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55书面表达读后续写常用细节描写
序号
内容
Part1
动作描写
Part 2
五官表情描写
Part3
神态描写
Part 4
环境描写


Part1 动作描写
一、短语
take one’s hand 牵某人的手
reach for one’s hand 伸手抓住某人
hold hands 手拉手
in one’s hand 在手里
with both hands 用双手
shake one’s hand 握手
hold out a hand 伸出手
put one’s hands to one’s cheeks 用双手捂住脸
raise one’s hands 举手
slid one’s hands into将手插进......
spread one’s hand 摊开双手
rub one’s hands together使劲搓着双手
one’s hands shake/tremble 某人的手颤抖着
catch/ hold of one’s arm 抓住某人的手臂
cup one’s hand over 捂住......
with one’s head in one’s hands双手抱着......
hand in hand 手拉手
raise a warning finger 举起一手指以示警告
raise/hold up a finger to one’s lip 把一根手指举到某人唇边
wag/wave one’s finger 某人摇着手指
wave one’s arms 挥动某人的双臂
with crossed arms 双臂交叉
fold one’s arms 某人双臂交叉
hold out/open one’s arms伸出/张开双臂
catch /grab one’s arm 抓住某人的胳膊
take one’s arm 挽住某人的胳膊
arm in arm 手挽手
put/throw one’s arms around sb. 搂住某人
pull sb. into one’s arms 拉某人进怀
lie on one's back仰面躺着
lie on one's face/ belly/ stomach趴着l
lie on one's side侧卧
get down on one’s knees 跪下双膝
get down on one’s left knee 单膝下跪
get down on the ground 趴在地上
shrug one’s shoulders 耸耸肩
sit on one's shoulders 坐在某人的肩膀上
look (back) over one's shoulder 回头看
bend one’s back 弯腰/驼背
stretch one’s back 伸懒腰
lean one’s back against......把背靠在......
on the back后背
on one’s back 某人的背上
jump to one’s feet 跳起来
tap/stamp one’s feet敲打/跺脚
drag one’s feet拖着脚
put one’s feet up把脚抬起来
hug one’s knees抱着膝盖
on one’s knees 跪下
drop/lower/bend/bow one’s head 低下头
nod one’s head 低头
shake one’s head 摇头
scratch one’s head 挠头
rest one’s head on 把头靠在...上面
bury one’s head 把头埋起来
clear one’s head 清醒一下头脑
feel one’s head spinning 觉得天旋地转
head for/towards 朝……走去
二、 句子
手上动作
1．Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an award way.
我惊呆了，站起来给了她一个尴尬的拥抱/奖励的方式拥抱她。
2．Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
无语，她灿烂地笑了笑，把儿子抱在怀里。
3．The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly.
离它越近，她越是疯狂地挥舞着那件黄色的上衣。
4．The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben’s hand.
那人接过麻袋，把手伸进口袋，把四枚硬币放在鲁本手里。
5．Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
然后，他抓着锡罐，向商店走去。
6．He parked down the street from Bobby’s house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.
他把车停在鲍比家的街道上，冲到他的前门，激动得浑身发抖。
7．The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben’s hands.
男人用牛皮纸轻轻地把礼物包好，放在鲁本的手里。
8．Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.
朵拉掀开盖子，泪水开始模糊了她的视线。
9．Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.
见没有人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，敲响了他的门铃。
10．She didn’t say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.
她没有说话，只是笑了笑，紧紧地握着我的手。
11．As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.
当我们与新主人握手时，我告诉他们他们是多么幸运。
12．He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?”
他拍拍我的头，问：“你有什么特别想要的吗？”
13．He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.
他紧紧地捏着我的手腕，感觉很痛。
14．She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”
她用手指抚过我的头发，说：“当然有圣诞老人。”
15．She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.
她把餐巾递给我，当我打开它时，三张 20 美元的钞票落在了我的桌子上。
16．Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.
Stevie 看了看我，又看了看他妈妈，然后拿出一张餐巾纸。
17．The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.
当李老师给我颁发奖品时，全班热烈鼓掌。
18．He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
他把手伸进口袋，取出一张纸条。
19．Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.
夫人达蒙指着墙上挂着的阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦的名言。
20．Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.
他平静地拿起画笔，又开始刷粉了。
21．She nervously fingered her collar.
她紧张地摸着自己的衣领。
22．He stroked the cat and patted the dog
他抚摸猫，拍拍狗。
23．She tapped him on the shoulder.
她拍拍他的肩膀。
24．He grasped my hand and we ran.
他拉着我的手，我们跑了。
25．She grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop。她抓起公文包跑到公交车站。
26．The thief snatched the handbag and disappeared into the crowd.小偷抢走了手提包，消失在人群中。
27．Press the button.按下按钮。
28．Please handle the goods with great care。请小心处理货物。
29．George stood silently with his arms folded. 乔治双臂交叉，静静地站着。
身体动作
1．She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
她睡着了，梦见了汤姆。
2．Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.
突然一个身穿黑色斗篷的高大身影出现在他面前。
3．Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared.
死亡用威胁的声音说话，然后消失了。
4．Dr. Urssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.
博士Urssenbeck 突然发现自己在一个大房间里，那里有成千上万支蜡烛在燃烧。
5．The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.
小女孩慢慢地把自己推到秋千上。
6．They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.
他们在凉爽的夜晚坐在外面的木门廊上，静静地交谈。
7．One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.
其中一个走近，礼貌地问我要不要把球还给他。
8．Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.
为了表现得讨人喜欢，我弯下腰，捡起球，半闭着眼睛，用力把它扔了回去。
9．Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.
一上车，我就蹲在座位上闭上眼睛。
10．In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.
转眼间，我的朋友在车里走了，消失在一片尘土中。
11．For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).
我愣在原地，呆若木鸡。
12. The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.
小女孩慢慢地把自己推到秋千上。
13. They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.
他们在凉爽的夜晚坐在外面的木门廊上，安静地交谈。
14. One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.
其中一个走近并礼貌地问我是否会把球扔回给他。
15. Wanting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.
为了表现得讨人喜欢，我弯下腰，拿起球，半闭着眼睛，用力把它扔回去。
16. Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.
一上车，我就蹲在座位上闭上眼睛。
17. In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.
转眼间，我的朋友在车里走了，消失在一片尘土中。
18. For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).
一时间，呆若木鸡愣在原地。
Part 2 五官表情描写

