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2024年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 2.13 热点话题表达微技能3(旅游见闻+景色描写技巧) 素材积累 1 英语写景段落欣赏 Natural Phenomena 自然现象 The Clear Sky 晴空 When you look at the sky on a clear day, it seems as if the earth is covered by a blue dome. If you stand at a place where the surface of the earth is flat; the sky seems to meet the earth in any direction you look. 在晴朗的日子,你看到天空就像一个蓝色的大圆盘.如果你极目远眺,无论从那个方向,看到的都是天地相接的地平线. Summer Evenings夏夜 Sometimes I will see falling stars draw bright lines in the sky. There is harmony between the moon and stars in the quiet sky and the slow pace of the village. I really enjoy the peaceful summer evenings in the village.有时我得到流星在天空中划出明亮的线条,宁静的夜空中挂着一轮明月和闪烁的星星,与慢节奏的村庄形成一幅和谐的美景.我非常喜欢村庄宁静的夏夜. The Sun rises 日出 The next day, the sunlight woke him very early, hiding the stars under a pink blue and blue sky. But the stars kept watching him from above. 第二天,日出的光线很早就将他唤醒.夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色的天空下. 但是它们仍然从天上看着他. Beautiful Dawn 凌晨美景 It was the perfect morning for our daily walk: A brisk wind sweeping ocean air across our faces, fresh mounds of kelp laughing in clumps along the beach, and the sun coming up from its flat bed of fog, red and new and full of promises. 对我们每日的散步来说,这是一个宜人的清晨.清冽的微风夹着海洋的气息扑面而来.一簇簇新鲜的海藻在海滩随处可见.旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起,东升红彤彤,新鲜而充满生机. The Moon 月亮 It is a beautiful and quiet night. The moon is like a disc hanging on the dark sky , which casts its light on everything.一个美丽而宁静的夜晚,月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照万物. Summer Rain 夏雨 The first drops of rain are huge; they split into the dust on the ground, and plunk on the roof. The rain now becomes a torrent, flung by a rising wind. Together they batter the trees and level the grasses. Water streams off roofs. There is only water. 开始雨点很大,溅起地上的灰尘,打在屋顶上丁当作响.接着大更大的风助威下, 瓢泼大雨倾盆而下,雨水砸向树木,踏平草地.立即,雨水像溪流一样从屋顶奔流而下.到处都是水的世界. Rainbow 彩虹 I am drawn outside while the rain still falls. All around, there is cool and welcome feeling. I breathe deeply and watch the sun’s rays streak through breaking clouds. One ray catches the drops that from on the edge of the roof, and I am treated to a row of tiny, quivering colors—my private rainbow. They are red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet, which makes a wonderland. 雨一直在下，我跑出去，享受周围那一丝丝清凉的感觉。我深深地吸了一口气，看着阳光明媚穿过残云。一缕阳光正好照在屋檐边的雨滴上，形成了只有我才看见的一条细细的，忽隐忽现的彩虹。五颜六色-----赤橙黄绿青蓝紫，简直就像仙境一般。 9．A Thunder Storm 雷雨 The sky is full of black clouds. Flashes of lightning lit up the courts, old houses, and ramshackle porches, and thunder begins to roar overhead. No birds sing any longer, but the leaves of the trees rustle and a wind blows against our faces. A drop of water falls, then another, and then the rain falls on the leaves of the trees and the iron roofs with a noise reminding us of the beating of drums. A brilliant stripe o flight fills the sky. Suddenly there comes a terrible thunderclap overhead, and then the sky is full of roars of thunder. 天空乌云密布，雷电闪闪，照亮了天井、老屋，还有那摇摇欲坠的走廊。一声惊雷在头顶上炸响。只有树叶的沙沙声。风吹打在脸上，雨开始一滴一滴地下着，雨滴打在树叶和铁皮屋顶上，就像敲锣打鼓的声音。一道闪电越过天空，紧接着头顶上又是一声惊雷，然后天空中轰鸣的雷声不断。 10．Snow Picture 雪景 When I got up the next morning, I saw that the ground was covered with a vast blanket of whiteness. With the white ground underfoot, and the chimneys here and there sending out brown smoke into the clear blue sky overhead, the whole scene might match the most beautiful morning picture in the world. 当我第二天早晨起床时，我看到大地被厚厚的白色毯子覆盖着。在脚下白色的大地上，缕缕炊烟升入头顶蔚蓝的天空，犹如世界上最美的动人画卷。 11．Autumn Dusk 秋日黄昏 The most beautiful thing during the autumn is dusk. The setting sun looks like a burning ball of fire; it makes the sky look so colorful. A flock of wild geese fly back and forth in the sky, as if they don’t want to leave. The many insects making noise in the grass make fields seem more interesting.秋日的黄昏最美的。太阳像一个大火球，把天空染成五颜六色。一群大雁在天空飞来飞去，似乎不想离开。草中的虫鸣使田野显得更有趣。 12．Winter Night 冬夜 It was cold and bleak in the late winter. The night was dark, not a star was to be seen in the gloomy and dismal sky. The north wind was howling dreadfully outside the house, like the screams of some wounded wild beasts.阴冷的寒冬，夜里一片漆黑，在阴沉的天空中甚至连一颗星星都看不见。屋外北风呼啸，像受伤的野兽的尖叫声。 13．