专题18 应用文写作-【真题汇编】五年（2019-2023）高考英语真题分项汇编（新高考）

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一、高考真题汇编的意义
1、增强高考考生的复习动力和信心。
2、提高高考考生的复习效率。使考生能够更好地梳理复习的重点，提高复习效率。
3、加深考生对知识点的理解和掌握。
二、高考真题汇编的内容
1、高考试题收录。高考真题汇编收录高考真题，涵盖了高考考试的各个学科。
2、答案解析。高考真题汇编提供了详细的答案解析，加深考生对知识点的理解和掌握。
3、复习指导。高考真题汇编还提供了一些复习指导，提高复习效率。
三、高考真题汇编的重要性
高考真题汇编不仅可以提高考生的复习动力和信心，增强考生的复习效率，而且还可以加深考生对知识点的理解和掌握，使考生更好地把握考试方向，为高考复习提供了有力的支持。本文介绍了高考真题汇编的意义、内容和重要性，分析了它对高考考生的重要作用，强调了它在高考复习中的重要性。
专题18 应用文写作（解析版）
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46. 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：t begin with → first f all
提高：imprve → prgress
建议：suggestin → advice
选择：chse → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.（运用了省略句和wh引导定语从句）
2023新高考全国Ⅱ卷
46. 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：t begin with → first f all
提高：imprve → prgress
建议：suggestin → advice
选择：chse → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.（运用了省略句和wh引导定语从句）
2023全国甲卷
52. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Cnfucius is a well-knwn figure in Chinese histry. His teachings emphasized the imprtance f mral values, respect fr elders, and scial harmny. Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety.
The significance f Cnfucius cannt be verstated. His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. Even tday, his ideas cntinue t guide individuals and cmmunities in China and beynd.
Cnfucius’s life ffers valuable lessns. He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. His teachings remind us f the imprtance f integrity, cmpassin, and scial respnsibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-knwn → famus
人物：figure → persn
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：fundatin → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, which fstered respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2023全国乙卷
52. 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. That was the first time I watched a live musical perfrmance. The fantastic players tuched me deeply.
I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave. Hwever, it did nt demralize me. I spent mst f my leisure hurs t practice pian. Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely.
Even thugh I will nt pursue as my life career, I will still cntinue learning and playing pian as my hbby. It is simply because music is the best medicatin fr my sul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：pprtunity → chance
使沮丧：demralize → discurage
满意的：satisfied → cntent
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply, s I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. (运用了althugh引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
2023年2月四省联考
46. 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This nline cncert is abslutely fantastic.
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【答案】
This nline cncert is abslutely fantastic.
The perfrmers frm the tw schls have dne their best in entertaining the audience with ne sng after anther. Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne. I enjyed every secnd f the cncert and was particularly attracted when the bys and girls frm Britain started t sing the traditinal Chinese sng “Liang Zhu”. They perfrmed the sng in a way that tuched my heart and gave me a feeling f cnnectin. I hpe there will be mre pprtunities in the future fr us Chinese students and ur internatinal friends t learn abut and frm each ther.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undubtedly→withut dubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：tuch→ mve
希望：hpe→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.
拓展句：There is n dubt that their perfrmances are f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjyed every secnd f the cncert and was particularly attracted when the bys and girls frm Britain started t sing the traditinal Chinese sng “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
2023年1月浙江卷
66. 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us
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【答案】
Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin.
The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species. We then went n a natural walk t bserve and cllect samples f different plants. Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals. I als gained a greater appreciatin fr the rle that plants play in maintaining the balance f ur ecsystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：bserve → survey
震惊：strike → astnish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin, which benefited me a lt.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species.（运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
2022年高考真题
2022年新高考1卷
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Carline,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Carline,
This is my first time that I have invited yu t attend ur prgram —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students. Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it. As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt. If yu are available n this Sunday, I tgether with the whle Talk and Talk staff am waiting fr yur cming. I’d appreciate it if yu take my invitatin int cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulus
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty f→a lt f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt.
拓展句：Yu are ur distinguished freign language teacher, whse aid can help us a lt.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
2022年新高考II卷
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Carline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Carline,
This is my first time that I have invited yu t attend ur prgram —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students. Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it. As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt. If yu are available n this Sunday, I tgether with the whle Talk and Talk staff am waiting fr yur cming. I’d appreciate it if yu take my invitatin int cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulus
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty f→a lt f
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt.
