天津高考英语作文分类训练：感谢信

这是一份天津高考英语作文分类训练：感谢信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假如你是晨光中学的李津，假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津等内容，欢迎下载使用。

1. 表示祝贺；
2. 讨教参赛经验；
3. 请他给你的演讲稿提出建议。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
3. 补全开头结尾，书信格式正确。
参考词汇 演讲比赛 speech cntest
2．假定你是李华，参加了你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动，收获颇多。请你在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文，对组织者表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 活动经历；
2. 感想收获；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，收到了正在学中文的外国朋友Chris送给你的马克·吐温写的一本书The Adventures f Tm Sawyer(汤姆索亚历险记)，作为回赠，你想送一本能体现中国文化的书，请给Chris写封电子邮件，内容包括:
要点：
1.对他表达感谢和对这本书的喜欢；
2. 简单介绍你赠送的这本书；
3. 希望他了解中国文化。
注意:
1.词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假如你是晨光中学的李津。你被选为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。你的英国网友Chris来信对你表示祝贺，并询问你作为志愿者工作要做何准备。请根据以下要点，给他写一封回信。
（1）感谢他的祝贺和关心；
（2）志愿者工作要做的准备，至少提及两个方面。（如：传统习俗、语言、能力等方面）
（3）询问Chris对你的工作的建议。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100;
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
5．假如你叫李华，在美国学习期间，吃住在一户美国人家里，现在马上就要学成回国，临走前你给你的房东Mrs. Jnes写封感谢信，感谢她三个月来的悉心照顾。内容包括：
（1）房东一家和蔼可亲；
（2）饭菜很合口；
（3）利用周末带你聚会，野餐，玩得开心。
注意：
1)词数100左右；
2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
7．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris得知你即将迎来18岁生日，走向成年，特发来邮件向你表示祝贺。请根据以下要点，给他回复，内容包括：
(1)表达感谢；
(2)打算如何过这个特别的生日（做疫情防控志愿者、去养老院陪伴老人……）；
(3)你对成年的感悟及未来规划。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头及落款已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
疫情防控epidemic preventin and cntrl;
养老院nursing hme
Dear Chris,
I'm mre than delighted t hear frm yu.
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Yurs,
Li Jin
8．假定你是李津，毕业之际，你校英语报面向高三学生举办以“Graduatin: An Open Letter t My Alma Mater (母校)”为题的书信征文活动。请你用英语给你的母校写一封信作为毕业感言，谈谈你在母校的收获和自己的成长。
内容主要包括：
1.对母校表示感谢；
2.结合自己的成长谈谈母校对你的培养（至少两点）；
3.表达对母校的美好祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。
Dear N. 1 High Schl,
Hw times flies!
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Yurs,
Li Jin
9．假设你是李津，你上学期参加了学校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
内容包括：1.获奖情况； 2.回顾准备过程并感谢他的帮助；3.邀他来家做客。
注意：⒈词数：120字左右；⒉可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示：十佳奖：Tp Ten Prize
Dear Mr.Craige,
I am writing t tell yu smething abut the l0th English Speaking Cntest I tk part in last week in ur schl.
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Yurs sincerely
LiJin
10．假定你是晨光中学的李津，你校英语社团将举行征文比赛，致敬援助湖北恩施奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的天津医护人员。请你用英语写一封感谢信参赛，内容如下：
（1）表达你的敬意与谢意；
（2）个人感受；
（3）表达决心。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎：Nvel Crnavirus pneumnia；流行病epidemic
Dear medical wrkers,
I’m Li Jin, a student in Chenguang High Schl.
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Yurs,
Li Jin
参考答案
1．Dear Chris,
Learning that yu have wn the first place in the Internatinal Speech Cntest fr high schl students, I’m writing t express my deepest cngratulatins n yur success. It’s great that yur hard wrk has paid ff.
I’m ging t take part in an English Speech Cntest next mnth. While English has always been ne f my best subjects, I have n experience in delivering an English speech in frnt f s many listeners, which wrries me a lt. I’m wndering if yu culd take the truble t share yur cmpetitin experience with me. Attached is my speech draft and I sincerely hpe fr yur advice s that I can have it imprved.