Snow 初雪 The first snow came, How beautiful it was, falling so silently all day long, all night long, on the mountains, in the meadows, on the roofs of living. All white save the river, that marked its course by a winding black line across the landscape, What silence, too, came with the snow, and what seclusion! Every sound was muffled every noise changed to something soft and musical. No more trumping hoofs, no more rattling wheels! 初雪飘零，多么美啊！它整日整夜那么静静地飘着，落在山岭上，落在草地上，落在屋顶上。在一片白茫茫之中，只有河流在美丽的画面上划出一道曲曲弯弯的黑线。初雪飘落时，是何等的宁静、何等的幽静！一切声响都江堰市趋于沉寂，一切噪音都化作柔和的音乐。再没有嘈杂的步行声，再没有滚滚的车轮声。 Colorful World 五彩世界 1．The Setting Sun 日落 When the sun begins to set behind the mountains, its long rays light up the green fields of wheat or rice. And all the trees and bushes with a golden glow. The clouds above the sky also begin to glow with a golden light, and the mountains are of a lovely purple color.太阳快要下山了，柔和的光照在绿色的田野里和丛林上，金光闪闪，天空的云彩也开始金光闪闪，山也变成美丽的紫色。 2．Toward Evening 傍晚 Then as the fiery ball of the sun is gone altogether behind the mountain, the red color of the clouds begins to fade, and gradually fakes away until all the clouds are grey and the mountains become a deep black clear cut against the pale sky, where the evening stars take the place of the sun and shine brightly. 火红的太阳隐没到山后，红彤彤的云彩也渐渐地褪色，天空成了灰色，山也变成了深褐色，像一幅版画映衬在苍白的天空中。 夜空中明亮的星星开始闪耀。。。。。。 3．Colorful World 五彩世界 The sun was already in the west but it was still shining. Its light was so bright that I couldn’t even open my eyes. When I arrived at the west Hill, the light became a bit yellow. After a short while, it was completely golden, then red. The sun nearly set. It was like a great fiery ball. The cloud around it was also painted red. Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun. At last it disappeared behind the cloud. It was already dark. 太阳偏西，但还非常明亮，强光刺得我睁不开眼。当我到达西山时，光线泛黄，一会儿，就变成了金黄色，然后又变成红色，太阳快要下山了，就像一个大火球，把周围的云也染红了。太阳慢慢地沉下去，终于躲入云中，天已经黑了。 4．Beach Holiday 海滩假日 I had always liked the beach. I t didn’t matter if the sun didn’t shine while you were hiking in the lake District—in fact, a light rain made it all the more exhilarating. I yearned for the bright blues, yellows and reds of a beach holiday. 我一向喜欢海滩。当来到湖泊地区远足时，天空没有阳光并不要紧。事实上，一场小雨会更增添其中的情趣罗强烈地向往着海滩假日中明亮的湛蓝色、金黄色。 5．Natural Beauty 自然美景 On one side, beginning at the very lip of the pool, was a tiny meadow, a cool, resilient surface of green that extended to the vase of the frowning wall. Beyond the pool a gentle slope of earth ran up and up to meet the opposing wall. Fine grass covered the slope-grass that was spangled with flowers, with here and there patches of color, orange and purple and golden. 在深潭的一边，有一片小小的草地，凉爽而富有弹性的绿草地从潭的边缘延伸到皱折的峭壁下面。深潭的另、一边，一个缓坡延伸着直上到对面的峭壁。满坡鲜美的草，五颜六色的花朵，桔黄色的、紫色的、金黄色的点缀其间。 Natural World山川风貌 1．The Morning Dew 晨露 On sunshiny summer mornings, the grass is often wet with dew. There maybe drops of dew on flowers and bushes, and spider webs, too. The drops of dew sparkle like jewels when the sun shines on them. 在晴朗的夏天的凌晨，草上常常沾满露珠，花丛中，甚至蜘蛛网上也有。当阳光照耀在露珠上时露珠像珠宝一样闪闪发光。 2．Lijiang River 漓江 The river is rally very clean and pure. We rented a boat and enjoyed the beautiful scenes along the river. The mountains are so special. I’ve seen many other kinds of mountains, but I like Guilihn’s mountains best. I’ve seen many rivers before, but I like Lijiang Rivers best. 河水清澈透明，我们租了一条小船，沿江欣赏着美景。山很奇特，我见过许多其他类型的山，但我最喜欢桂林的山，我也见过许多河流，但我最喜欢漓江。 3．Night of the Lake 湖之夜 Around the lake are some trees, their slender leaves bellowing in the gentle wind. There must be some frogs in the middle of the lake, whose endless singing can be heard clearly. What an attractive night! 湖周围有些树，嫩嫩的树叶在微风中飘扬。湖中一定有青蛙，我能清楚地听见它们在不停地歌唱。多美的夜晚啊！ 4．Ocean at the Sunset 日落时的大海 A gust of wind brought forth the faint smell of fish, and this made me feel joyous. Slowly, the rays of sunlight faded, and dimness surrounded me. The entire ocean changed to a dark violet hue. Later, the red sun escaped into the sea. 一阵海风带来了淡淡的鱼腥味，使我兴奋起来。慢慢地，太阳光消失了，周围一片朦胧，整个海洋变成暗紫色，最后红红的太阳消失在大海里。 5．Sea Beauty 大海美景 From as far as you could see on the left and right was open water and sand. The splash of pieces of seashells lay scattered on the beach and small holes covered the sand where the crabs had dug in. The wind felt soft and warm and the water not very chilling. Far in the distance the sun was changing the color from a yellow to an orange and then to a red ball hanging over the horizon. 极目远眺，你能看见一望无垠的大海和沙滩。海滩上散落着海贝，还有一些小洞，那是螃蟹挖的。风柔而暖，水也并不太凉。远处的太阳由黄色变成橘红色，一个大红球，悬挂在天边。 6．