专题09 推荐信写作及实战演练-2021高考英语应用文写作思维训练和写作重点句型汇总
展开推荐信的写作及实战演练
一、推荐信三段可用句式：
首段交代写信背景，开门见山表明写信目的：
- (金华十校)Our school will celebrate its 100th birthday this July./Our school’s approaching 100th birthday will be celebrated this July. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English?
- Hearing/Learning that you are coming to visit China, I would like to recommend several place interest to you.
- I’m delighted to learn that you are going to visit Beijing, and I would like to offer my recommendation.
- Delighted to know that you are going to learn English, I consider it a wise choice to visit www.zxxk.com.
- It affords me much pleasure to recommend John to you.
主体部分：紧扣要点，推荐条件写2--3个，适当增加细节：
- (金华十校)在学校进行公开演讲相关的推荐条件：The speakers should be equipped with the following qualities.
- Initially, motivated and devoted to serving others, the speaker is supposed to hold a positive attitude towards life and enjoy a good fame or high popularity among students.
- Additionally/Aside from it, not only can he have excellent performance in all school subjects, but also is furnished with extraordinary ability of spoken and written English.
- Plus, I would be even better if the speaker is involved in relevant experience of public speaking.
- I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
- One reason why I recommend it/sb. is that ...
- He is an all-round students with excellent grades in all subjects; As a boy with great potential, he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
- Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
尾段写作：紧扣要点---表示感谢；增加细节---期待回信。
- (金华十校) I would appreciate it very much if you could do me the favor. Your early/prompt reply is highly expected.
- If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
- Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
- I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
二、推荐人物可用词汇：
能力：have a gift/talent for=be gifted/talented in; be good/skillful at=be skilled in; be experienced in, be an expert in, a boy with great ability/potential; give full play to his talent; have a good knowledge/command of; be competent/equal/qualified for; creative, efficient, intelligent...
经历：graduate from; be a graduate from, major in; gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, an all-around students with excellent grades in all subjects; be given the title of ...
性格：outgoing; easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character...
三、实战演练：
假定你是大一新生(freshman)李华，你在校园的海报上(poster)看见校学生会的各个部门将在校内招新。你对学生电视台的新闻记者一职非常感兴趣。因此，你要给学生电视台的台长写一封自荐信。要点如下：
1. 自我介绍(包括个性特长、兴趣爱好等)。
2. 高中参加各类社团和学生课外活动的经历。
3. 表达乐意为学生电视台作出贡献的意愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
- 我是李华，大一新生，18岁。出于对海报上记者一职的兴趣，很想成为校电视台的一员，因此我写信推荐我自己。
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- 在高中时，我已经是校报记者。因而我善于写作。而且我写的报道经常受到老师和同学的表扬。
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- 另外，这个经历促使我成为一个外向，独立，善于社交的人。(push/enable/allow)
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- 最重要的是，我对发生在校园内外的事情都很好奇而且热忱。因此我确定我能胜任这份工作. (我能全身心地投入到校电视台的工作中)
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- 感谢您能考虑下我的推荐，并期待您的早日回复。
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四、(他荐)假定你是李华，你的学生陈丽将要去应聘一份在培训机构当外语助教的暑假兼职工作，她像请你给她写一封推荐信，向要应聘的培训机构推荐她，介绍她的一些个人信息；要点如下：
- 陈丽的个性特点及专长。 2. 陈丽平时在校的表现（她的学业表现和获奖情况等）。
Dear Manager,
I am Li Hua, Chen Li’s teacher and I would like to recommend Chen Li to you.
In my eyes, Chen Li is a friendly and outgoing girl. She often takes an active part in various school activities to enrich her life. Besides, as the secretary of the Students’ Union, Chen Li has gained rich experience of dealing with people and different situations. More importantly, in terms of academic performance, she is a straight A student, who is especially skillful at English learning.
With rich social practice experience as well as good competence of English, Chen Li is capable of working as a teaching assistant in your company. Therefore, I strongly recommend her to you as I think she is the right person for this position. Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考答案：
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, an 18-year-old freshman. Triggering my interest in the position in your poster and faithfully tempted to become a member of the school TV station, I’m writing to recommend myself to you.