Cngratulatins again! And I wuld appreciate a respnse at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给写一封祝贺信，祝贺美国朋友Chris得了国际中学生演讲比赛一等奖，并向他寻求经验。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达：shw→express
发表：make→deliver
虽然：Thugh→While
想知道：wuld like t knw→wnder
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I wuld appreciate a respnse at yur earliest cnvenience.
拓展句：And I wuld be appreciate it if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]While English has always been ne f my best subjects, I have n experience in delivering an English speech in frnt f s many listeners, which wrries me a lt.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I’m wndering if yu culd take the truble t share yur cmpetitin experience with me. (if引导的宾语从句)
2．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very grateful t yu fr yur unselfish wrk in rganizing the activity Reading and Sharing English Classics. I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lt frm it.
I have read sme English classics and shared my views with ther club members, frm which I have a better understanding f western culture. In additin, I have a gd cmmand f mre English knwledge, thus imprving my reading and cmmunicative cmpetence. In the meanwhile, I have made many new friends.
In my pinin, it is interesting and meaningful. Hpe fr mre activities f this kind. Thanks again!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文对你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享（Reading and Sharing English Classics）活动的组织者表示感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
观点：view →pinin
此外： In additin →Mrever
参加： take part in → jin in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lt frm it.
拓展句：I have taken part in the activity, frm which I benefited a lt.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I have read sme English classics and shared my views with ther club members, frm which I have a better understanding f western culture.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In additin, I have a gd cmmand f mre English knwledge, thus imprving my reading and cmmunicative cmpetence.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)
3．Dear Chris,
Having gt the bk yu sent me, I can’t help writing this email t express my gratitude t yu. This bk, The Adventures f Tm Sawyer, written by Mark Twain, enjys great ppularity arund the wrld. Nt nly des it help me imprve my English but als inspires me a lt.
I knw yur Chinese has imprved a lt these days. I will send yu a bk, the name f which is Histry as Mirrr. After reading this bk, I think yu will knw mre abut Chinese histry and be a Chinese expert. In my pinin, t learn a language is t learn its culture. As yu knw, Chinese culture is prfund, which makes learning Chinese a tugh jb. Wish yu great prgress in Chinese study.
Best wishes and keep in tuch!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友James写封邮件，表达对朋友所赠之书的喜欢，以及回赠给朋友书的简单介绍。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达：cnvey→express
感激：appreciatin→gratitude
了解更多：have a better understanding f→knw mre abut
在我看来：as far as I am cncerned→in my pinin
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：I will send yu a bk, the name f which is Histry as Mirrr.
拓展句：I will send yu a bk, called Histry as Mirrr.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Having gt the bk yu sent me, I can’t help writing this email t express my gratitude t yu. （运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Nt nly des it help me imprve my English but als inspires me a lt.（运用了部分倒装）
[高分句型3]I will send yu a bk, the name f which is Histry as Mirrr. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．Dear Chris,
I have heard frm yu. Knwing that yu cngratulated me n being selected as a vlunteer fr the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank yu. Thank yu fr yur cncern.
I have learned a lt abut traditinal custms arund the wrld and in ur cuntry, which is very imprtant fr vlunteer wrk. I have the ability t receive freign guests. I am gd at English and gd at cmmunicating with peple. I can make better use f my spken English.
I hpe yu can give me valuable advice n my vlunteer wrk. I lk frward t hearing frm yu again.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Chris写封回信，感谢他对本人成为冬奥会志愿者的祝贺、介绍志愿者工作的准备并征求建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
收到……来信：get a letter frm→hear frm
擅长：d well in→be gd at
口头的：ral→spken
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knwing that yu cngratulated me n being selected as a vlunteer fr the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank yu.
拓展句：When I knw that yu cngratulated me n being selected as a vlunteer fr the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank yu.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Knwing that yu cngratulated me n being selected as a vlunteer fr the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, I sincerely thank yu. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]I have learned a lt abut traditinal custms arund the wrld and in ur cuntry, which is very imprtant fr vlunteer wrk. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Mrs. Jnes,
I am writing t express my thanks fr the three happy mnths I spent with yu and yur family. But fr yur cnsiderate care, I wuldn’t have enjyed my stay in America.