Waterfall 瀑布 From the sky fell the waterfall’s high rising, thick mist. When in contact with sunlight, the seven—colored rainbow hung in the sky, which was very stunning. 瀑布飞流直下，震荡起浓浓的水雾，在阳光照耀下形成美丽的七色彩虹，挂在空中，令人称奇。 7．Canyon 峡谷 It was the green heart of the canyon, where the walls swerved back from the rigid plan and relieved their harshness of line by making a little sheltered nook and filling it to the brim with sweetness and roundness and softness. Here all things rested. Even the narrow stream ceased its turbulent down—rush long enough to form a quiet pool….. 这是峡谷葱绿的中心，在这里峭壁改变了它们僵硬的形式和粗糙的线条，形成 一个小小的隐蔽处，并使之充满甜美、圆润和安逸。这儿一切都很宁静，甚至连咆哮着直冲而下的瀑布也平静下来，。形成了一个宁静的深潭...... 8．The Forest 森林 There’s beauty in the woods, too, especially late in the fall. Sometimes you walk among the huge trees where the sunlight filters through. It’s quiet and big, with touches of white and green and gold. And the silence is like that of church.森林也是美丽的, 特别是晚秋的森林. 有时候,你行走在阳光斑驳的高大林木间。森林在这儿那儿涂抹着白色、绿色、和金黄色，深广而且寂静，这寂静就像教堂里的肃穆一样。 9．The Sea 大海 The sea is very big. Some parts of the sea are very shallow. But some places, the seal is quite deep. The sea is salty; Rivers carry salt from the land in the sea. In the sea, there are plenty of dishes and plants. Some live near the top of the sea. Others live deep down. Millions of tiny living things float in the sea. These floating things are so small that it is hard t see them. Many fishes live by eating these living things. 大海很大。 有的地方很浅，有的地方很深。大海是咸的。河流把陆地的盐带到了大海里。在大海里，有许多鱼和植物。有的生活在浅水层，有的生活在深水层。成百上千万的生物漂浮在海里。这些浮游生物太小了，我们大家很难看见它们。很多鱼靠吃这些浮游生物为生。 City Scenes 城市风光 Garden 花园 As we climbed the stone steps up the hill, we saw a low—lying garden at the bottom of the hill. Various flowers and plants seemed to cover up the entire place. This garden was colorful as if it was a fairyland, it was extremely beautiful. 当我沿着石阶往上爬时，我们看见了山下的花园。各种各样的花草覆盖了整个花园，这个花园是如此多姿多彩，就像仙境一般。 Garden along the Seine River 塞纳河边的花园 Take a stroll along the Seine River. Browse through the art vendors, colorful paintings. Peek through delicate iron gates at the well—kept gardens. Watch closely for the French attention to detail. You will se it in the design of a doorway or arch and in the little fountains and quaint balconies. No matter where you look, you will find everyday objects transformed into works by art. 沿着塞纳河漫步，浏览艺术家们色彩丰富的绘画，透过那些精致的铁门，向内偷窃那些 精心照看的花园。仔细观察法国人对于细节的留心，你可以在门廊或拱门以及小喷泉和古怪有趣的走廊的设计上随处可见。不管你往哪里看，你都可以发现日常物品已经变成了艺术品。 Snow—covered Mountains 雪山 The trees around the schoolyard looked like huge men with silver clothes defending our school. Beyond, snow—covered mountains in the distance looked like an elephant made of wax. What a wonderful scene! 校园周围的树就像穿着银装的巨人守卫着我们大家的校园。校园外，远处被除数雪覆盖的硕像蜡做大象。多美的景色啊！ Modern City 现代城市 House are packed tightly together, and where are no houses, there are roads. On these roads, the traffic flow is endless. Naturally, the children have nowhere to play. They must simply sit indoors on their own and watch television. The rooms are cramped and short of sunlight. 这里的房子一个挨着一个，没有房子的地方工业便是道路，在这样的路面上，车辆川流不息。自然孩子们没有过玩耍的地方工业，只能 自己呆在家里看电视。房间狭窄，而且是缺少阳光。 Street Shaded by Trees绿树成荫的街道 Sometimes in Orlando the trees shading a street make it more inviting than the house do .It was the tree arching over. Sabal Lane that called to young officer Evan Mahoney one afternoon. The freckled—face policeman braked in front of the most unusual garden he’d ever seen. 在奥兰多，绿树成荫的街道有时会比屋里更留得住人。一个炎热的下午，被遮天蔽日的大树覆盖着的沙伯尔街吸引着年轮的警官埃文。马海尼。这名满脸雀斑的警察在一座他从未见过的、最不寻常的花园前停下车。 Splendid Buildings 辉煌的建筑 From the freeway you will see the beautiful—looking buildings set high on the green mountain. When you get in, you will find the lobby is very large. The most impressive item in the lobby is the large, beautiful, all—marble staircase that comes down from the second floor on two sides of the lobby; a huge bronze wall painting separates the two staircases. Standing in the lobby you feel as if you have walked into a king’s palace because of so many beautiful things around you. 从高速公路上，你可以看到绿色的山顶上那些漂亮的建筑。如果你走进去，就会发现大厅很大，而大厅最吸引人的是那宽大的漂亮的大理石楼梯，从大树两边通向二楼，楼梯之间是一幅巨大的青铜壁画。站在大厅，感觉就像是走进了国王的宫殿，因为你周围的一切都是那么漂亮。 Festival 节日风情 Christmas Customs 圣诞习俗 There are so many wonderful traditions associated with the Christmas seasons: Houses be decked with colorful lights and bowed holly wreaths; caroling with the church choir; stockings full of yummy treats and presents beneath the Christmas tree; eggnog and the Christmas day feast. All these customs create such warm memories in people’s hearts and minds. 