拓展句：Yu are ur distinguished freign language teacher, whse aid can help us a lt.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it. (运用了状语从句的省略)
2022年全国甲卷
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it cmes t cean, its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius. Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
Ocean plays a key rle in ur wrld. Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature. Thus, it is imperative t prtect cean. First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins. Fr example, garbage can’t be thrwn int cean. What’s mre, we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean. T prtect cean is t prtect urselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：mre and mre→increasingly
重视：place imprtance n→attach imprtance t
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s mre→furthermre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
拓展句：Wrld Ocean Day, which falls n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it cmes t cean, its pllutin becming mre and mre serius.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins.(使用了主语从句)
2022年全国乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述：
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
Learning English Beynd the Classrm
Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m cncerned, it is a disturbing trend. Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks. Because f their lack f self-discipline, they’re mre easily addicted t chatting nline r playing games. It’s urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline, and it’s als urgent fr parents and teachers t strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择：chse → select
提高：imprve → strengthen
各种各样的：varius → diverse
就我而言：as far as I’m cncerned → frm my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the Classrm in varius ways.
拓展句：Nwadays, because smartphnes and cmputers are becming mre and mre ppular, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the Classrm in varius ways.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及wh引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It's urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline (运用了it作形式主语，t imprve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
2022年6月北京卷
第二节（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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【答案】
Dear Jim.
Hw's everything?
I'm writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically,hw t develp a paragraph,and hw t structure an essay?
The talk will be abut an hur,and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience.Please let me knw which platfrm yu'll be using It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs.,
Li Hua
2022年6月浙江卷
46. 假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Michael,
Gd news ! Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.
Lcated n the third flr beside the nline reading rms, it can be accessible frm 8 am till 9 pm thrughut the weekdays. Thse rms are equipped with mdern electrnic facilities, all f which are linked t the Internet. It’s really cnvenient fr us t d sme grup prjects. Why nt ask ur grup members t g and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve ne rm fr ur prject.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：cnsist f→ be made up f
位于：be lcated n→ be situated n
与……相连接： be linked t →be cnnected t
预定：reserve→bk
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, which cnsists f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thse rms are equipped with mdern electrnic facilities, all f which are linked t the Internet.（f which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Lcated n the third flr beside the nline reading rms, it can be accessible frm 8 am till 9 pm thrughut the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）
2022年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．回忆活动经历；
2．分享个人收获；
3．希望保持联系。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hw is everything? I have missed yu very much since yu returned t Ireland.
I still remember the mments we spent tgether at the China-Ireland Cultural Festival. We went t lectures n culture by leading schlars frm bth ur cuntries. We als enjyed music, dance, dramas and films.
I gained a better understanding f Irish culture during the festival, which has great significance fr the cultural exchanges between China and Ireland. What's mre, a clse friendship has been frmed between us.
Let's keep in tuch. Hpe t see yu again.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2021年高考真题
2021年6月新高考1卷
你校英文报Yuth正在庆祝创刊十周年, 请你写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】1
Yuth and Me
Dear editr,
As the 10th anniversary ceremny f YOUTH is drawing near, I am writing t take this pprtunity t extend my heartfelt cngratulatins.
Ever since I was yung, my parents expsed me t varius magazines, but YOUTH was my favrite which has gained high praise frm many students including me, a regular reader. Nt nly des it supply me with a platfrm t braden my hrizn, but its rich cntent can als spark my burning passin fr English. I am fnd f all its clumns, but what I enjy mst abut the paper is its language and writing style, which cntributes greatly t my prgress in writing.
I have thusands f blessings and I keenly wish YOUTH culd achieve greater success and gain mre ppularity.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】2
Yuth and Me
Yuth- a pplar campus newspaper-is celebrating its tenth anniversary, n which special day, as a devted reader, I’d like t give it my sincere cngratulatins with great excitement.
Three years ag, when I came acrss Yuth, I was impressed by its cntent and striking narratin and recrding events in and ut campus, ranging frm sprts, science and new technlgy, self grwth and study methds, amng which, the philsphy clumn attracted me mst. With its article’s influence, I have helped myself vercme lneliness and wuld like embrace all beauty f life.
Last, thanks Yuth fr giving me a new perspective f life and I really hpe that Yuth will step further and bring mre brightness t the yuth like me!

【解析】
本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Yuth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
1．词汇积累
建立：fund→establish
沮丧的：upset→depressed
得到：receive→btain
赏析：enjy→appreciate
2．句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn.
拓展句：Nt nly can these stries relieve my stress, but als they can braden my hrizn.
2021年全国甲卷
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hpe everything ges well with yu! In a bit t freign students' richer insight int Chinese culture, a class meeting themed intrducing Chinese traditinal culture t freign friends will be launched in ur schl. I'm writing t ask fr yur suggestins n the tpic.