1.有关head的表情描写

drop/lower/bend/bow one’s head 低下头

nod one’s head 低头

shake one’s head 摇头

scratch one’s head 挠头 scratch [skræt] 抓；挠

rest one’s head on 把头靠在...上面

bury one’s head 把头埋起来

clear one’s head 清醒一下头脑

feel one’s head spinning 觉得天旋地转 spin [spin] 旋转;眩晕

Head for/towards 朝...走去

翻译小练习：

1.他羞愧地低下了头。

2.他们点头同意。

3.她怀疑地摇摇头。

4.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。

5.她用枕头捂住脑袋。

6.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。

7.我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。

8.他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。

9.他转身朝门口走去。

参考答案：

1. He dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.

2. They nodded their heads in agreement.

3. She shook her head in disbelief.

4. He scratched his head, not understanding a word.

5. She buried her head in the pillow.

6. She rested her head on his shoulder.

7. I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.

8. He could feel his head spinning after only one drink.

9. He turned and headed for the door.


2.有关face的表情描写

a bright smile 灿烂的笑容

one’s face brightened 某人的脸上焕发出了光彩

one’s face grow serious表情变得严肃

one’s face looked a little confused 某人看起来有点因惑

one's face flushed/burned with embarrassment. 某人的脸窘得满脸通红

one’s face paled with fright 某人的脸吓得都白了

had a slight frown on one’s face 某人愁眉不展的样子

翻译小练习：

1.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

2.我给她礼物时，他的脸上焕发出了光彩。

3.他的表情突然严肃起来。

4.他看起来有点因惑。

5.杰克窘得满脸通红。flush [flʌʃ] 脸红

6.她吓得脸都白了。

7.他的脸上现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。

参考答案：

1. A bright smile appeared on his face.

2. Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.

3. His face suddenly grew serious.

4. His face looked a little confused.

5. Jack's face flushed/burned with embarrassment.

6. Her face paled with fright.

7. He had a slight frown on his face.


3.有关cheek的表情描写

one’s cheeks burning with shame 某人因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧

one’s cheeks are wet with tears 某人泪流满面

color rushed/flooded to one’s cheeks 某人涨红了脸

a tear slid down one’s cheek 一滴泪顺着某人的脸颊滑落下来

kissed sb on both cheeks 亲了某人的脸颊

翻译小练习:

1.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。

2.她泪流满面。

3.意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。

4.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。

5.他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。

参考答案：

1. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.

2. Her cheeks were wet with tears.

3. Color rushed/flooded to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.

4. A tear slid down her cheek.

5. He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train.


4.有关eye的表情描写

one’s eyes are wide with horror 某人惊恐地瞪大了眼睛

one’s eyes shine with excitement 某人眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒

one’s eyes filled with tears 某人的眼里充满泪水

one’s eyes fall on someplace 某人的目光落在..

look at sb straight in the eye 直视某人的眼睛

one’s eyes fix on ...... 某人的目光紧盯着......

one’s eyes scan ...... 某人的眼睛扫视......

one’s eyes dropped to ...... 某人垂下眼睛看着......

翻译小练习:

1.他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。

2.她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

3.她的眼里充满泪水。

4.那条狗饥饿的目光落在我的三明治。fall on/land on...(目光) 落在...

5.她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。

6.他似乎不愿意与我的目光接触。

7.她试图坐起来，目光紧盯着琼的脸。

8.他一刻不停地盯着我。

9.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。

10.他回答时垂下眼睛看着膝盖。

参考答案：

1. His eyes were wide with horror.

2. She laughed, her eyes shining with excitement.

3. Her eyes filled with tears.

4. The dog's hungry eyes fell on my sandwich.

5. She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.

6. He seemed unwilling to meet my eyes.

7. She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Jean's face.

8. His eyes never left mine.

9. His eyes scanned the room as he entered.

10. His eyes dropped to her lap as she answered.


5.有关mouth的表情描写

关于嘴的动作有：

open one’s mouth 张开嘴

hide one’s yawn 打哈欠

cup one’s mouth 扣住某人的嘴

stuff one’s mouth with something 用......填满嘴巴

形容嘴的状态：

drop open in surprise惊奇地张大了嘴

start watering 开始流口水

heart be in one’s mouth紧张得心都到了喉咙眼

翻译小练习：

1.她张开嘴要说什么,最后什么也没说。

2.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个哈欠。

3.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。

4.闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。

5.突然一只手扣住了她的嘴。

6.他的嘴上挂着一丝笑意。

7.他开始往嘴里塞意大利面。stuff [stf] 塞满;填塞

8.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。

9.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙眼。

参考答案：

1.She opened her mouth to say something，but nothing.