Initially, s friendly are yu and yur family that I am always feeling at hme, thus vercming the hmesickness and fright n my arrival. Mrever, I have t sing high praise fr the Chinese dishes yu made, which was just like the taste in my hmetwn. Busy as yu are, yu still try yur best t take me ut fr parties, picnics and f curse, and I really enjy the time we spent tgether.
Gne are the glden days and I’ll cherish the unfrgettable experience frever. Thanks again and Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在即将回国时，给在美国学习期间的房东Mrs. Jnes写封感谢信，感谢她三个月来的悉心照顾。内容包括：房东一家和蔼可亲；饭菜很合口；利用周末带你聚会，野餐，玩得开心。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
体贴的：cnsiderate→thughtful
最初：initially→at first
高度赞扬：sing high praise fr→think highly f
珍惜：cherish→treasure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But fr yur cnsiderate care, I wuldn’t have enjyed my stay in America.
拓展句：But fr yur cnsiderate care, I wuldn’t have enjyed my stay in America, which wuld be a great lss fr me.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Initially, s friendly are yu and yur family that I am always feeling at hme, thus vercming the hmesickness and fright n my arrival. (运用了结构中，s+形容词/副词位于句首，主句用部分倒装，以及非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2] Mrever, I have t sing high praise fr the Chinese dishes yu made, which was just like the taste in my hmetwn. (运用了which引导的非谓语动词)
[高分句型3] Busy as yu are, yu still try yur best t take me ut fr parties, picnics and f curse, and I really enjy the time we spent tgether. (as引导让步状语从句时，as表示“尽管”，从句用倒装)
6．Dear Nancy,
I am very glad t receive yur E-mail. I am very grateful t yu and yur family fr taking care f me during my study tur in the UK. And wish yu all the best.
Nw that I have finished my high schl studies, my parents and I are ging t travel t Beijing. I'm ging tTian 'anmen t see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In additin, I want t g t Qinghua Garden t enjy the elegant demeanr f famus universities. I have decided t register fr the cmputer majr. With the rapid develpment f the Internet industry, the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide. Befre chsing, cnsult peple engaged in this majr r g t training institutins fr cnsultatin. Only with a clear gal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be mre efficient.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care f→lk after
另外，此外：in additin→besides→what’s mre
雇佣：emply→hire
既然：nw that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid develpment f the Internet industry, the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develps rapidly，the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Only with a clear gal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be mre efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Nw that I have finished my high schl studies, my parents and I are ging t travel t Beijing. (运用了nw that引导的原因状语从句)
7．Dear Chris,
I'm mre than delighted t hear frm yu. Thank yu fr cngratulating me n my eighteenth birthday. I'm very happy abut it.
As I am abut t becme an adult, I plan t d smething special n this special birthday, such as vlunteering fr epidemic preventin and cntrl and accmpanying the elderly in the nursing hme. All f these can cntribute t the sciety and bring happiness t myself, which is very meaningful. Being an adult means nt nly mre freedm, but als mre respnsibility, which requires me t make a plan fr my future as an adult. First f all, I hpe t majr in medicine in cllege, because the prfessin f dctr can heal the wunded and save the dying. Secndly, I hpe I can take better care f my family and nt let my parents wrry.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Chris写封邮件，回复他对自己的生日祝贺。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表达感谢；
2.告知打算如何过这个特别的生日（做疫情防控志愿者、去养老院陪伴老人……）；
3.告知你对成年的感悟及未来规划。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
thank yu fr; d smething special; vlunteer fr; accmpany the elderly; cntribute t the sciety; majr in medicine; take better care f my family
第三步：连词成句
1.Thank yu fr cngratulating me n my eighteenth birthday.
2.As I am abut t becme an adult, I plan t d smething special n this special birthday, such as vlunteering fr epidemic preventin and cntrl and accmpanying the elderly in the nursing hme.