Since every prcess and detail is t be psted n an English website that has numerus freign visitrs, I feel at a lss which aspects f ur culture fascinates freign readers. Currently, we have been cnsidering a wide range f chices ranging frm lcal cuisine and ancient cstumes t festival traditins and flk music, but we haven't reached any agreement yet. S, I am urgently in need f yur suggestin. If yu can furnish me with mre infrmatin, just feel free t infrm me.
Yur prmpt respnse will be much appreciated. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2021年全国乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart nline learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括：
分析优势及不足；
提出学习建议。
注意：
词数100词左右；
题目和首句以为你写好。
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【答案】
Be smart nline learners
Just like the ld saying ges, "each cin has tw sides." On the ne hand, prviding an easy access t plenty f excellent learning surces, nline learning is really a helping hand. On the ther hand, what we learn nline isn't necessarily what we need, nt t mentin its cnstant damage t ur eyes.
Fr me, nline learning is, after all, just a tl. It's nt the new methd itself but the persn wh use it that really matters. T becme a smart nline learner, nt nly shuld we carefully chse frm cuntless alternatives we may face, but extra attentin needs t be attached when we take lessns nline. What's mre, n cnditin that we culd apply what we learn nline t ur daily life, nline learning wuld be mre meaningful.
Thanks, everyne. Hpe we all culd be smart nline learners.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是演讲稿，一种常见的应用文，与去年英语作文比赛稍有差别。英语书面表达近几年来稳中求变，在测试考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能，进行思想交流的同时，注重文体变化，突出实用性，更考查学生能否利用所学语言知识、文化知识等，根据不同目的和受众，通过书面形式创新语篇。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如非谓语动词：prviding an easy access t plenty f excellent learning surces, nline learning is really a helping hand.；名词性从句：what we learn nline isn't necessarily what we need, nt t mentin its cnstant damage t ur eyes. 倒装：T becme a smart nline learner, nt nly shuld we carefully chse frm cuntless alternatives we may face, but extra attentin needs t be attached when we take lessns nline.；状语从句：n cnditin that we culd apply what we learn nline t ur daily life, nline learning wuld be mre meaningful.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色。
2021年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】1
Dear Jim,
Hw are yu these days? We have planned t hang arund tgether this weekend, and hw much I am expecting that! T my pity, I was infrmed t attend the nursery huse with the Student Unin this mrning. Since this weekend is the Duble Ninth Day, a traditinal day celebrated fr the senir in China, ur schl has launched this activity t shw ur cncern and respnsibility fr the ld, which is a meaningful and instructive activity fr us teenagers. I am really srry and hw abut ging ut tgether next weekend, and as a cmpensatin, I wuld like t teat yu a big meal and invite yu t visit lcal museum. If the time is nt cnvenient fr yu, yu can set anytime next week. Please accept my sincere aplgy fr that.
Lking frward t seeing yu sn!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】2
Dear Jim,
I'm srry that I wn't be able t g hiking with yu this Saturday.
I began t cugh yesterday mrning, s I went t see a dctr. She tld me it was a bad cld, and I wuld have t stay at hme fr a few days.
I'd really like t spend sme time with yu. Is it OK with yu if we take a trip t Zhangjiaku next Saturday? It's ne f the hst cities fr the 2022 Winter Olympics. Please let me knw what yu think.
Again, I'm srry abut the incnvenience.
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2021年6月浙江卷
昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览，请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 你的感受；
3. 强烈推荐。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【估计是官方】要确认，教学平台上还没有
Dear editr,
［活动的人物、时间、地点、目的］In rder t better experience traditinal Chinese culture, the Students’ Unin f ur schl rganized a meaningful activity t visit an Chinese painting exhibitin in the schl hall last weekend.
［活动详情］In the activity, the guide enthusiastically explained each piece in detail and intrduced t us the Chinese famus painters we admire mst, such as Xu Beihng, Qi Baishi and s n. [活动感受] By participating in the well-rganized activities, I’ve benefited a great deal frm them. Nt nly can I cultivate my patience and imaginatin, but als I can get easier access t ur excellent histry and culture, which can enrich my mind.
[表达推荐期望] T be hnest, it will be a gd chance fr yu t learn abut traditinal Chinese culture. I strngly appeal t all the students in ur schl t make use f their spare time t taste these wnderful wrks carefully!
Yurs
Li Hua
（参考译文：为了更好地体验中国传统文化，上周末我校学生会组织了一次有意义的活动，参观了在学校礼堂举行的国画展览。在活动中，导游热情给我们详细解释介绍给我们最敬佩的中国著名画家，如徐悲鸿、齐白石等。通过参与组织很好的活动，我获益匪浅。它不仅可以培养我的耐心和想象力，而且我可以更容易地接触到我们优秀的历史和文化，丰富我的思想。老实说,这将是一个好机会让你了解中国传统文化。我强烈呼吁我们学校的所有学生利用他们的业余时间仔细品尝这些美妙的作品!