2. He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.

3. Our mouths dropped open in surprise.

4. My mouth started watering when I smelled the food.

5. Suddenly a hand cupped her mouth.

6. A smile played around his mouth.

7. He began to stuff his mouth with pasta.

8. He straightened up and looked at me, open-mouthed.

9. My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
Part3 外貌描写神态描写

1. Indeed, his sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.
2. The tramp, a poor, homeless man with a moustache, wore large trousers, worn-out shoes and a small round black hat.
1. 关于“笑”的表达：
--The smile froze on her lips. 她脸上的笑容僵住了。
--In spite of his disappointment, he managed a weak smile. 他还是勉强露出一丝淡淡的微笑。
--Alee became happy now and a gentle smile spread over her face. 整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
--His face split into a wide smile. 他的脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容。
2. 有关“看”的表达：
He didn’t shout, and he just glared at me silently. 他只是默默怒视着我。
He gazed at the ...., unbelievable. 他难以置信地盯着..看。
He turned to her with a frightened air. 他害怕地看着他。
He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.
他又盯着我看，黑眼睛里充满了厌恶。
Her eyes were glued to the screen. 她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。
He give a glimpse of...from the corner of his eye. 他用眼睛的余角瞥了一眼。
3. With tears streaming down her face, words failed her .
眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
Part 4 环境描写
（一）阳光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悦的景色描写
1. The beach to your right stretches off(延伸) to the horizon, slowly narrowing to nothingness（虚无）, only to re-emerge（重新出现） again on your left.
2. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.
3. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
4. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入
5. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
6. I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。
7. White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.
8. A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain. 一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。
9. The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled （撒、点缀）the slope. 风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。
10. There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn, I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet!
11. It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
（二）暴风骤雨、心情抑郁的景色描写
12. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
13. The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮).
14. The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
15. The frigid gusts of wind stung their faces. 一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。Stung 的原形为sting“叮咬”
16. The summer breeze gently moved through the leaves with a sighing sound. 叹息的声音
17. There was a deathly stillness in the house. 死寂
18. The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
（三）烦闷焦躁的景色描写
19. It’s hot enough to melt hell. 天热得能融化地狱。
20. The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, and sits on my shoulders. 整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。
（四）凄风苦雨、狂风暴雨、恐惧阴冷害怕的景色描写
21. On the dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling(嚎叫).
22. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。
23. The boys were frightened as the wind blew several trees on their side and the light continued to come and go in the sky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).
24. There was now a fine, cold drizzle falling(寒冷的细雨), and the wind had risen from its uncertain（模糊的） puffs （一阵阵小风）into a steady blow. The few foot passengers astir （活动的）in that quarter hurried dismally（沉闷地） and silently along with coat collars turned high and pocketed hands（踹口袋里的手）.
早上：
1. The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.
阳光的甜蜜充满我的肺。
2. The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.
第一缕阳光太脆弱，无法触摸。
3. Spring breeze draws the curtain of clouds and the sunshine floods into the classrooms.
春风拉开云帘，阳光洒进教室。
4. The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.
一缕阳光，全世界绽放。
5. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.
雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树的树枝上。
6. Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet ground is cold under foot. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there.
被雨露亲吻，脚下湿漉漉的地面冰凉。鸟儿在我身边忙碌着，根本不在乎我在那里。
7. A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
一股浓浓的泥土香从地底升起，将一切都笼罩在它柔软的怀抱中。
8. When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in.
拉开窗帘，阳光洒进来。
9. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart.
金色的阳光，娇嫩的绿色，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼帘。步入画中，鸟鸣啾啾，令我醉醺醺。很快，纤弱的细腻的空气和柔软的雨滴融化了我的心。
10. It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
那是星期六的早晨，整个夏天的世界都明亮清新，充满生机。每个人心中都有一首歌。每一张脸上都洋溢着欢呼，每一步都充满了春天。空气中弥漫着宜人的花香。村外上方的卡迪夫山（Cardiff Hill）绿树成荫，看上去很美。
黄昏：
1. As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, he quickened his steps.
随着天色渐渐暗了下来，光线也渐渐暗了下来，他加快了脚步。
2. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.
太阳躲在山后，漆黑一片，什么也看不见。
3. Falling leaves fluttered down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and beckoning the autumn in.
中秋的凉风中，落叶飘落，告别甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到来。
4. It's dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of wet flakes drifting mindlessly down, the air moist, the sidewalk mushy underfoot.
天已经黑了，雪还在下，一团团潮湿的雪花漫不经心地飘落下来，空气潮湿，人行道在脚下变得糊状。
5. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨水打在窗户上，告别了最后一缕阳光。
6. The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.
余晖被急速落下的夜幕抹去，犹如漆黑的帷幕笼罩在天际。
7. The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
走在街上，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，一个人会从我身边掉下来，随着空气轻轻地将它带到地面，轻轻摇晃。
8. The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.
湖水映照着头顶的天空，两人都是无可指摘的蓝色，闪烁着微光。
9. The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas.
日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
10. The strong sun on my black hair would burn me in minutes if I couldn’t find shelter.
如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上的强烈阳光会在几分钟内灼伤我。
11. The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.
太阳落下，落在他的头和肩膀上。
晚上：
1. From the distance, he saw some dim light(昏暗的灯光) in the village.
从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。
2. Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.
爸爸和我之间的沉默让我更加紧张和害怕。那一刻，除了天空中几颗星星发出的微弱光芒外，天已经完全黑了。
3. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。
4. The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.
天空，午夜蓝，赋予场景一种童话般的质感，点缀天空的星星点亮了夜晚。
5. The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks.
湛蓝的天空点缀着飞舞的百灵鸟。
6. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
狂风呼啸，雨从天上倾泻而下，拍打着成排的树枝。世界笼罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一种恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。、
7. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
漆黑的雨夜，风，雷鸣般的乌云，让我完全掌握在它们的力量中。
8. The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.
这一天的晚上很长，很忧郁，在哈特菲尔德。天气增添了它可能的阴霾。一场阴冷的暴风雨袭来，七月的任何东西都没有出现，只出现在被风掠走（残）的树丛中残酷的景象越久可见。
9. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds， and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt.
天阴沉沉的，乌云密布，整个世界仿佛都笼罩在一张巨大的灰色被子里。
10. The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon. The frosty air blew in, cutting like knife.
稀疏的树木在狂风吹拂，凌乱的灰色云彩掠过苍白病态的月亮。寒气袭来，如刀割一般。