3.All f these can cntribute t the sciety and bring happiness t myself, which is very meaningful.
4.Being an adult means nt nly mre freedm, but als mre respnsibility, which requires me t make a plan fr my future as an adult.
5.First f all, I hpe t majr in medicine in cllege, because the prfessin f dctr can heal the wunded and save the dying.
6.Secndly, I hpe I can take better care f my family and nt let my parents wrry.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Secndly
2.表并列补充关系：nt nly…but (als)
3.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]As I am abut t becme an adult, I plan t d smething special n this special birthday, such as vlunteering fr epidemic preventin and cntrl and accmpanying the elderly in the nursing hme. （动名词作宾语）
[高分句型2]Being an adult means nt nly mre freedm, but als mre respnsibility, which requires me t make a plan fr my future as an adult.（which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]Secndly, I hpe I can take better care f my family and nt let my parents wrry.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．Dear N. 1 High Schl,
Hw times flies!
As graduatin is drawing near, I’d like t express my sincere gratitude t Alma Mater.
I had s many memries in three years’ life. I still remember, when I began t learn English, I fund it t difficult. N matter hw hard I tried, I still culdn’t d well in it and almst gave it up. With the patient help f my English teacher, I’ve becme gd at English. S I’ve learned a lt frm her. I will try t help thers when they are in truble. Besides, I have made a lt f friends, wh bring me laughter and tears. We will help and encurage each ther in a new jurney, where I am nt alne anymre.
Finally, I will extend my sincere wishes fr my mther schl and respectable teachers. I hpe that my Alma Mater will have a brighter future. Yurs
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考查以“Graduatin: An Open Letter t My Alma Mater (母校)”为题给自己的母校写一封毕业感言。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对母校表示感谢；
2.结合自己的成长谈谈母校对你的培养（至少两点）；
3.表达对母校的美好祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
express my sincere gratitude t(表达诚挚的感谢); d well in(在……做得好); give up(放弃); with the help f(在……的帮助下); learn frm(向……学习); in truble(处于麻烦中); make friends(交朋友)
第三步：连词成句
1. As graduatin is drawing near, I’d like t express my sincere gratitude t Alma Mater.
2. I still remember, when I began t learn English, I fund it t difficult.
3. N matter hw hard I tried, I still culdn’t d well in it and almst gave it up.
4. With the patient help f my English teacher, I’ve becme gd at English.
5. I will try t help thers when they are in truble.
6. Besides, I have made a lt f friends, wh bring me laughter and tears.
7. We will help and encurage each ther in a new jurney, where I am nt alne anymre.
8. Finally, I will extend my sincere wishes fr my mther schl and respectable teachers.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： Finally
2.表并列补充关系： Besides
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：S
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]As graduatin is drawing near, I’d like t express my sincere gratitude t Alma Mater.（as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]N matter hw hard I tried, I still culdn’t d well in it and almst gave it up.（N matter hw引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型3]Besides, I have made a lt f friends, wh bring me laughter and tears.（wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Mr. Craige,
I am writing t tell yu smething abut the l0th English Speaking Cntest I tk part in last week in ur schl. I gt the “Tp Ten Prize” ut f 30 cmpetitrs, which was ttally beynd my imaginatin.
When I heard the final result I culdn’t believe my ears and jumped with jy. It’s thanks t yur effrt that I have made much mre rapid prgress in my spken English. Befre the cntest, whenever yu had free time, yu wuld help me practice my spken English. Yu cmmunicated with me as much as pssible, and crrected my prnunciatin, intnatin as well. What’s mre, yu taught me sme helpful speaking skills and made me full f cnfidence. Withut yur help I culdn’t have achieved such a gd result. I have benefited frm this cmpetitin a lt. All in all, I really appreciate yur help.
Thank yu again fr yur advice and kind help. I sincerely invite yu t my hme fr dinner and have a gd time.