【名师导学】高级语块：better experience；meaningful；enthusiastically；piece；in detail； participating in；benefited a great deal frm； access t； enrich；T be hnest；strngly appeal t；taste等。高级句型：In rder t，such as；and s n；which；Nt nly … but als …等。这篇参考范文结构严谨、层次清晰：首先告知活动的人物、时间、地点、目的，其次简要地回顺了自己昨天观看学生国画作品展的过程，最后写自己的感受和推荐观展；多用高级词汇、句型使得本范文结构严谨、行文流畅。
【答案】As is knwn t all, Chinese painting is a crucial part f ur traditinal cultural; therefre, with great hnr and curisity, I paid a visit t the Chinese painting display exhibited in ur schl lecture hall at 9 a.m. yesterday. During my ne hur and a half’s visit, I was fully expsed t a wrld f art. The visit includes three parts, first f which is a brief intrductin f the histry f Chinese painting, traced back t 7000 years ag. In this part, many wrks painted n pttery, grund and rck wall in pictures are shwn. The secnd part is tl display. The basic tls used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting was painted n pttery, grund and rck wall, and gradually develped int painting n wall, silk and paper. In the third part f this exhibitin, many paintings by famus arts are appreciated and discussed by students and teachers., Thrugh this visit, I fall in lve with Chinese painting and I wuld like t recmmend my fellw students t have an amazing experience t this art shw as well. And yu wn’t regret it.
审题：
时态：昨天
人物：第一人称
题材：宣传稿
宣传稿的特点带有新闻稿的特点，都是要客观，公正，不要夸大其词，其次语言要诙谐，幽默，引起共鸣，第三，可以运用数据增加可信度，增加宣传力度。
写作目的：为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿，宣传中国画的展览。
考察点：
记叙文部分（记叙昨天参观中国画的展览，客观叙述时间，地点，用过去时态），
抒情议论部分（“我”的感受， 包括所见，所闻，所感，用过去时叙述参观的东西，一般现在时抒发情感），
终级目的：强烈推荐（推荐对象是谁？思维发散：对象就是中学生为主，因为是发表在校报的）
难点：参观的内容需要展开合理想象。
补充信息：
中国的绘画史可以上溯到原始社会的新石器时代，距今至少有七千余年的历史。最初的中国绘画，是画在陶器、地面、和岩壁上的，渐而发展到画在墙壁、绢、和纸上。使用的基本工具是毛笔和墨，以及天然矿物质颜料。在无数画家不断探索、创新的努力之下，逐渐形成了...
The histry f Chinese painting can be traced back t the Nelithic Age f primitive sciety, with a histry f at least 7000 years. At first, Chinese painting was painted n pttery, grund and rck wall, and gradually develped int painting n wall, silk and paper. The basic tls used are brush and ink, as well as natural mineral pigments. Under the effrts f innumerable painters' cntinuus explratin and innvatin, it gradually frmed
2021年6月天津卷
提纲类作文
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad t receive yur E-mail. I am very grateful t yu and yur family fr taking care f me during my study tur in the UK. And wish yu all the best.
Nw that I have finished my high schl studies, my parents and I are ging t travel t Beijing. I'm ging tTian 'anmen t see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In additin, I want t g t Qinghua Garden t enjy the elegant demeanr f famus universities. I have decided t register fr the cmputer majr. With the rapid develpment f the Internet industry, the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide. Befre chsing, cnsult peple engaged in this majr r g t training institutins fr cnsultatin. Only with a clear gal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be mre efficient.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care f→lk after
另外，此外：in additin→besides→what’s mre
雇佣：emply→hire
既然：nw that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid develpment f the Internet industry, the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develps rapidly，the high-paying emplyment in IT industry attracts mre and mre peple t jin the Internet tide.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Only with a clear gal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be mre efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Nw that I have finished my high schl studies, my parents and I are ging t travel t Beijing. (运用了nw that引导的原因状语从句)
2021年3月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）；
（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）；
（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan lrrigatin prject.
Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What's mre, walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujangyan lrrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2, 000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
I'm sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan lrigatin Prject.