有许多与圣诞节有关的美好传统习俗，如用彩色的灯和圣诞花环装饰屋子，教堂合唱圣诞颂歌，塞满甜食的长袜子，及圣诞树下的礼物，蛋酒及圣诞在餐。这些传统的习俗为人们创造了许多美好及欢乐的回忆。 The Spring Festival 春节 People often enjoy large dinners and watch special programs on TV with family on the Lunar New Year’s Eve. Children are very happy, too. They are in new clothes, and usually get some money. Which is put in a red paper envelope from elder people. You can also see a lot of traditional programs, too, such as lion dancing. They wish people a happy New Year and a bright future. 除夕，人们通常和家人一起享受丰盛的晚餐，看特别的电视节目。孩子们也非常高兴，因为他们可以穿上新衣服，还可以从长辈那儿得到红包。你还可以看到很多传统节目，比如舞狮子，意思是祝愿人们新年快乐和前景美好。 Mid—autumn Day 中秋节 On the evening of August 15 of the lunar calendar, when the moon was brightest, we always sat together outside in our yard to eat moon cakes and enjoy the beautiful moonlight. Mother would then tell her story of the moon fairy Change, who lived in palace on the moon, with a jade rabbit for companion. 在阴历8月15日的晚上，也就是月亮最明亮的时候，我们一家人总是一起坐在院子里吃月饼，欣赏那美丽的月光。妈妈总是会给我们讲常娥奔月的故事，常娥住在月宫里，还有一只玉兔陪伴着她。 Thanksgiving Day 感恩节 In the United States, thanksgiving dinner is practically the same all over the country. The table is always loaded with delicious food of many different kinds. Naturally, the main course is turkey, with an array of vegetables and desserts. Pumpkin pie is often served in remembrance of the fist settlers. 感恩节会餐在全美国差不多都一样。桌子上摆满了各种美味佳肴。自然，火鸡是主菜，同时摆放着各种蔬菜和甜食。人们常常吃南瓜饼，目的是为了纪念首批移民。 话题拓展 2 续写表达句式升级必背 1.spring is a lot of rain,summer is hot,autumn is the best season in a year,it is cool and busy ,winter is cold and sometimes snowy.春天是多雨的，夏天是炎热的，秋天是一年中最好的季节，它很凉爽而且忙碌，冬天是寒冷的，有时会下雪。 2.That is an oil painting of a landscape in spring.那是一幅描绘春天景色的油画。 3.The travelers were beguiled by the beauty of the landscapes.游客们被景色的美丽所陶醉。  4.Strong technical skills enhance a beautiful scene that compares traditional and contemporized architectural styles.很强的技巧加强了景色的美感，在传统和现代化了的建筑风格之间的对比。 5.This extraordinary natural preserve shelters a primeval forest, the continent’s largest population of brown bears, sizeable packs of wolves, and a host of other creatures which have all but disappeared elsewhere专门捕捉大自然美丽景色的导演高史林百格将会透过节目带大家融入这处仙境，享受大自然的真善美。 6.条条小河宛如蓝色的缎带缠绕着一望无际的绿色田野，远处一座座造型古朴、色彩和谐的小屋，一派美丽动人的田园风光！ A creek twines the vast green field just like the blue color satin ribbon, a distant place modelling is being plain, color harmonious hut, a school of beautiful moving rural scenery! 7.一座座古老的风车，风车的风叶像张开的翅膀，迎风转动，与绿草、野花构成了独特的景致更为这童话般世界增添神奇色彩！ An ancient windmill, windmill's wind leaf opens likely the wing, rotates against the wind, with the green grass, the wild flower constituted the unique view this fairy tale world addition mysterious color! 8.一对对色彩鲜艳、精致绚丽，象征着甜蜜爱情的木鞋！还有那华丽的郁金香倾倒无数情人…… 郁金香飘香的季节，娇艳妩媚的女孩的笑容如花传芬芳…… 幽幽湖边，风车，绿草，小房，多惬意 红红火火郁金香花田，阵阵芳香，风车悠悠转！这是梦吗？ A right color bright, fine gorgeous, is drafting the happy love sabot likely! Also has that magnificent tulip to fall the season which innumerable sweetheart ...... the tulip smells as sweet, the tender and beautiful charming girl's smiling face like flower passes on fragrantly ...... Spooky bund, windmill, green grass, den, satisfied prosperous curcuma fragrant flowers field, intermittent fragrant, windmill long extension! This is the dream? 9.高高的建筑也是一种艺术品，古典、优雅，像一幅浓郁的油漆彩画！到处弥漫着绿色，连空气也飘着青草味，四周一片绿油油，绿色的惊艳，风车也停下来，陶醉在美景中…… The high construction is also one kind of artware, is classical, is graceful, looks like a rich paint color painting! everywhere is filling the green, is also fluttering including the air green grass taste all around green and glossy, the green startled colorful, the windmill also stops down, is infatuated with in the beautiful scene ...... 10.春天使大地复苏。 Spring renews the earth. 11.春天的时候，乡村一片青葱碧绿。 The country is very green in spring 12.The flower looks like an angel, unfolded in the wind, under the sun 13.我被眼前的景色深深吸引了 I am deeply impressed/attracted by the scene before me. 实践强化 3 1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kathy’s family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year, however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week. “But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy’s mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked it away. The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto countryback roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy?” Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,” she muttered. That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn’t I have my phone back, just for one second? Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I’m having?” “Can’t,” he said. “It’s not here. Remember?” Kathy was very annoyed. Having nothing better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle. She took it, emptied the pieces on the table, and began to sort them. After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o’clock. She had been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she was exhausted. So, she went to bed. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. Under no circumstances had Kathy expected the scenery to be so spectacular! With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views. After half an hour’s leisure walk along the beach, Kathy returned to the house. “How do I spend the rest of the day?” Kathy murmured to herself. Suddenly, the unfinished puzzle caught her attention. She felt a little excited and buried herself in it once again. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness. Soon, all that were left were a few gaps. She quickly put the remaining pieces into place. The puzzle was completed! Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours. Trying to preserve the image in her mind, she quietly started taking it apart rather than taking pictures to update about the trip.That, she thought, was just for me. Without the distractions from her cellphone, she found herself engaged in story sharing session with mom and daddy willingly. They spent a high-quality family time together. On arriving home, mom gave her cellphone back. This time, however, she had no intention to share but to keep all the great memories in her mind. 【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Kathy一家去旅行，妈妈要求旅行中不用手机，开始Kathy十分不习惯但又不得不遵守规则。Kathy完成了拼图，并且欣赏到了平时看不到的美景，还尽情享受了和父母在一起的时间和温暖。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“Kathy快速吃完早饭后就跑去海边。”可知，第一段可描写Kathy在海边看到了美景，然后，回家完成昨晚没有完成的拼图。 ②由第二段首句内容“欣赏着自己完成的拼图，她意识到自己已经好几个小时没有想起手机这回事了。”可知，第二段可描写没有手机的打扰，一家人在这里度过的温馨生活，是在平时感受不到的，回到家后妈妈把手机还给Kathy后，她似乎已经不需要了。 2.续写线索： 去海边欣赏到美景——回家完成拼图——在脑海保存拼图——和父母度过高质量的假期——渐渐地已经不需要手机 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①回家：returned to the house/go back to the house ②吸引注意力：catch her attention /draw her attention ③保存：preserve/keep 情绪类 ①激动的：excited/thrilled ②十分高兴：be overwhelmed with happiness/be bathed in happiness 【典型句式】 [句型1]. With the sea wind blowing against her face, Kathy totally lost herself in the stunning views. （运用了with的复合结构） [句型2]. Every time the shapes met, Kathy was overwhelmed with happiness. （由every time引导的时间状语从句） 2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Winter break was approaching, and all Scott wanted to do was go snowboarding. Unfortunately, Scott's parents had different plans. They had booked a weeklong tropical cruise (热带船游). Scott hated warm weather and asked if he could just stay at his best friend's house so he could snowboard every day at the local mountain. His parents didn't want to hear anything of it. He kept debating them about the topic, but they would not change their minds. Family time was important to them, and it was tradition that they spend winter break together. The week of the cruise arrived, and Scott continued to mumble (咕哝) his complaints as he and his family left their house to head south. Scott's dad told him that he would only make the vacation worse for himself if he didn't change his attitude and open his mind to a new experience. Scott still couldn't stop thinking about all of the snow he was leaving behind. When they arrived at the port to board the ship, Scott had a hard time admitting that he was actually impressed with the size of the ship. He had seen the brochures but seeing the ship in person was a whole different animal. Then he remembered that the brochure said something about a surfing pool. Maybe surfing would be somewhat like snowboarding. After all, it involved riding a board. Scott climbed aboard the ship with his parents, and then they walked around to check everything out. He couldn't believe how fancy the accommodations were. The dining room looked like a royal hall; the game room had all of his favorite games; the ship's deck (甲板) had several different swimming pools for different purposes. Then Scott saw the surfing pool. It was incredible. It wasn't a big pool, but it had big waves, and the young man who was demonstrating how to ride the waves made it look like a ton of fun. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Scott asked his parents if he could try surfing. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gradually, Scott began to love the cruise. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Scott asked his parents if he could try surfing. They said, "Of course. And much to Scott's surprise, they wanted to try surfing too. When Scott and his parents had their swim suits on, Scott's dad went first and only lasted about five seconds before he wiped out.Then it was his mom's turn.She actually made it longer than his dad did. When it was Scott's turn, he was excited but a little bit nervous. He hopped on the board and took a stance similar to his snowboarding stance. Then the waves started. It felt similar to snowboarding but different at the same time. On his first ride, Scott rode for almost 30 seconds before wiping out.He was crazy about it though. Gradually, Scott began to love the cruise. He got to know the people who often surfed there quite well. By the time the weeklong cruise was over, Scott had new friends he planned to keep in touch. Scott is the brave and lucky one since only eight percent of the experiencer or so really fell in love with it among a lot of the passengers who tried surfing the first day of the cruise. With a new hobby, and great memories, he apologized to his parents for earliest moaning and groaning and told them it was his best vacation ever. 【写作指导】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者斯科特和父母像往常一样在寒假出去度假。但他想要滑雪，但父母却订了为期一周的热带船游。斯科特无奈妥协，但最终在体验的过程中爱上了这项新运动并结交了很多新朋友，度过了最开心的假期。 1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“斯科特问他的父母他是否可以尝试冲浪。”可知，第一段描述了斯科特和父母一起尝试冲浪的体验过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“渐渐地，斯科特开始喜欢上了这次航行”可知，第二段可描写作者改变了自己的态度，从冲浪中获得了快乐且有了很多收获。 2.续写线索： 询问是否可以尝试——穿上装备做好准备——父母和斯科特的第一次体验——逐渐体验到快乐——慢慢爱上运动，并收获颇多——跟父母道歉并承认是最开心的一次旅行 3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达） 行为类 ①尝试做某事：try doing sth/make attempts to do sth/attempt to do sth ②保持联系：keep in touch/stay in touch/keep contact ③被淘汰：wipe out /be knocked out 情绪类 ①令某人吃惊：to one's surprise/surprise sb/to one's astonishment ②紧张：nervous/tense/strained 【典型句式】 [句型1] When Scott and his parents had their swim suits on, Scott's dad went first and only lasted about five seconds before he wiped out.(由连接词when和before引导的时间状语从句) [句型2] With a new hobby, and great memories, he apologized to his parents for earliest moaning and groaning and told them it was his best vacation ever.(运用with复合结构表伴随) 3．阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was August. We were on vacation, just my six-year-old son Kevin and I, for my husband was always busy. Having driven from our home in the city to a remote and peaceful place, we wouldn’t see friends or family—it would be a nice, safe, socially distanced week away. We had hiked about half mile to an attractive spot called Diana’s Baths, which afforded visitors an expanse of transparent water. The water flows and then falls off a series of big flat stones, making itself a small waterfall, about 7 inches high. Several couples and their kids in swimsuits were playing to their heart’s content in the water. We joined them. I watched as some younger parents nervously drove their babies away from the stones edges. Fast-moving water made standing there quite dangerous, for I saw a certain kid with curly hair missed a step and almost fell down. The air was full of shouts and laughter. I felt so lucky that I didn’t always need to fix my eyes on my son. Kevin could navigate his physical space with more confidence and care. But I was still terrified when I saw Kevin jump between the slippery rocks. But with the passing of time, I soon relaxed, and we were both having fun, my kid splashing and kicking in the cool water, laughing heartily as I put my head under the cold running water. Then seconds later, every fear I’d ever had rose to the surface. I lifted my head, turned and saw Kevin sitting between two stones, with the rushing water flowing around him. I could see he was shaking sometimes because of the water rapids. I yelled at him to get out. He yelled back something that I couldn’t hear. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly he disappeared in front of my eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When Kevin returned to normal. I learned the woman was a nurse. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Suddenly he disappeared in front of my eyes. Jumping to my feet, I let out screams, “Somebody help my son!” Hardly had I yelled when a woman rushed to the stones’ edge and jumped down. Following her with unsteady steps, I went down too, seeing her scooping up my son. His eyes remained closed. Having laid my son on his back, she checked his pulse and began to perform first aid. Suddenly, I saw my son opened his eyes. Indescribable delight filled my heart. When Kevin returned to normal, I learned the woman was a nurse. “Your son just suffered a minor back injury. Don’t worry,” she comforted me. “It was you that saved my son,” I said, tears flooding down my cheeks. She held my hands, a big smile shining from her face, and said that anyone would have done the same. We had a very pleasant chat, and I knew her name was Lisa. Her random kindness indeed made a big difference and I would follow her example. 【写作指导】本文以度假为线索展开。作者带着只有六岁的儿子凯文去度假。从城里的家开车到一个遥远而平静的地方，我们看不到朋友或家人——这将是一个美好的、安全的、社交距离较远的一周。作者讲述了度假所发生的事情。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“突然，他消失在我的眼前。”可知，第一段可描写作者在戴安娜浴场发现儿子消失时，接下来向人们求助，营救儿子。 ②由第二段首句内容“当凯文恢复正常。我知道那女人是个护士。”可知，第二段可描写儿子的受伤情况，接下来作者和这位护士的谈话。 2.续写线索：在戴安娜浴场玩耍——儿子消失——害怕——求助——得救——谈话 3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达） 行为类 安慰，使舒适：comfort /relieve 叫喊：yell /shout 实施，执行：perform /carry out 情绪类 高兴的：pleasant /pleasing/delighted 难以置信的：indescribable /unbelievable 【典型句式】 [句型1] Following her with unsteady steps, I went down too, seeing her scooping up my son. （句中现在分词作方式状语和伴随状语） [句型2] It was you that saved my son.（句中使用强调句型） [句型3] She held my hands, a big smile shining from her face, and said that anyone would have done the same.（句中使用并列谓语和宾语从句） 4．阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Adventures Through the Gorge We put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.It was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay. Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,I saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.It was beautiful. As we moved farther down the river,I heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.It seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.It felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;I thought I was going to die.It was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom. After we got through the rapids,I was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.It was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.It took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump off the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in. Paragraph 1: About three minutes later,the Category V was coming. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.The raft raced down the rapids.Water was splashing on the rocks,letting out louder noise.Screaming all the way down,I saw white water all over.I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out.If a little careless,we might hit one and get turned upside down.In the blink of an eye,we turned around the last huge rock,entering a small calm ride.When we settled at the bottom,I wanted to go back up and do it all again. Paragraph 2: After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.“What did you think about that Category V rapids?” my dad asked.“I was super nervous at first.But when we hit the bottom,I wanted to do it once more.” “Would you say you become more confident of yourself?” he continued.“Yes,I would say I become much more confident of myself.” I smiled.We walked towards our campsite. 【写作指导】本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述了作者与爸爸游览三峡险境，一开始跟着导游坐木筏前进，慢慢地接近一级级的急流，直到五级，作者与爸爸对三峡的险峻感到非常震撼，这次体验让作者变得更加勇敢，自信，并且还想再次体验。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段内容“大约三分钟后，第五类急流要来了。”可知第一段续写的内应该是在到达第五类急流之后发生的事情。 ②由第二段内容“在冲下所有的急流后，我不在害怕了。”可知第二段续写应该描述冲下急流后发生了什么，以及作者和爸爸对本次体验的感想。 2.续写线索：接近五级急流——在五级急流的体验和感受——冲过急流之后——体验的感悟，变得更加勇敢和自信。 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①移位：turn around/rolling over/up and down ②考虑：think about/ consider/feel like ③接触：get to/touch/hit 情绪类 ①信心：become confident about/ brave/courageous ②恐惧：frightened/fear/horror 【典型句式】 [句型1]. I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out. (由because引导原因状语从句。) [句型2]. But when we hit the bottom, I wanted to do it once more. (由when引导时间状语从句。) 