专题09 难忘回忆类-备战2024高考读后续写真题逐步解析专练

这是一份专题09 难忘回忆类-备战2024高考读后续写真题逐步解析专练，共11页。试卷主要包含了1 整体把握， 爸爸看到了，只好跟着我， 然后我们意识到我们在森林深处， 乌云似乎在天空聚集， 没有指南针等内容，欢迎下载使用。

（2018年6月浙江卷）
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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Paragraph2: We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
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真题解析
2.1 整体把握：
2.2逐句写作：
第一段：
1. 它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色头发。
It was furry with a cat f grgeus brwn hair.
2. 它用它的一对红眼睛看着我，然后开始在前面疾驰。
After lking up at me with its pair f red bulbs, it began t scurry ahead.
3. “为什么不把它抓回来交给保罗叔叔呢？他们一定很高兴。”想到这一点，我拼命地骑着马去寻找它。
“Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thught, I rde hard t hunt fr it.
4. 爸爸看到了，只好跟着我。兔子非常敏捷，很快就进入了一片山林。
Dad saw it and had t fllw me. The rabbit was very agile, sn entering a muntain frest.
5. 我们不得不下马，继续追赶，完全忘记了后面的赛道。
We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinuing the chase and ttally frgetting the track back.
6. 尽管我们拼命尝试，但兔子最终还是看不见了。
Even thugh we tried desperately, the rabbit was ut f sight in the end.
7. 然后我们意识到我们在森林深处。
Then we realized we were in the deep part f a frest.
第二段：
8. 乌云似乎在天空聚集。
And dark cluds seemed t be gathering in the sky.
9. 拿出手机，我们很快就发现出了问题：没有信号。
Taking ut the cell phne, we sn fund smething was wrng: n signal.
10. 没有指南针。我吓坏了，盯着爸爸，试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。
And n cmpass. Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him.
11. “也许你在地理课上学到的东西管用，”他指着天上的星星说。
“Maybe what yu have learned in gegraphy class wrks," he said, pinting t the stars in the sky.
12. 我知道他指的是北极星。很快我们找到了正确的方向。
I knew he meant the Nrth Star. Sn we fund the right directin.
13. 我们赶紧回去找马。河又出现了。
We hurried back finding the hrses. And the river was in sight again.
14. 家人很担心，准备报警。
The family was wrried and abut t call the plice.
15. 一看到我们，他们松了一口气，紧紧地拥抱着我们。
At the sight f us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly.
16. 在我的一生中，没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了！
There was nthing mre memrable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
2.3 范文赏析
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was furry with a cat f grgeus brwn hair. After lking up at me with its pair f red bulbs , it began t scurry ahead. “Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thught, I rde hard t hunt fr it. Dad saw it and had t fllw me. The rabbit was very agile, sn entering a muntain frest. We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinuing the chase and ttally frgetting the track back. Even thugh we tried desperately, the rabbit was ut f sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part f a frest.
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. And dark cluds seemed t be gathering in the sky. Taking ut the cell phne, we sn fund smething was wrng: n signal. And n cmpass. Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him. “Maybe what yu have learned in gegraphy class wrks," he said, pinting t the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the Nrth Star. Sn we fund the right directin. We hurried back finding the hrses. And the river was in sight again. The family was wrried and abut t call the plice. At the sight f us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nthing mre memrable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
素材积累
高级句型素材积累（非谓语动词/倒装句/比较级的否定表示最高级）
3.1 非谓语动词
1>在家整整复习了一个周末，他满怀信心地期待即将到来的考试。
Having reviewed his lessns fr a whle weekend at hme, he expected the cming exam with cnfidence.
2>她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。
Having experienced s many failures ne after anther, she finally picked herself up.
3> 因为被老师责骂，他大哭起来。
Sclded by the teacher, he burst int tears.
4>他的爸爸去世了，留给他一大笔钱。
His father died, leaving him a great deal f mney.
5>女孩微笑着，长发在微风中飘动。
The girl smiled with her lng hair flwing in the breeze.
6>他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水。
His wife was in deep srrw with her eyes filled with tears.
3.2 倒装句
1> 他太激动了以致于无法入睡。
S excited was he that he culdn’t g t sleep.
这就是“有志者事竟成”这个真理。
Such is the truth that where there is a will, there is a way.
直到失去所有的财产，他才意识到自己被骗了。
Nt until he had lst all his pssessins did he realize that he was cheated.