其他句子赏析
1. I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
我在飞驰的车里闭上了眼睛。蜿蜒的河流、巍峨的山脉、深邃的山谷和阳光明媚的海滩让我完全着迷。
2. The gentle breeze(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.
微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。
3. Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Wandering in the woods, Ally slowed her pace to find the little guy in the mixed air. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.
.熟悉的泥土气息迎面扑来。漫步在树林中，艾莉放慢了脚步，在混杂的空气中找到了小家伙。太阳带着灿烂的笑容看着她，花儿也朝她开心地点点头。微风轻抚着她的脸庞，温暖而舒适
4. The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
狂风呼啸，雨从天上倾泻而下，拍打着一排排的树枝。世界笼罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一种恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即转身滑进床上，蜷缩起来。
5. On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping(拍；掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.
返校那天，天上乌云低垂。雨倾盆而下，冰冷的水珠和怒风拍打（拍；掴）我的脸。我被温暖的泪水和冻雨淹没了。
6. Spring, like an amazing artist, paints our campus with richer and deeper colors. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering(吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart. Oh, I’m lost… in the masterpiece of Spring!
春天，像一位了不起的艺术家，用更丰富更深沉的色彩描绘了我们的校园。金色的阳光，娇嫩的绿叶，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼帘。步入画中，鸟鸣咝咝咝咝不已。很快，纤弱的细腻的空气和柔软的雨滴融化了我的心。哦，我迷失了……春天的杰作！


