althugh/thugh; by daydreaming we waste ur time and energy; daydreaming has a lt f advantages
要点2 yur md gets imprved
要点3 daydreaming helps imprve yur memry;daydreaming helps make yur brain mre active
要点4 better knw yurself;avid making the same mistakes again
连句成篇



参考范文
Thugh mst peple lk n daydreaming as a waste f time and energy, many medical studies have fund that it has a lt f advantages,(要点1) ne f which is that daydreaming can lift yur spirits.(要点2) In additin, it helps make yur brain mre active, thus imprving yur memry. (要点3) Mrever, daydreaming helps yu better knw yurself and avid making the same mistakes again.(要点4)
写作积累
(一)常用的表示并列关系的过渡词:
and 和,als也,as well as 也,不但……而且……,……和……都,nt als...不但……而且……
(二)常用的表示递进关系的过渡词:
besides除……之外(还有), what's mre/mrever/furthermre此外, in additin另外, wrse still/what's wrse更糟糕的是, as fr至于
(三)常用的表示选择关系的过渡词:
r或者,或者……或者……,不是……而是……
实战演练
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阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
I believe televisin influences ur cmmunity in a negative way. Televisin influences peple t cpy what they see, especially the prgrams and advertisements n TV. They buy the prducts they saw n TV. They talk and act the way the characters n their favrite shws d. This is definitely a case f TV having a negative influence n peple.
TV advertisements influence the way peple purchase items. Advertisements intrigue(激发……的好奇心)them with bright clurs and lud music. Advertisers nly tell peple gd things abut a prduct and nt the bad things s peple are persuaded t buy things they dn't need. Smetimes they buy wrthless things r brken things. Televisin advertising encurages peple t waste mney.
When peple watch the same shw n TV a number f times, they start t pick up the habits f characters n the shw. Sme f these habits are extremely bad, like laziness, bad attitudes and even swearing(咒骂)and hurting.
Children see lts f vilence n TV, real vilence and cartn vilence. A survey carried ut by the Internatinal Calitin Against Vilence shwed that many cartns are vilent. Bugs Bunny and Rad Runner shw an average f fifty-five vilent acts every hur. The news every night they watch is full f vilence t. That is wrse because it's real vilence and in cartns it's just fictinal. Dr Patricia Edgar, directr f the Australian Children's Televisin Fundatin, says, “Children are mre afraid f what they see n the news than n ther shws because they knw it is real.” I think she is right and this is nt gd fr children. Televisin shuld nt shw vilence t frighten us. Children need t learn t be friendly. We shuld nt learn abut vilence.
Televisin definitely has a very negative influence n ur cmmunity. We shuld all pay real attentin t it.






答案全解全析
Part4 Writing
实战演练
概要写作
写作指导
1.语篇内容解读
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与社会。文章主要从不同方面论证电视对人们造成的各种负面影响。本文的篇章结构为“总—分—总”。第一段内容为主题段,作者提出自己的观点,认为电视在各个层面对人们造成不良影响;第二、三、四段为支持性论据,分别从购买不必要的产品、形成坏习惯、暴力因素太多三个方面对电视的不良影响做具体论述;第五段总结陈词中再次强调个人观点,呼吁人们对此进行关注。
2.文章脉络分析:
3.写作建议
One pssible versin:
I hld the view that TV is affecting peple negatively.(要点1) First, TV ads encurage peple t waste mney n sme pr-quality r needless things.(要点2) Secnd, TV viewers tend t get int the bad habits f sme TV shw characters.(要点3) Third, TV audience is expsed t bth real vilence and unreal vilence, f which real vilence is wrse.(要点4) All in all, TV plays a negative rle s that everyne shuld be cncerned abut it.(要点5)
段落
要点内容合并
1
将believe改为hld the view,influence改为affect,第一段可概括为:I hld the view that TV is affecting peple negatively.
2
第二段主要说明人们将钱浪费在things they dn't need和wrthless things r brken things,总结起来就是“不需要的东西”和“质量不好的东西”,这段可概括为:First, TV ads encurage peple t waste mney n sme pr-quality r needless things.
3
利用词语替换法将pick up the habits f改为get int the habits f,这一段可概括为:Secnd, TV viewers tend t get int the bad habits f sme TV shw characters.
4
本段讲了两种vilence,cartn vilence和vilence in news,一种是fictinal vilence,一种是real vilence,所以我们将其总结到一起,换成real vilence和unreal vilence两个对应的表达。这段可概括为:Third, TV audience is expsed t bth real vilence and unreal vilence, f which real vilence is wrse.
5
最后一段一方面再次陈述观点,另一方面提醒人们关注此事,所以用s that...将两句连接起来。这段可概括为:All in all, TV plays a negative rle s that everyne shuld be cncerned abut it.