When in senior high school, I was also a journalist of the school’s newspaper. That is why I am skilled in writing. The reports written by me were often praised by my fellow schoolmates and teachers, which pushes me into/to grow as an outgoing, independent and sociable person additionally. Most importantly, I am curious as well as enthusiastic about everything happening in and around our campus, so I am firmly convinced I can be qualified for the job. /I will devote myself to working in the school TV station whole-heartedly.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
推荐信专题——推荐人、景点、大学、城市、网站
假如你是李华，来自英国的交换生George邀请你本周末做一日游向导，但你因有事不能前往。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 说明理由； 2. 景点推荐； 3. 注意事项。
Dear George,
I’m terribly sorry that I’m able to be your guide for the one-day tour this weekend, for I’ve signed up for the voluntary work at local hospital.
I highly recommend the West Lake in Hangzhou as your destination. The picturesque scenery there in this season must be a feast for your eyes. You’ll also be attracted by the historical and cultural sites and the legends behind. Considering there is a long way to go, please wear comfortable sneakers. Don’t forget to apply some sunscreen.
Wish you an enjoyable weekend.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim准备暑假来中国旅游，让你推荐一个城市。请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 推荐城市； 2. 推荐理由； 3. 你的祝愿。
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your summer holiday. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Chendu to you.
When it comes to Chendu, the first thing that comes to mind is pandas, which are national treasures of China. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city. For example, Dujiangyan, built over 2,000 years ago, is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Most importantly, Chendu is home to delicious hot food, such as mapo tofu and hotpot.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know that you’re coming to China for a trip. I’m strongly convinced that Suzhou is your best choice.
The reason why I recommend the city is that Suzhou is not only a city with a lone history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself. Next, people here out outgoing, friendly and helpful, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Last but not least, you can experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Suzhou.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(热爱中国传统文化的Jack打算来中国工作生活一段时间，推荐城市)
Dear Jack,
Learning that you’re to spend some time in China and at a loss about which city to work and live in, I’d like to recommend Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China, to you.
The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. There are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore. Plus, the classic Peking Opera performances are what you can’t miss.
I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
((Jacky 想到中国的大学学汉语，体验中国文化，推荐大学)
Dear Jacky,
I’m writing to extend my earnest welcome to you and provide my personal suggestions.
In consideration of your keen interest in Chinese culture, I strongly recommend you to apply for Zhejiang University, where you can immerse yourself in our profound history and splendid culture in its Chinese Literature major. Zhejiang University is located in Hangzhou, which will impress you with its breathtaking scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
Wish you a meaningful and fruitful journey of cultural experience in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(Edward 在学习汉语，推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站)
Dear Edward,
Thrilled to learn that you’re leaning Chinese, I strongly recommend you www.edchinese.com for the following reasons.
Intended for non-Chinese speakers, it enjoys a high popularity for its various courses, like dialogue, Chinese idioms and Tang poems, among which you’ll find a suitable one. Furthermore Chinese movies and songs are also what you can’t miss, which is guaranteed to make you immersed in the charm of language and arouse your desire to explore further. Additionally, if bumps get in the way of your exploration, the online teachers will offer you timely assistance free of charge.
Hope you find it beneficial and I sincerely wish you a pleasant journey of Chinese leaning.
Yours,
Li Hua
(向Mr. Brown推荐同学王明为英语演讲比赛主持人)
Dear Mr. Brown,
Knowing that you’re searching for a host for the coming English Speech Contest, I strongly recommend Wang Ming as a qualified candidate.
Humorous and outgoing, he never fails to make us feel at ease. Besides, he can speak English fluently and accurately. More importantly, he has the experience of being a host in the New Year party, which left us a great impression, so he knows exactly what makes a good host.
I sincerely hope you can consider my recommendation because he is the right person you are looking for.
Yours,
Li Hua
（介绍有当地文化特色的一个景点）
Dear Henry,
Glad that you want my recommendation about a tourist attraction around here. Certainly, it is Beauty Xishi's Hometown that you should visit.
The scenic spot is well worth a visit. The impressive stories about Xi Shi, one of the four beauties in Chinese history, the awesome ancient architecture standing against mountains and the unique folk items and snacks you can find there are just a perfect reflection of local cultures and customs.
Bus No. 11 at the school gate will take you right there within 15 minutes. Wish you a pleasant trip.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