解析：
(1)写作思路
考查应用文写作。本次书面表达要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。写作时要包含题中已给内容，可适当发挥增加其他内容。注意在进行文章内容描写时一定要贴合实际，不能胡编乱造。根据题干可知，写作时主要采用一般现在时和第三人称，要求语言表达准确，描述内容贴合实际，不要出现语法和拼写错误。
(2)重点词汇/句型
a. places f interest名胜古迹；
b. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.what引导的主语从句 ；
c. What's mre此外；
d. have a chance t d sth.有机会做某事；
e. There be句型；
f. It dates frm追溯到；
g. play an imprtant part in在……中扮演重要角色；
h. as well as以及；
(3)其他高级句型
a. It is adj. + fr/f sb. t d sth. 某人做某事怎么样。
2021.1八省联考
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教Gerge写封邮件求助，内容包括:
1. 说明比赛要求； 2. 请他推荐英文诗； 3. 请教朗诵技巧。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Gerge,
I'm writing t ask fr yur help.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Gerge,
I'm writing t ask fr yur help. I'm preparing fr the English Pem Recitatin Cmpetitin f ur schl. The cmpetitin requires every participant t recite an English pem f ur wn chice within five minutes and the pem shuld be easy t understand. I wnder if yu culd recmmend a few English pems t me. Besides, I wish yu culd teach me sme techniques fr reciting pems. I tried with sme simple nes but fund it hard t recite at an apprpriate speed. The cmpetitin will be held in tw weeks. I'd be grateful if yu culd help me.
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
2021年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear guests/friends frm New Zealand,
On behalf f ur schl, I feel greatly hnred t express ur warmest welcme t yu. T help yu better understand Chinese culture, we've arranged sme activities fr yu.
First cmes the practice f Chinese calligraphy in the schl hall between 9：00 and 10：00. Yu will learn t write yur Chinese names with a brush. Then it is time fr flk dance in the dancing rm fr abut an hur. After the lunch break, yu will be guided t the playgrund, where yu will practice Chinese martial arts, which are gd fr yur health.
I sincerely wish yu a pleasant time with us and hpe yur trip in China will turn ut a mst unfrgettable experience in life. Thank yu!
解析
写作思路：文章是要你作为学生代表写一篇欢迎辞。首先需要表示欢迎，接下来介绍活动安排，最后表达祝愿。一般将来时为主，第一人称为主。
【高分短语句型】
Chinese calligraphy（中国书法）；brush（毛笔）；flk dance（民间舞蹈）；Chinese martial arts（中国武术）。
不定式作目的状语 T help yu better understand Chinese culture, we've arranged sme activities fr yu. 为了帮助您更好地了解中国文化，我们为您安排了一些活动。
被动语态&定语从句：After the lunch break, yu will be guided t the playgrund, where yu will practice Chinese martial arts, which are gd fr yur health. 午休后，你们会被带去操场练习中国武术，这对你们的健康有好处。
题型解读
应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言的实际应用能力，该题型写作目的明确，测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息，表达观点的能力，题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。应用文写作文体以书信（邮件）类为主，这类应用文通常出现提纲式要点，话题常常与学生的校园实际生活相关。
此次浙江新高考英语写作部分第一题应用文写作考查的方向是发言稿。这是浙江省新高考以来第一次出现书信以外的应用文格式，对学生作文训练的全面性和灵活性是一个新挑战。
推荐词汇和句型
此次考试的发言稿主要考查的是欢迎致辞，一般分为三个部分，即表示欢迎、致辞主体、表达祝愿。其中“表示欢迎”和“表达祝愿”可以使用如下的一些常用句式进行展开，以使行文更加符合写作目的：
【表示欢迎】
1. First f all, please allw me t express a warm welcme t yu n behalf f ur schl. 首先，请允许我代表我们学校对你们表示热烈的欢迎。
2. I’m hnred t have this pprtunity t welcme all f yu t visit ur schl.我很荣幸有这个机会欢迎大家来我们学校参观。
3. We have been lking frward t seeing yu fr a lng time. 我们一直期待着与你们相见。
4. I feel greatly privileged t have a chance t stand here, n behalf f all the students, t give a warm welcme t yu. 我很荣幸有机会代表所有的学生站在这里，向你们表示热烈的欢迎。
【表达祝愿】
1. Wish yu a pleasant jurney. 祝您这次路途愉快。
2. I hpe yu can enjy yur stay in ur schl. 希望你在我们学校过得愉快。
优秀范文1
Hell t all f ur precius guests frm New Zealand. My name is Li Hua. On behalf f the schl and the student bdy, I welcme yu t ur campus tday.
Fr yur visit, we have planned an itinerary f exciting events t intrduce t yu the culture that we as a schl take pride in nurturing. Whether it be explring the clurful histry f ur campus, r participating in sme friendly cmpetitin, we hpe yu will have as wnderful a time learning abut us as we certainly will abut yu.
优秀范文2
Welcme.
I am the student representative f ur schl and please allw me the hnur f welcming yu t ur schl.
T demnstrate ur crdial greetings, we will begin the tur by participating in different icebreaker activities designed by ur senir students. Then, we invite yu t partake in a cultural dance perfrmance that we are preparing fr the upcming spring festival celebratin. Finally, a delicius meal f traditinal Chinese fd will be the perfect way t end the day.
