英语高二上册模块5 Unit 14 Careers课前预习课件ppt

这是一份英语高二上册模块5 Unit 14 Careers课前预习课件ppt，共14页。PPT课件主要包含了写作指导，针对训练，范文赏读等内容，欢迎下载使用。

读后续写读后续写要求考生根据提供的语言材料、所给段落开头语和所标关键词,续写成一篇结构完整、情节相符、逻辑衔接紧密的短文。考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力和发散思维能力。文章选材以故事类记叙文为主,故事线索逻辑性强,所给出的段落开头与上文联系紧密,指明了续写的方向。所标关键词与故事的时间、地点、人物、事件密切相关。读后续写要根据题目要求,在读懂原文的基础上,利用原材料的素材、线索和情节等充分发挥想象力和创造力来进行文章续写。读透材料和续写同等重要。续写这篇短文时,考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。续写段的情节并非唯一,可根据自己的理解续写不同的内容。在续写时要注意以下两个方面:
第一,续写段落的主题、人物、线索和语言风格要与文章一致。续写时要紧扣所给材料的中心,遵循上文明示或暗示的线索,按照材料中人物性格发展的规律,使用与原文风格一致的语言进行续写。第二,所续写内容与所给材料结合在一起,必须是一个完整的文章或片段。上下文衔接要自然,前后要照应。同时,在组织语言时,切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer,and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre.He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.We tk a plane t Albuquerque,a big city in the state f New Mexic.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn.Uncle Paul,my dad’s friend,picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs. 
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby.Very early in the mrning,Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn n my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草).I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses.They lked really cl. 
In the afternn,I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride,and he said yes,as lng as my dad went with me.I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway.S,my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats,gt n ur hrses,and headed slwly twards the muntains.“Dn’t be late fr supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight.It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene.It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us. 
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路小结:一、细读原文,明确篇章结构,确定续写主题。首先研读原文,确定文章的主题,明确篇章结构。阅读时,关注文中画线的关键词,标记描述事件发展过程的词和短语。对关键词进行分类,为我们理清文章脉络、进行合理想象故事发展提供有效线索。本文是一篇记叙文,叙述了父亲带“我”去“西部荒野”,喂鸡牧羊,体验农场生活;见父亲和保罗叔叔骑马很是潇洒,“我”心生向往,于是亲身上马体验。
二、剖析段首开头语,推断续写情节,把关键词分类。仔细阅读给出段落的开头语,明确其中所包含的信息并将其延伸,推断出要写的情节。续写段中应包含两部分:一部分沿用所给材料中表示四要素的关键词,一部分是自己通过合理想象新发展的关键词。关键词分类为:提示词:dad,Uncle Paul,farm huse,river,feed,sheep,late,track,get lst,sight环境:scenery,muntain,range,valley,river,lake,frest,sun,set,wind, blw动作:run,cry,think t neself情感:panic,relief,nervus,wrried
第一段的开头语Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,我们可以从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手。由于第二段的开头语是“We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.”由此可知,第一段中我们已经迷路了。这里可以写,兔子非常可爱,于是我和爸爸就去追它。然后描写我们在森林里迷路(get lst)了。眼前(in ur sight) 除了树什么也没有。我心里还想,我们不能及时赶回去吃晚饭了。
第二段的开头语是“We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.”前文保罗叔叔曾经嘱咐过我们“不要耽误吃饭”以及“不要迷了路”,本段可以从如何寻找返回的路入手去写。本段开头说,天黑了,我们不知道自己身处何地,更糟糕的是,一场意想不到的小雨下起来,冲走了我们来时留下的痕迹(track)。我差点就要崩溃了,这时爸爸(dad)记起,保罗叔叔(Uncle Paul)的农舍(farm huse)在一条小河(river)边。最终,我们找到了小河,然后沿着小河回去了。那天的晚饭确实很晚(late)。
三、串联情节,增加细节描写,恰当使用衔接词。把上一步中推断的情节进行串联,增加细节描写(内心情感、态度、表情描述),从而形成完整的段落。串联时要注意选用合适的衔接词,根据题目要求,使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词。四、润色文字,修改提升,增加语篇亮点。初稿完成后,要对续写段进行润色,即对其中的用词和句式进行提升修改。提升后的段落语言要新颖,短语优先,善用形容词和副词等修饰词。五、检查修改,排查错误,确保段落完整。读后续写检查的重点是一致性和完整性。通读所给材料和自己续写的内容,首先确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方,又要做到内容上前后连贯,语句通顺。此外,还要检查有无拼写错误、标点符号错误、 大小写错误等,检查词数和画线词是否符合要求。
Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.Dad and I fund it was s cute that we decided t chase it.After a while,we cmpletely gt lst in the frest.There was nthing but trees in ur sight.“We may nt be able t make it back in time fr supper.”I thught t myself.