山顶上坐着一个巨人。
n the tp f muntain sits a giant man.
沉默之后，响起一阵掌声。
After silence came a rund f applause.
3.3 否定+比较级表示最高级
1> 没有什么比这更令人沮丧了。
Nthing is mre frustrating than this.
我非常赞同你的观点。
I can’t agree with yu mre.
在我的一生中，没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了！
There was nthing mre memrable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
四、模拟演练
练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My Dad’s Best Flwer
I remember my first hme was a small apartment n the secnd flr with a lvely and spacius balcny (阳台). When my mm was busy in the kitchen, she let me stay n the balcny watching the kids playing in the street. On that balcny I played smetimes with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years ld and when my mn was absent she was like a mther t me. The balcny was a great hbby place fr my father. After his wrk he used t grw carnatins (康乃馨) in the flwer bxes. His carnatins were red, pink and white, and everyne appreciated them fr their beauty.
He tk care f them with s much lve and devtin. He dealt carefully with his flwers like a mther taking care f her baby. Many times I sat n the flr f the balcny fr hurs bserving him and his lvely flwers with patience. He was always ding smething n that balcny. He was watering them every day, cleaning the balcny flr, changing the ptting sil and when the stems (茎) were thick, strng and high enugh, he started his imprvement peratin like a dctr.
My dad tk a tiny knife and with his left hand he held the stem f the carnatin and measured the height. Then he made a small mark n the stem with his finger. Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife, just enugh t fit in a grain f barley (插穗的芽). Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage. His jb was then t water the plants and t take care f them. “N ne shuld tuch them” , he said t mm. Every day, when he came hme frm wrk he went straight t the balcny.
Mm used t tell us: “D nt tuch daddy’s flwers. ” Fr us it was a fascinating experience t watch hw the small stems were grwing and making flwers. When the carnatins had grwn big enugh, my dad enjyed watching them every day. We the kids did t.
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One day, my elder sister, wh lved dad very much, had a great idea.
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When my dad arrived, he went as usual，straight t the balcny and saw his flwers lying n the flr like dead animals.
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练习（二）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was February 8th. I was crrecting students’ hmewrk when I heard a knck at the ffice dr. There std my husband Michael with a lng gld bx. The tp had a clear, plastic windw. Inside were a half-dzen yellw rses, the same as the flwers I had carried in my wedding party.
“Happy first half-anniversary,” Michael said with a huge smile.
I was s surprised that I culdn’t even answer. The flwers were beautiful and went well with the gld bx. I std there in frnt f my clleagues and sme f my students with my heart beating very fast.
The first six mnth f ur marriage had passed by. We taught at the same middle schl, s we always had plenty t talk abut. We enjyed ding things tgether, including travelling, cking, and ging t the theatre. I knew frm the beginning that Michael was thughtful, but these flwers were abve and beynd. He was nt nly thughtful but s rmantic.
Michael and I had met a year and half earlier when we applied fr the same teaching jb. We hadn’t knwn there were tw teaching psitins available when we had the interviews. His interview was first, and mine fllwed. When we had finished it, we fund urselves seated next t each ther in the headmaster’s ffice.
Smiling shyly at each ther, we started chatting. “Hw did yu g?” Michael asked. “Oh, fine,” I replied. “It turns ut that there is a typing teacher psitin pen. I tld them I wuld take it if they needed me.” “D yu knw hw t teach typing?” Thugh I felt very angry，I answered calmly, “Of curse, yes. But d yu knw hw t teach?” Then, there was a perid f silence between us.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Luckily, befre we had an argument, the headmaster appeared.
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Michael was a great husband wh always remembered my wrds.
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Over the years, I've been guilty f hurriedly shutting the frnt dr t many strangers when they came t my hme kncking with the intentin f selling things. I hated it when they tried their best t persuade me t buy the things they prmted. But earlier this year, arund Easter time, a dear friend f mine, Linda, had an experience that changed my mind and attitude twards these "intruders".
Last winter, Linda went thrugh a very messy divrce and was very depressed. S she quit her jb and left Ls Angeles, where she encuntered her ex-husband in cllege. She flew t Bstn n the east cast f the US. Later, she settled in a new neighbrhd in East Bstn. Hwever, shrtly afterwards, the cmpany where she wrked went bankrupt（破产）. Suffering a series f bitter blws. she fell ill, a severe case f flu. She had t stay at hme fr the whle week, feeling extremely bad and hpeless.