I hpe that yu feel at hme with ur humble etiquette.
优秀范文3
Hnrable guests, dear teachers and fellw students,First f all, please allw me t express a warm welcme t ur distinguished guests n behalf f the schl.As scheduled, during yur stay at ur schl, we will first give yu a tur f ur schl. Afterwards, yu can visit the English crner t talk with ur classmates and prmte ur friendship. Last but nt least, ur Chinese hst families will prvide the pprtunity t experience a different culture and try sme delicius, traditinal Chinese fd.
We wish yu a pleasant time at ur schl.
2020年高考真题
2020·全国卷I
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The persn I respect
There are many respectable peple arund us.
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【答案】
The persn I respect
We have a lt f respectable peple arund us. They may be ur teachers, parents r ne f ur elders. As fr me, my father is the persn I respect mst. My father is a teacher wh lves his wrk and his students very much. He wrks very hard every day but he will als spare sme time t accmpany me and share many funny things with me abut his wrk.
When I cme acrss the prblems f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students. S, in my mind my father is the persn I respect mst and I lve him deeply.
（1）写作思路：
第一步：确定题目类型——人物介绍类命题作文。
第二步：确定写作要点：
1. 话题引入；指明介绍的人物对象；介绍人物的身份、发生的故事等；
2. 分条写明尊敬该人物的原因，建议描述原因不少于2条；
3. 可适当补充细节，例如指明该人物对自己的影响，并进行升华。
（2）参考词汇、短语：
1. admire 敬佩；
2. lk up t sb. 尊敬某人；
3. be wrthy f 值得；
4. idl 偶像；
5. rle mdel 榜样；
6. when it cmes t… 当提及……。
（3）参考句式：
1. 名词性从句的使用：The reasn why…is that… ……的理由是……
2. 定语从句的使用：The ne that I regard as my rle mdel is… 我视作榜样的人是……
3. 非谓语动词的使用：Thugh suffering frm s many difficulties, he was still… 尽管经历着如此多的困难，他仍然……
4. 强调句的使用：It was frm him that I learn that… 正是从他身上我学到了……
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2020·全国卷II
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【答案】
My Weekend
Organized by the student unin, a grup f vlunteers went t Hpe Farm t help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the ft f a muntain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds f fruit trees as well as a variety f animals.
On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging n the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the nes that were mst beautiful in clr, then thse that were ripe and sft. I culdn’t wait t take a bite, and the sweet juice went dwn my thrat.
I was grateful fr this pprtunity t get clse t nature. Nt nly wuld I be able t experience fruit picking, but I culd als feast n the sweetness!
【解析】
（1）写作思路
本文是一篇提纲式的书面表达，要求介绍自己和同学上周末参加的一次采摘活动。在介绍农场情况时，可以谈论该农场的位置、农场的采摘品种、是否属于生态农场等内容；在描述采摘过程时，可以描述采摘的物品、和同学之间的合作、农民的指导等内容，时态应当以一般过去时为主；在表达个人感受时，可以从人与自然的角度或者劳动能力的培养方面入手，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在写作时，可以适当增加过渡词或句子，使文章更加的连贯流畅。
（2）重点词汇/句型
a. The eclgical farm grws a wide variety f fruit and vegetables.（a wide variety f 各种各样的）
b. The guide shwed us arund the farm and explained t us hw t pluck the fruit and vegetables.（shw sb. arund 带某人参观）
c. The fruit and vegetables were gd fr us because they were planted with rganic fertilizers.（be gd fr 对……有好处）
d. The clean air and the fresh fruit made me feel s relaxed that I wanted t pay a secnd visit.（s…that… 如此……以至于……）
标注
【话题】生活与学习；写事
【语篇】应用文
2020·全国卷III
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【答案】1
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging! I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk.
We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight, n the raft dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We saved a scared by. Hwever, the adaptin is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dn’t want anything inapprpriate t spil the play. S wuld yu please spare sme time t review the draft script attached t this email and make necessary changes? If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details?
Given yur busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if yu ffer t give sme prfessinal advice. Lk frward t yur early reply. Best regards!
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【答案】2
Dear Miss Evans,
I was wndering if yu culd help me revise a shrt play adapted frm ur English textbk.
The plt f the tragic stry is abut Lady Meng jiang and her husband, wh lived mre than 2000 years ag in ancient China.At their wedding,her husband was taken away frcefully t bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went t lk fr her husband, nly t learn f his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall，causing it t fall apart.
Culd yu kindly give me guidance n tw aspects? First f all, culd yu check the language fr us? Secndly, if yu culd please give us sme directin n ur acting and use f tne?
