【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 4 课时4 Writing 讲义
展开Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark
Writing | Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one, and why? Try to write two paragraphs. Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened |
知识点01 思路点拨
本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题：
①介绍自己现在和过去的变化；
②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化；
③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
体裁：说明文
时态：用一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：第一人称。
知识点02 必背单词组和句型
词组：外貌：tall, big and strong, a little heavy, overweight (超重的), be of medium height / build, thin, short, light, straight / curly / long / short hair, high / big nose, big / bright eyes, wear glasses
性格：funny, friendly / nice / kind, outgoing, serious, humorous, active, brave, helpful, popular, talkative (健谈的), silent, quiet, shy, lazy, be easy / hard to get on / along with, be ready to help others
兴趣与爱好：in the school music / ... club, on a basketball / ... team, love / like / enjoy (playing) soccer / ..., be interested in / be good at ..., dislike / can’t stand ...
行为习惯：watch TV / movies, listen to pop / ... music, hate P.E. / ... class, not eat a lot of vegetables / ..., not read a lot of books, be afraid of the dark / high places / being alone / giving a speech in public ...
学习：study / work hard, get good scores / grades on one’s exams, do well in school, be good at English / ..., become less / more interested in studying, be absent from classes, fail the exam, be bad at / be poor in / be bored with / do badly in ...
衣着：dress in black / ..., wear jeans / ..., be dressed as a boy, dress beautifully / nicely / poorly / simply / ...
句型：
1. ... used to be / do ..., but now ...
2. ... didn’t use to be / do ...
3. ... would often / usually / always ...
4. ... had the habit of ...
5. ... has / have changed so much / a lot / greatly / …
6. ... no longer ...
7. ... doesn’t / don’t ... anymore.
8. It was common to see ... do / doing ... (in those days / at that time / ...)
佳句赏析：
1. There have been great changes in my life in the last few years.在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了巨大的变化。
2. Many things have changed since I was a child.自从我还是个孩子以来，很多事情都发生了变化。
3. How greatly I have changed in the last few years!在过去的几年里，我发生了多么大的变化！
4. People sure have changed, and so have I.人确实变了，我也变了。
5. It seems that I have changed a lot.看来我变了很多。
6. These years, I’m not who I used to be.这些年来，我已经不是以前的我了。
知识点03 提纲
列提纲 | 写句子 | |
我的变化 | 开头 |
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我的一些变化 | 外貌方面：I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. 性格方面：I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. 爱好方面：I used to hate reading, but now I have fallen in love with it. | |
重要变化及如何发生的 | The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because reading gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me very happy. As a famous saying goes, “Reading makes a full man”.
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知识点04 范文
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. I used to hate reading, but now I have fallen in love with it.
The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because reading gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me very happy. As a famous saying goes, “Reading makes a full man”.
我所发生的变化！
在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了很大的变化。我过去很矮，但现在我是班上个子最高的学生之一。我过去很害羞，很安静，但现在我很外向，喜欢交朋友。我过去讨厌读书，但现在我爱上了它。
我生活中最重要的变化是对阅读产生了兴趣。去年夏天，我最好的朋友给了我一本有趣的书。我非常喜欢它，所以我开始读其他的书。这是最重要的变化，因为阅读给了我很多知识，让我非常快乐。正如一句名言所说，“读书使人充实”。
多篇范文赏析
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be overweight but I’m not anymore. I lost a lot of weight after I started playing tennis. Playing tennis three times a week is a very good exercise. Now I’m fitter and healthier.
The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English. Thanks to my English teacher, Mrs Wong, who gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other English books. This is the most important change because I’m no longer afraid of English and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me.
我所发生的变化！
在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了很大的变化。我曾经超重，但现在不超重了。我开始打网球后体重减轻了很多。每周打三次网球是一项很好的运动。现在我更健康了。
我生活中最大的变化是英语越来越好。感谢我的英语老师王女士，她给了我一本有趣的书。我非常喜欢它，所以我开始读其他的英语书。这是最重要的改变，因为我不再害怕英语，我的考试成绩也更好了。这让我的父母更为我骄傲。
How I’ve Changed
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. When I was a little child, I used to play with my friends all day long. We found that almost anything could bring fun to us. But now, I am growing up, things seem to change gradually that I don't realize.
I had a lot of time to play before, but now nearly all my time is spent on study and homework. I used to watch cartoons, but now I prefer news and English programs. Generally speaking, things turn better. Now, I am interested in reading and writing. I think that the more good books I read, the more knowledge I get.
The biggest change in my life was that I began to love sports at the age of ten. This is the most important change. Because I didn’t use to play sports after school. When I was ten years old, I often fell ill. So my parents encouraged me to play sports after school. Now I’m really interested in sports and I’m much healthier.
我所发生的变化！
在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了很大的变化。当我还是个孩子的时候，我常常整天和朋友们一起玩。我们发现几乎任何东西都能给我们带来乐趣。但现在，随着我的成长，事情似乎在逐渐改变，我没有意识到这一点。
我以前有很多时间玩，但现在几乎所有的时间都花在了学习和家庭作业上。我过去常看动画片，但现在我更喜欢新闻和英语节目。总的来说，情况有所好转。现在，我对阅读和写作感兴趣。我认为我读的好书越多，我获得的知识就越多。
我生命中最大的变化是我从十岁开始喜欢运动。这是最重要的变化。因为我过去放学后不运动。当我十岁的时候，我经常生病。所以我父母鼓励我放学后做运动。现在我真的对运动很感兴趣，而且我更健康了。
题组A 基础过关练
1.假如你有一位同学叫Jack,他在生活和学习方面与过去有很大的不同。请根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下他的进步。
过去 | 现在 |
起床晚,经常上课迟到 | 早早起床读英语,按时到校 |
上课说话,不听课 | 认真听讲,记笔记 |
晚上不学习,玩游戏 | 晚上在家认真学习,有问题向父母寻求帮助 |
…… | …… |
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
2.由于父母工作变动,Mike两年前随父母从英国来到了中国北京。他想给他祖父母写一封信,叙述来中国后的各种变化。请你根据表格内容,代替Mike完成这封信,词数80左右。
注意:1.信息完整。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
In England | In Beijing |
常和祖父母聊天 | 父母繁忙,没人聊天 |
早餐吃面包、喝牛奶 | 习惯了面条和鸡蛋;更加强壮 |
不喜欢球类运动 | 对篮球感兴趣 |
Dear grandparents,
How is it going?________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
题组B 能力提升练
3.初中生活中，你有些什么改变？你是怎样改变的？请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化。写作内容包括兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面。
要求：1.80词左右；
2．任选两方面内容；
3．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
4．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。
How I Have Changed
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4.法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
要求：
1.选取至少两个方面；
2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同；
3.如何取得这些进步的；
4.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。
注意：便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：used to do/be... , try one’s best to do…,make progress in( doing....)
I have made progress
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题组C 培优拔尖练
5.请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。
要求：1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
He/She Has Changed a Lot
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6.时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1.介绍你生活中的变化：
（1）过去安静内向，现在性格外向开朗；
（2）过去不喜欢运动，现在喜欢打乒乓球、游泳；
（3）过去讨厌学习，害怕考试，现在努力学习。
2.谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要求：1.包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.100词左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies！It has been two years since I went to the middle school. _______________________________
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