Writing 1
（2022·湖南·周南中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last, nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of parting with the little creature, Mrs. Grant’s felt sad because the children loved it very much. Having struggled hard, she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher. Finally, she went herself with a heavy heart, dragging her leaden feet, and bargained with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
While the children were all playing with the lamb, the butcher and his boy came to the door. “ You see I am here for the lamb, ” said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this, one child ran to her mother’s side, and asked what was happening in alarm. Mrs. Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
“That’s my lamb now, Charlie! ” said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone, going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours! ” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.
But the boy, pushing him aside, threw a rope round Daisy’s neck, and began to drag the little creature away. The poor lamb bleated (咩咩叫) very sadly. The cry of grief which fell upon the mother’s ears was too much for her, and her heart sank within her. In a moment, begging with tearful eyes, the children were all around their mother with voices choking with sobs for their little pet.
“Please tell your boy to stop a moment, ” she said in husky tones to the butcher. The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice, Mrs. Grant explained to them how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy. With this money, she could buy her children bread to eat.
注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1:
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
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Para2:
The butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy. “ No!-No!-No! ” they dashed to Daisy and threw their arms around her, begging, “ Please, mother! We would rather go hungry than lose her! ” Hearing this, Mrs. Grant was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding. After all, she clearly knew that the children had devoted so much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them; she was, in their eyes, a family member! Having struggled hard, she turned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would return the money.
Paragraph 2:
The Butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. When Mrs. Grant took out the money and gave it back, he just waved his hand and announced, “ I will not rob the children of their pet! ” He approached the children, patted them on the shoulders gently and promised that he would buy Daisy from their mother and then gave it back to them as a gift. The word left the children standing stunned. Then, looking up at him, one asked seriously, “Sir, do you really mean that?” The butcher just replied seriously, “ I mean every word of it. She is OUR Daisy. My boy and I will come to see her occasionally. ” Hearing this, all the children gathered round and stroked the pet, their little hearts filled with joy.
【导语】本文以宠物羊Daisy为线索展开，讲述了贫穷的Grant太太在家里缺衣少食的情况下，决定卖掉孩子们的宠物羊Daisy。但当屠夫要带走Daisy时，孩子们非常难过，苦苦哀求，希望能留下宠物羊。屠夫见此情景，不忍心带走宠物羊，把它作为礼物送给孩子们的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但她解释得越多，她的孩子们就越强烈地要求黛西。”可知，第一段可描写孩子们的苦苦哀求以及Grant太太的伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“屠夫一直在注视着这一切，他的心被触动了。”可知，第二段可描写屠夫不忍心带走宠物羊Daisy，把它作为礼物送给孩子们，孩子们很高兴。
2.续写线索：伤心——祈求——归还——赠与——高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.祈求：beg/ask/pray for
②.归还：give back/return
情绪类
①.伤心：in great sorrow/very sad
②.高兴地：with joy/gladly/happily
Writing 2
（2022·湖南·长郡中学二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having struggled with financial difficulties for six months and failing to find a way out, I had to close my technology writing business. Fortunately, I found a new job as a salesperson and soon got a client. At the time, I wondered if it was too good to be true.
By the second month, something didn’t seem right, and I developed a bad feeling about the client and the work. When the third month’s check didn’t arrive on time, I sent the client an e-mail to find out what was going on. But there was no reply. Then I sent another e-mail, and another. The check never arrived, and I never heard from the client again. With no hope in sight, I hit rock bottom. Panic replaced cautious optimism along with my last self-confidence.
I hid myself from friends and locked myself in my room. One night, the phone rang. The call was from Eric, a friend of mine from high school. When he was in high school, he told me many times about his parents’ divorce and his loss of confidence in the college entrance examination. During the difficult time, I gave him much comfort and encouragement. Later, he went to college and was always grateful for what I had done.
After the greetings, I told my problems and challenges, hoping my friend would say something comforting. What I didn’t expect was a string of sharp words. “What is wrong with you? You can do anything you want to do,” he said. “You are a writer, so start writing. Write for magazine.” “Write for magazine? Are you out of your mind? I don’t know the first thing about writing for magazine, let alone write things that anyone would want to read. And I have to know where I can send an application form-to what magazine and to what editor,” I shouted at him.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting.
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On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor.
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【答案】参考范文
Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting. After a short silence, Eric replied in a firm voice. “I always remember what you said when I was in trouble. You said ‘No one can get you out of trouble but yourself. ’ ” Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier to convince others than to convince myself. Inspired by Eric’s words, I started searching for magazines the next day and finally found one that accepted online contributions with various topics. Then I began to prepare my application form.
On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor. Luckily, two days later I received a positive response and an invitation to write. At first, I only wrote articles I was expert in. Gradually, I began trying new types. One day, much to my amazement, one of my articles appeared on the first page of the magazine! Since then, I have been on my way to becoming an excellent writer. That definitely should be credited to Eric. It was he who enlightened me and helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者由于经济困难结束了自己的技术写作业务，找到一份新的销售工作，很快找到第一个客户，但后来客户杳无音信，在作者对生活感到绝望时，高中时期的一个朋友Eric打电话来，高中时期作者在Eric困难时作者曾给过他很多鼓励，Eric建议作者开始为杂志写作，作者从没有为杂志写过文章，认为Eric一定是疯了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“出乎意料的是，我在喊了一声之后感觉好多了。”可知，第一段可描写Eric鼓励作者，作者受到启发开始联系杂志社。