If pssible, culd I meet yu in yur ffice at 10 am?
We are lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
LiHua
解析
（1）写作思路：
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
3. 结构：总分总法
4. 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
（2）必备词汇、短语：
1. in sincerity 真诚地；
2. accrding t 根据；
3. cmbine…with… 将……与……结合；
4. adapt 改编；
5. attach…t… 将……附在……上；
6. it is cnvenient fr yu 你时间方便的时候。
（3）必备句式：
1. 定语从句的使用：we see a steambat that is ging t sink；
2. 非谓语动词作状语的使用：Having written the English script, we dn't want anything…；
3. 非谓语动词作定语的使用：…the draft script attached t this email；
4. 状语从句的使用：I'd be very appreciative if yu ffer t give sme prfessinal advice.
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【话题】求助
【语篇】应用文
2020年7月北京卷（1）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything is OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practicing. Since yu are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
第一步：写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，根据提纲内容可知使用一般现在时。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：start ding sth（开始做某事），be away（离开），need a drama teacher（需要戏剧老师），be experienced in（在……有经验）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1. 原因状语从句的使用，如Since yu are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.等；
2. 状语从句的省略，如Remember t wear a mask when necessary.等。
高级词汇：
1. recmmend 推荐；
2. currently 当前。
2020年7月北京卷（2）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华。居家学习期间，你们班开展了一次以 "自律" 为主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，给你们学校英文网站投稿，记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：自律self-discipline
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【答案】1
This unusual term witnessed a swift heart-shaking grwth in ur self-discipline,which was, is and will always be leaving a significant influence n ur develpment.
With the unexpected COID－19 threatening ur health and safety cntinuusly,staying indrs and wrking nline is a must-take defensive measure.We senir 3 students are just amng thse, wh have n ther chice but t manage urselves at hme by learning n the Internet.Hwever, ne day ,a survey came ,which shwed an awful result that mst f us had nt made full use f this kind f resurces,wasting much time playing nline games r paying n carefulness t the required lessns.Immediately,being the mnitr f ur class, I frwned with endless anxiety.At dinner,a talk tk place in my family,where my cnsiderate father and mther put frward practical suggestins.With the purpse f strengthening self-discipline awareness tgether,I rganized an nline classmeeting ，stating a series f advice ,calling n everyne t imprve ur self-discipline and ending up with a regular rule.Finally came the time when three mnths flew away.A new survey shwing ur prgress excited me greatly,with the result that I called my headteacher,telling him ur lng-expected achievements.Meanwhile,delight mixed with bits f satisfactin surged int his heart and mine.
It is wing t this special perid that we have grwn up rapidly.Nthing is impssible if we are determined enugh t cntrl urselves and build self-discipline in any situatin.
【答案】2
While studying at hme, I surveyed my class n "self-discipline". The findings wrried me a lt.
T slve the prblem, I asked my parents fr help, and they ffered sme practical advice. Then I held an nline discussin with my classmates n hw t well discipline urselves. After that, we all knew better what t d.
Three mnths later, I did a secnd survey, which shwed great imprvements in self-discipline. I phned my teacher abut it, and we bth felt very pleased.
【解析】
第一步：读图，审题，初步确定时态为一般过去时。
第二步：根据图片内容，确定表达需要的关键词或者词组，如study at hme（在家学习），ask sb fr help（向某人寻求帮助），ffer practice advice（提供实际的建议），discipline urselves（自律）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1.状语从句的省略，如While studying at hme, I surveyed my class n "self-discipline". 等；
2.非限制性定语从句的使用，如Three mnths later, I did a secnd survey, which shwed great imprvements in self-discipline.等。
高级词汇：
1.practical 实际的，切实可行的；
2.shw great imprvement 表现出巨大的进步。
2020.7·浙江卷
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1. 询问近况；
2. 分享班级最新消息；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】1
Dear Peter,
Hearing that yu have gne back t Ireland due t the illness, I' m really srry abut it. Hw's everything ging nw? I sincerely hpe yu will sn be restred t health. Nw, I'd like t share sme news abut ur class with yu.
The first ne that I can' t wait t tell yu is that David, wh participated in the English speech cntest last mnth, wn the first prize. Next is that we plan t have a three-day trip t Shanghai this summer hliday. Hw much we hpe yu culd g with us! Last, we have made Hannah ur new mnitr next term.
In the end, again I wish yu a speedy recvery.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】2
Dear Peter,
I am srry t hear that yu have gne back hme n sick leave. Hw are yu feeling nw?
I hpe my gd news fr yu will sweep away the shadw f disease. Last mnth, an English festival was held in ur schl, and ur class perfrmed a sng which yu taught us at the festival. As sn as we finished the sng, all the audience gave us warm applause. If nly yu had been there.