Early ne mrning, Linda lay in bed, feeling painful all ver. Then all f a sudden, there was an upsetting knck n her frnt dr. Struggling ut f the bed, she dragged herself t the windw. There, utside, she saw a yung lady carefully hlding sme leaflets（传单）and a TV set mdel. She knew f a large TV set establishment nearby and assumed a message was abut t be gently delivered. "This is the last thing I need tday." She muttered t herself and hesitantly pened the dr.
Cughing bitterly, Linda stuck her head ut. "Excuse me, madam…" the yung lady said with a smile. "I'm srry but I am nt the slightest bit interested in any TV whatever." Linda interrupted her impatiently. "As a matter f fact, I am feeling terribly awful." "Is there anything I can d fr yu, madam?" the yung lady asked with cncern. "N thanks, just leave me alne." Linda then shut the dr in her face. The yung lady plitely turned and left in silence.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few hurs later, anther knck.
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Paragraph 2: Linda was surprised by this lvely actin.
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范文赏析
练习（一）
One day, my elder sister, wh lved dad very much, had a great idea.Wanting t help dad, she cut the flwers frm their stems and arranged them n the flr. She believed that dad wuld be very pleased t see them that way. When mm realized what my sister had dne, she didn’t say a wrd. My sister didn’t understand why we were s quiet withut a wrd f appreciatin.
When my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight t the balcny and saw his flwers lying n the flr like dead animals. He lked twards the street t see if there was ne frm the neighbrs children wh culd have dne it. Then he entered the living rm and lked at mm in silence.
We all waited fr a punishment. Mm, wh always taught us t tell the truth lked at dad and said. “We have n bad neighbrs in ur area.” Then with anice tne she cntinued, “N utsider did this great jb, nly ur lvely daughter, Maria”. Dad’s face changed frm tense t a smile and then he said “D I have a better flwer than my lvely daughter?” My sister smiled and gave dad a big hug.
练习（二）
Luckily, befre we had an argument, the headmaster appeared. The headmaster’s arrival relieved ur embarrassment. Then he tld us the result f the interview: “Cngratulatins, yu tw guys were welcme t ur schl!” When hearing the news, I was shcked and delighted. It turned ut that there were tw teaching psitins available. Thus, we became clleagues at ne schl. Then I fund that the tw f us shared many similar hbbies and always had a lt t talk, which led us t fall in lve with each ther in the prcess f getting alng. One year later, we gt married.
Michael was a great husband wh always remembered my wrds. One day when we had a talk, I mentined ur wedding by accident, “Hney, d yu still remember the scene and the beautiful flwer?” “Yes, f curse. It is beautiful!” I didn’t expect that he had kept my wrds in mind and dne such a surprise fr me n ur half-anniversary. It never ccurred t me that he did rmantic things fr me. I was extremely grateful t him fr what he had dne fr me. His thughtful and rmantic behavir made me realize that he was such a gd husband that deserved I cherish and lve frever.
练习（三）
A few hurs later, anther knck. Linda glanced ut f the windw and t her surprise, there at the dr was the same lady, back again. Really annyed this time, Linda pened the dr but befre she culd speak, with a cncerned lk n her face, the yung lady handed Linda a warm pt, saying, "I'm s srry I disturbed yu earlier. I thught yu may like this hmemade chicken sup. Hpefully it might make yu feel a little better. "
Linda was surprised by this lvely actin. Being new t the area, she didn't knw any neighbrs, s the gesture was all the mre appreciated. She culd nly smile embarrassedly and sincerely thanked her. With that, the lady left. After she related this stry t me, I thught abut hw tuching this deed really was. Especially in tday's wrld where, sadly, kindness and thughtfulness seen s rare. I als realized that thinking abut thers and shwing kindness is the real meaning f lve.
主题语境
人与自我--生活与学习--个人、家庭、社区及学校生活
语篇话题
本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为爸爸带我去西部叔叔家度假时，我和爸爸去骑马遇到的趣事，令我终身难忘。
情节梳理
故事要素
when：ne summer hliday
where：the muntains in the Wild West, in New Mexic
wh：my dad and I
what：My dad tk me t take a hrse ride, and during the ride we met a little rabbit. When we chase after the rabbit, we gt lst.
情节走向
通过第一段首句“ Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. ”可预测，续写思路为：兔子什么样--骑马追兔--兔子不见--我们迷路。
通过第二段首句“We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. ”可预测，续写思路为：天色渐黑--害怕惊恐--借助大自然知识找到方向--成功找到家。