②由第二段首句内容“填完申请表后，我就把它寄给了编辑。”可知，第二段可描写作者收到杂志社的积极回复后开始写作并逐渐取得成功。
2.续写线索：
Eric鼓励——受到启发，开始行动——收到杂志邀请——逐渐成为优秀作家——自信面对挑战
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回答：reply/answer
②鼓舞：inspire/encourage
③帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth./assist sb. to do sth.
情绪类
①惊讶：amazement/astonishment
②自信：confidence/faith
Writing 3
（2022·江苏南京·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Flora and her dad were going to move to a new house. Friday, a truck would come for the furniture. Then the next week, workers would dig up the yard. Where Flora and Papi had grown flowers, the workers would put in a parking lot.
“Our poor flowers,” Flora sighed to herself, looking at the bright purple blooms and soft and green weed coming out of the soil. She sat outside, selling things she didn’t want to take to the new house. Beside her hung a sign that said “Yard Sale”. Her yard sale was the first one of the year on Apple Street, and several of her neighbors had come over to have a look.
Papi came out. He held a dish piled high with nuts. “Here’s a snack for everyone,” he said. Flora’s dad loved sharing things. Most of all he loved sharing jokes. He smiled when he saw Flora’s sign and winked (眨眼) at the customers gathered around.
“Yard sale? What are you selling yards of? Or meters of?” he asked. “Ribbons? Carpet? Cloth? Where’s your ruler?”
“Not that kind of yard,” joked Mrs. Ciro. “It must be this nice grassy yard we’re standing on that’s for sale.”
“How much for the weed by your sign?” asked Mr. Johnson, joking.
Flora gave no response. She didn’t think their jokes were funny. She felt extremely in low spirits at the thought that the lovely yard was already sold, and soon their poor flowers and weed would be ruined.” Deader than a doorknob,’ Papi’s papi would say”, she thought to herself bitterly, “What’s worse, the new house doesn’t have any flowers at all.”
With a sigh, Flora dug her heels deep into the grass. But when she felt the soft earth move under her heels, she knew what she could do.
She whispered her clever plan to Papi. He nodded, smiling, and sat down in her seat instead.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a trowel (园艺铲) to dig with.
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Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers.
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【答案】Flora fetched old flowerpots and found a trowel to dig with. She walked to the yard, knelt down, and found the right place to shovel. Carefully she dug up chunks of earth that had flowers growing out of them. Then, she gently packed each chunk and more soil in a pot, deciding to carry two inside. They would come along to the new house. The others she lined up near her sign. All the work finished, she came back. “Thanks, Papi,” Flora said with smile, taking her seat again.
Now she was ready for selling the yard and joking with customers. Mr. Johnson was picking some toys from the stand. Mrs. Ciro picked several story books. And the two asked jokingly again, “But how much for the yard?” This time, Flora smiled. Her smile was just like Papi’s. “Zero cents!” she said, “Pick any pot of yard you like!” Hearing this, all the neighbors burst into laughter. “Now our yard can survive,” Flora thought to herself delightedly, “both in my new house and on Apple Street” she added.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个叫做Flora的女孩跟爸爸要卖掉房子及其旧物，搬去新家，但Flora对院子里的花草十分不舍，害怕会被遗弃，因此将这些花草移植到花盆里赠送给购买旧物的人，因而保存了这些花草的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“Flora拿来旧花盆，找了一把铲子来挖”可知，第一段描写Flora想把花草移植到花盆里，然后将它们带到新房子去。
②由第二段句首内容“现在她准备卖掉院子，和顾客开玩笑”可知，第二段描写了Flora将花草移植到花盆之后，将等待买房人来并且计划把这下花草送给喜欢它们的人。
2. 续写线索：挖土——移植花草——等待买家——赠送花草——变得开心
3. 词汇积累
行为类：
①跪下来：kneel down→get down on one’s knees
②包裹：pack→wrap up
③完成：finish→complete
④坐下：take one’s seat→sit down
情绪类：
①笑：smile→laugh
②欣喜地：delightedly→excitedly
Writing 4
（2022·重庆一中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rivaldo was playing football from the age of 4. When he was 7, he joined a local football club. He attended the training regularly but never got a chance to play in matches. But the coach had faith in him. He told Rivaldo that he should focus on hi training, and one day he would get the chance. Rivaldo had no other option but to continue training in the club. He was training very hard and focused on improving himself.
Even after two years in the club, he never played in a match. He was not even allowed to travel along with the team. One day their club had a charity match, where a famous footballer was a chief guest. While the team was planning to travel, one of the support staff who used to take care of kits got ill. So, they needed someone for this.
The coach thought this should be an opportunity for Rivaldo. So, he told him to travel with the team and take care of the kits. Other support staff objected to it, but he convinced them.
The team reached the stadium. There were a lot of crowds to witness the celebrity footballer. For Rivaldo, this is his first-time experience in the stadium. He was helping the other players with the kits for the pre-match training. The coach came for a chat with Rivaldo. He told Rivaldo, “You are playing today.”
Rivaldo, for a moment, got frozen and asked him why. He said, “One of the players from the team got injured while training. So, we are short of players. We need someone to be in the field to make it 11. But I know you are more than that. So, go and prove yourself”. There was resistance from the support staff. Luckily for Rivaldo, the coach, through the organizing committee, convinced Rivaldo’s team management to allow him to play.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When the match started, Rivaldo was running like a deer.
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After the match, the celebrity footballer walked to Rivaldo.
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【答案】A Possible Version