Yurs sincerely
LiJin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr.Craige写封邮件，感谢他对英语演讲比赛提供了很多指导和帮助。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.获奖情况；
2.回顾准备过程并感谢他的帮助；
3.邀他来家做客。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
the l0th English Speaking Cntest（第十届英语演讲比赛）;take part in（参加）; “Tp Ten Prize” （“十佳奖”）; thanks t（由于）; make much mre rapid prgress（取得更快的进步）; cmmunicate with（和…沟通）; benefit frm（从…中获益）;have a gd time（玩得很愉快）
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing t tell yu smething abut the l0th English Speaking Cntest I tk part in last week in ur schl.
2. I gt the “Tp Ten Prize” ut f 30 cmpetitrs, which was ttally beynd my imaginatin.
3. It’s thanks t yur effrt that I have made much mre rapid prgress in my spken English.
4. Befre the cntest, whenever yu had free time, yu wuld help me practice my spken English.
5. Yu cmmunicated with me as much as pssible, and crrected my prnunciatin, intnatin as well.
6. Withut yur help I culdn’t have achieved such a gd result. I have benefited frm this cmpetitin a lt.
7 I sincerely invite yu t my hme fr dinner and have a gd time.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What’s mre
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I gt the “Tp Ten Prize” ut f 30 cmpetitrs, which was ttally beynd my imaginatin. 我在30个参赛选手中获得了“十佳奖”，这完全超出了我的想象。（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
It’s thanks t yur effrt that I have made much mre rapid prgress in my spken English. 正是由于你的努力，我的英语口语进步得更快了。（It’s…that…强调句型）
[高分句型3]
Befre the cntest, whenever yu had free time, yu wuld help me practice my spken English. 比赛前，只要你有时间，你都会帮我练习英语口语。（whenever引导时间状语从句）
10．Dear medical wrkers,
I’m Li Jin, a student in Chenguang High Schl. I’d like t express my sincere gratitude t yu all fr yur devtin and sacrifice in the battle against Nvel Crnavirus pneumnia .
The past few mnths have witnessed the utbreak f this epidemic. During the utbreak, yu were sent t Enshi, Hubei, wrking under unusual cnditins and unimaginable stress. Yu devted yurselves t treating patients, regardless f the ptential danger f getting infected. Medical wrkers are just rdinary peple and I believe yu all have fears, but t win the battle against the epidemic, parents have left their children and cuples have gt separated. And it is yu wh deserve all admiratin and lve frm peple acrss ur cuntry. Yu build up ur cnfidence t defeat it and prvide us with a safe envirnment t study, fr which we are really grateful. Wrds can’t fully cnvey ur thankfulness fr yur great cntributins. As a student, I am determined t study harder and ne day I want t becme a medical wrker like yu.
Thanks again—my angels in white.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求你写一份感谢信参赛，致敬援助湖北恩施奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的天津医护人员。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和过去时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.表达你的敬意与谢意；
2.个人感受；
3.表达决心。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
express my sincere gratitude；under unusual cnditins and unimaginable stress.；win the battle against the epidemic；build up ur cnfidence；fully cnvey ur thankfulness。
第三步：连词成句
1.I’d like t express my sincere gratitude t yu all fr yur devtin and sacrifice in the battle against Nvel Crnavirus pneumnia.
2.During the utbreak, yu were sent t Enshi, Hubei, wrking under unusual cnditins and unimaginable stress.
3.Medical wrkers are just rdinary peple and I believe yu all have fears, but t win the battle against the epidemic, parents have left their children and cuples have gt separated.
4.Yu build up ur cnfidence t defeat it and prvide us with a safe envirnment t study, fr which we are really grateful.
5.Wrds can’t fully cnvey ur thankfulness fr yur great cntributins.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：回顾他们的贡献；表示感恩；努力学习，向他们学习。
2.表示并列补充关系：regardless f；but；And；
第五步：润色修改
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如强调句式：And it is yu wh deserve all admiratin and lve frm peple acrss ur cuntry.；非限制性定语从句：Yu build up ur cnfidence t defeat it and prvide us with a safe envirnment t study, fr which we are really grateful.；非谓语动词：During the utbreak, yu were sent t Enshi, Hubei, wrking under unusual cnditins and unimaginable stress…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。