5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This past summer, I joined my sister's family for their annual Adirondack vacation in a rented cottage on a lake, the same place my family has stayed since I was a little kid. There are plenty of activities to keep everyone busy: swimming, fishing and sand castle building on the beach. By the third day, I had noticed that my ten-year-old niece, Jannie, had spent most of her time watching cable TV and browsing through the gift shops in town. Not exactly the wilderness experience I remembered from my youth. So, at dinner, I told Jannie we should hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning, which was called Rocky Point because the peak is bare and rock-covered. "Well." replied Jannie, "Tomorrow there are some shows on the Disney Channel, so I'm going to be pretty busy." "When your mother and I used to come here when we were your age, we were too busy swimming and hiking up mountains." "Sounds more like punishment than a vacation." She shrugged her shoulders. "Besides, I don't think I can walk that far." When I said it only took a half-hour of steady walking to get to the top. She grumbled, "Fine, I'll go." I knew she was agreeing just to shut me up, but I would take anything I could get. The next morning was a perfect day for a hike, with sunshine and clear skies. I got up early and took some sandwiches and water bottles, which I tucked into my backpack along with the bug spray and the camera. Jannie came shuffling downstairs, sighed dramatically, rolled her eyes and announced in a very unenthusiastic, robot-like voice. "I'm ready to go hiking, Uncle David." Anyway, we climbed into my car and drove to the trailhead about ten minutes away. As we stood at the edge of the parking lot and looked down the shaded trail that led into the woods. "I am still not sure this is a good idea, but if you and Mom could do it, I can too, I guess." 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph l: For the moment she was determined to start our journey. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: A while later we did it to the top. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 For the moment she was determined to start our journey. About 200 yards into the forest, the trail began to climb a steep slope. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. She didn’t share my enthusiasm. She was thirsty, tired, sweaty and bored. I handed her the water bottle as she sat on a fallen log and took a break. “You know, I think we’re almost to the top,” I told her. “You already said that three times, and we’re not there yet.” she replied. She grumbled another complain as we continued on. She might not have been happy, but at least I was proud that she had the determination not to quit before we reached the top. A while later we did make it to the top. Jannie looked up, noticing we were no longer under the trees. When she stopped, looked around and saw where we were, her jaw dropped, her eyes opened wide and she shouted: “Oh, I don’t believe it. We’re on top of the world. It’s awesome!” A refreshing breeze brushed the mountaintop, not a cloud was in the sky and miles and miles of trees and lakes spread out below us. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying. It had taken us almost an hour to make the climb, but it was worth it. 【写作指导】【分析】 本文以人物为线索展开，故事讲述了作者鼓励带动10岁的甥女一起爬山，开始的时候外甥女有些不情愿，但当到达山顶时，一览众山小，有了成功的喜悦。 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她一时决定开始我们的旅行。”可知，第一段可描写甥女叫苦叫累的抱怨和作者的鼓励和帮助。 ②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我们爬到了山顶。”可知，第二段可描写作者和甥女到达山顶后，一览众山小，成功的喜悦。 2.续写线索：带动爬山——抱怨——鼓舞——观景——惊喜 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①带动爬山：climb a steep slope / climb a hill / go up the mountain ②.观景：look around / look at the vie/ view the scenery 情绪类 ①. 抱怨：complain / grumble ②. 鼓舞：enthusiasm /inspiring /encouraging ③. 喜悦：happy/joyful/ surprised /awesome 【典型句式】 [句型1]. I pointed out some rarely-seen trees and flowering plants, which I explained were endangered species. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句) [句型2]. We sat on a large rock and took it in the view, while eating our sandwiches and pointing out islands and roads and, of course, the cottage where we were staying.（while引导的时间状语从句的省略以及where引导的限制性定语从句）