When the match started, Rivaldo was running like a deer. Several times, he took the ball to the right side but failed to score any goal. Soon the celebrity footballer scored a quick goal. There were deafening cheers from the supporters. The rival team was very spirited and dominated the game. In the second half, Rivaldo won a chance to penetrate into the defenses of the rival team. A goal was scored. With the morale boosted, Rivaldo’s team tightened their belts and played with determination. Finally, the referee blew the whistle and the match ended with Rivaldo’s team winning by 2-1 goals.
After the match, the celebrity footballer walked to Rivaldo. Wearing a note of excitement, he spoke highly of Rivaldo’s performance. When he learned that it was the first time Rivaldo had played in a match, he immediately invited him to play for the junior team. Rivaldo performed so well that later he went on to represent the senior team and for his country. In life, there will be many roadblocks. But you have to continue and wait. When the moment comes, grab it with both hands and fly towards your dream.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rivaldo从4岁开始踢足球，努力训练，即使在俱乐部呆了两年，他也从未参加过一场比赛。直到一次慈善比赛上，Rivaldo被派上场，最终赢得了比赛，得到了足球明星的肯定。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“比赛开始时，Rivaldo跑得像只鹿。”可知，第一段可描写Rivaldo参加比赛并获胜的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“比赛结束后，这位足球明星走向Rivaldo。”可知，第二段可描写足球明星对Rivaldo的评价以及Rivaldo之后取得的成就。
2.续写线索：比赛开始——取得胜利——足球明星高度评价Rivaldo——Rivaldo代表国家参赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
开始：start/begin
控制：dominate/control
高度评价：speak highly of /think highly of
情绪类
立即：immediately/instantly
鼓舞：spirited / inspired
Writing 5
（2022·山东·德州市教育科学研究院三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom. He was a strange sight. His half-buttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama (睡衣) top underneath，and instead of white school shoes, he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big. The physics teacher’s hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.
Mohi murmured,“Sorry, teacher,”and rushed to his seat. Mr. Tan glared at the rest of the students. The chuckles(咯咯笑) quickly died down. Mohi’s classmates always looked forward to Mondays. Nine times out of ten, they would be entertained by Mohi’s late arrival and his odd appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing. That day, it was the pajama top and green sandals.
Mohi lived just a street away from the school. He walked to school daily. Students passing by in buses would yell his name at the same time just to see him jump and stop suddenly. When he spotted the merry crowd in the bus, he would wave good-naturedly. Although Mohi was likable, he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends. His classmates found him amusing but they ignored him most of the time. Only Hamed, who sat next to Mohi, tried to be his friend.
The following Monday, Mohi did not turn up at school. His classmates were a little disappointed but quickly forgot about him. After school, Hamed decided to walk over to Mohi’s house to check on him. As he approached the gate, he could hear violin music. “Mohi must be listening to music, since he had never played music at school.”Hamed thought. He called Mohi’s name a few times but there was no response. The gate was not locked. Hamed let himself in. The music played on.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Hamed looked closely through a window, his eyes widened in surprise.
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When Teacher’s Day came around, Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform.
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【答案】As Hamed looked closely through a window, his eyes widened in surprise. In the middle of the living room, Mohi was playing the violin. His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly. He played flawlessly so much so that it sounded like a recording. Then an idea hit Hamed. It was the tradition of the school to have a concert for the teachers. Every class had to contribute an item. It was a good chance for Mohito show his talent and be accepted by his classmates. Thinking of that, Hamed left quietly.
When Teacher’s Day came around, Hamed convinced the class to let Mohi perform. Short of ideas, the class agreed. On the day of the concert, both the teachers and students were surprised to see the school’s clumsiest student walking on stage with a violin. When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped. As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence. Then the audience erupted into thunderous applause. Mohi became a sensation and had many fans in his final year of school. Mohi and Hamed became the best of friends eventually.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了笨拙且不修边幅的Mohi一直是同学们的笑料，但好友Hamed发现了 Mohi 小提琴天赋，在Hamed举荐下，Mohi 教师节音乐会上进行了表演，Mohi得到了同学们的认可并成了轰动一时的名人。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Hamed透过窗户仔细看了看，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。”可知，第一段可描写Hamed发现Mohi拉小提琴拉得完美无瑕，Hamed想出一个主意，让Mohi展示他的才华。
②由第二段首句内容“当教师节来临的时候，Hamed说服全班同学让Mohi表演。”可知，第二段可描写Mohi的表演大获成功，得到同学们的认可。
2.续写线索：发现秘密——推荐表演——技惊四座——轰动一时
3.词汇激活
行为类
①突然意识到：hit/strike/occur to
②展示他的才华：show his talent/demonstrate his talent
③开始做某事：begin to do/start to do
情绪类
①专心地：in concentration /intently
②沉默：silence /quiet
Writing 5
（2022·湖南·邵阳市第二中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据所其内容何所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
As I sit here thinking and making an attempt to piece together an answer to the question on this application to major in biology, my mind is racing through the many of the bitter and sweet experiences of the past. It makes me realize life is not always pleasant and it does not always have to end at the age of 90 or 100. sometimes it can be 16 or 17.
It was towards the beginning of last year that I had made a discovery in my throat. It seemed like a lump and I didn’t give it much attention although sometimes it did bother me. But it wasn’t until March that I came to know I was suffering from thyroid cancer.
The word cancer has always scared me. It always made me think about death but I had always thought that cancer was only for people aged 40 and up; young kids like me didn’t get cancer! Needless to say, the news was shocking. I couldn’t believe it. I thought, “This is wrong; it can’t be!” But the reality was that I had thyroid cancer and had to fight and succeed in the end.
My parents came home with the devastating news and they were heartbroken. That was when it all started-- one blood test after another, a painful biopsy, many other scans and X-rays.
Unfortunately the doctors were never able to find the cause of this disease occurring among young kids. All they said was that “we need to take her thyroid out before it’s too late.”
On August 2nd, 2007, around 10 am the surgery was done and the doctors were able to remove my thyroid gland. I woke up and saw all these tubes attached to my throat and nose. The next couple of days were too painful filled with just more blood tests. Success as I achieved, I still bear the scar on my neck, a reminder of what I have been through. I am not saying this for any sort of sympathy but it is the incident that has truly changed my life.
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1. 续写字数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From this I realized how short life can be and in an instant anything can happen that can totally change my life.
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In addition, this incident has also shaped my career goals.
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【答案】参考范文
From this I realized how short life can be and in an instant anything can happen that can totally change my life. But I kept trying and fighting instead of giving up. This was the point where I realized that I had to succeed in life. I believed that if I could fight cancer I could accomplish anything else. I took up challenges and succeeded. I am not discouraged if I fail because I know success doesn’t always come easily. It takes time and hard work.
In addition, this incident has also shaped my career goals. I have always loved bioscience and this incident made me more interested. Maybe someday I might find the cause of this disease. I am planning to major in biology and eventually become a doctor. I am reminded by my parents every time that being a doctor is not easy. It takes determination, hard work and above all the willpower to achieve the ultimate goal. I know that this incident had shaped these characteristics and other features in my life. I can make it.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者作为一个年轻人，非常震惊地发现自己竟然患了甲状腺癌。作者做手术切除了甲状腺，脖子上的伤疤提醒着作者经历的一切，这件事也改变了作者的生活。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“从这件事，我意识到生命是多么短暂，在一瞬间，任何可以完全改变我生活的事情都可能发生。”可知，第一段可描写作者意识到必须要相信自己，战胜癌症并完成其他任何事情，成功需要时间和努力。
②由第二段首句内容“此外，这一事件也塑造了我的职业目标。”可知，第二段可描写作者计划主修生物学，并最终成为一名医生，作者知道实现最终目标需要决心、努力和意志力，并相信自己能够做到。
2.续写线索：努力奋斗——相信自己——成功不易——职业目标——努力实现目标——相信自己能做到
3.词汇激活
行为类
①意识到：realize/be aware of
②完成：accomplish/complete/finish
③接受挑战：take up challenges/accept challenges
情绪类
①气馁：discouraged/ dejected
②决心：determination/resolution
【点睛】【高分句型1】This was the point where I realized that I had to succeed in life.（由关系副词where引导限制性定语从句，由连接词that引导宾语从句作动词realized的宾语）
【高分句型2】I know that this incident had shaped these characteristics and other features in my life.（由连接词that引导宾语从句作动词know的宾语）
Writing 7
（2022·湖北·华中师大一附中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Todd was lying on the family room floor doing math homework, when he heard his mother, back from her shift at the Crafts Cottage. She was later than usual, so she must have stopped on the way home to get groceries after her work. Todd hoped so. Groceries were one of life’s good things. It was getting late, and Todd felt a bit hungry. As a matter of fact, he could hear his stomach growling. He only had some cereal for breakfast this morning. If only he could have a bite at his favorite food—the apple pie made by his mother! But it had been a while since she made desserts for them, for she had been much occupied recently.
His mother came into the family room and clicked off the TV. Todd looked at Amy, who was so lost in her book that she didn’t seem to notice their mother’s presence in the room. But their father, dozing (打瞌睡) on the couch with the remote in his hand, came awake with a guilty startle (惊吓).
“David, Todd, Amy.” Quiet voices could sound so much more threatening than shouting ones. “I need you to come into the kitchen. Now!”
Amy put her book down then, and the three of them dragged their feet into the kitchen. If they had tails, they would have been tucked (藏住) between their legs.
“Look at this place.” Todd’s mother said.
It was bad: newspapers in an untidy heap on the table, dirty dishes everywhere, an empty milk carton standing on the counter next to spilled cereal left over from breakfast, and two bags of groceries his mom had just carried in from the car.
“I want this cleaned up. I want these groceries put away. I want a decent meal represented on the table in sixty minutes. Call me when it’s ready. I’m going to be upstairs soaking in a hot tub.” Then she was gone.
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Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work.
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After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner.
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【答案】       Todd, Amy and their father quickly got down to work. He started loading dirty dishes into the dishwasher, as Amy and their father took the groceries out of the paper bags and put them on the shelves and in the fridge. “How does the food pyramid work?” their father broke the silence to ask. “You are supposed to eat a lot of grains and cereals.” Todd explained, who had studied the food pyramid at school last year. Todd drew a triangle shape on a piece of paper, divided the pyramid into four equal sections and labelled each one. They talked and decided that grains, vegetables, dairy products and protein were what they need.
After their discussion, they were ready to make dinner. They chose to make curried chicken breasts with rice. Amy reminded them of vegetables, and their father suggested putting some broccoli on the side. For dairy products, they got some yogurt from the fridge. It turned out that it took plenty of time to choose the recipe, locate the ingredients, and chop the vegetables before you even started to cook. Still, in less than an hour, it was done. When their mother came to the kitchen, she stared in apparent disbelief. “You even fixed broccoli,” she whispered. The family had dinner together and everyone believed it was the best meal they had ever had!
【导语】本文讲述了主人公托德的妈妈最近工作很忙碌，但仍要买菜、做饭和照顾家人。一天，妈妈很晚才下班回家，回到家中，看到儿子托德在做数学作业，女儿艾米在看书，丈夫大卫正躺在沙发上打瞌睡，托德的妈妈决定是时候让家人帮助她一起做家务了。她把家人叫到厨房，看着乱糟糟的厨房，嘱咐家人整理好并做好晚饭，她打算去泡个热水澡缓解疲劳。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“托德、艾米和他们的父亲很快开始工作。”可知，第一段可描写三个人整理厨房的过程和对晚餐的规划。
②由第二段首句内容“经过讨论，他们准备做晚饭。”可知，第二段可描写三个人做晚饭的过程和妈妈看到晚饭后的反应。
2.续写线索：整理厨房——规划晚饭——三人的讨论——开始做饭——晚饭完成——一家人的感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.开始做某事：start doing sth./begin doing sth.
②.打破沉默：break the silence/break the ice
③.应该做某事：be supposed to do sth./be expected to do sth.
情绪类
①.难以置信地：in disbelief/unbelievably
②.明显的：apparent/obvious