We all miss yu very much and wish yu a quick and cmplete recvery.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【写作思路】
1. 作文类型：写邮件询问近况，分享消息，表达祝福
2. 时态确定：一般过去时、现在完成时用于询问近况和分享消息；一般将来时用于表达祝福
3. 人称确定：第一人称、第二人称用于询问对方和表达自己的情况；第三人称用于陈述客观的事物
【高分亮点】
关键短语：
1. restre t 使……恢复
2. can't wait t d 迫不及待做某事
3. participate in 参加
高级句型：
1. 现在分词作原因状语：Hearing that yu have gne back t Ireland due t the illness, I'm really srry abut it. 听说你因病回国，我感到很难过。
2. 定语从句、宾语从句：The first ne that I can't wait t tell yu is that David, wh participated in the English speech cntest last mnth, wn the first prize. 第一个我迫不及待想要告诉你的消息是，大卫上个月参加了英语演讲比赛获得了第一名。
3. 表达祝福： ①I sincerely hpe yu will sn be restred t health. ②I wish yu a speedy recvery. 祝你早日康复！
2020.7山东卷
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
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【答案】
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
A 5, 000-metre crss-cuntry running race tk place in ur schl last Sunday. It was widely welcmed by all the classes frm three grades. 100 students and teaching staff tk part in the race. All the runners tried their best t win, with thers cheering them n. The racing rute started at the schl gate and ended at the ft f the Suth Hill. The race turned ut t be a great success. Nt nly des it build up ur bdy but it als enriches ur schl life.
解析
（1）写作思路
本篇为提纲类的书面表达，以越野赛跑为话题进行描述。在写作时，应先介绍越野赛跑发生的时间和地点；接下来介绍参加人员，可以包括学生和教职工；然后，可以介绍参赛人员的精神面貌以及其他非参赛人员的加油助威；接下来，可以介绍越野赛跑的路线；最后，可以总结本次赛跑举办地很成功，大家的身心都得到了升华。由于是描述过去发生的事情，因此时态应当以一般过去时为主，人称应当以第一人称为主。
（2）重点词汇/句型
a. take place 举行；发生
b. take part in 参加
c. try ne's best t d sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
d. cheer n 为……加油；为……喝彩
e. turn ut 结果是
f. build up 增强……的体质
标注
【语篇】记叙文
【话题】生活与学习；写事
2020.7·江苏卷
请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(dcumentary)的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。
Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did yu see the BBC dcumentary n CCTV 9 last week?
Li Jiang: Yu mean Du Fu: China’s Greatest Pet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!
Su Hua: Just think an English actr recites Chinese pems.
Li Jiang: I dn’t really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly lves the pems himself.
Su Hua: Right. It is reprted that the film is well received utside China.
Li Jiang: Yeah, It’s my first time t hear Chinese stries tld by an English speaker.
Su Hua: In fact, dcumentaries abut ur cuntry are plentiful bth at hme and abrad. These films can help freign friends better understand this land-Chinese literature, gegraphy histry, fd...
Li Jiang: I culdn’t agree mre.
【写作内容】
1．用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容；
2．谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因（至少两点）。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当.。
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【答案】
CCTV 9 bradcast Du Fu: China’s Greatest Pet, a dcumentary prduced by BBC. This well-made film prvides freign audiences with a fresh way f better knwing China’s past and present.
Dcumentaries abut China, prduced either in China r in ther cuntries, are becming increasingly ppular amng freigners. Fr ne thing, the verall develpment ver the past decades has been s striking that they feel eager t familiarize themselves with what is ging n in China.
Fr anther, China enjys a lng histry and rich culture. It has always been an attractin fr thse wh are keen n anything that is Chinese. These dcumentaries present a splendid picture f China in frnt f their audiences-it histry, landscape, art, fd, r even traditinal Chinese medicine.
Because f these films, sme freigners have begun t think f cming t China. In this way, they can frm a true picture f China themselves.
【解析】
写作思路：
要求你阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片（dcumentary）的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。所写内容要包括题干要求。根据所给提纲灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用。时态主要为一般现在时态和现在完成时态。
高分词汇：
1. prvide with 供给；
2. a fresh way f 一种新的方法；
3. eager t 渴望；
4. familiarize with 使熟悉（或通晓）；
6. keen n 喜爱；热衷于…：
7. think f 想起；考虑；
高分句型：
1. …the past decades has been s striking that they feel eager t familiarize themselves with what is ging n in China. has dne现在完成时态的使用；s…that引导的从句的使用；what引导的宾语从句的使用，从句充当with的宾语。
2. It has always been an attractin fr thse wh are… has dne 现在完成时态的使用和wh引导的限制性定语从句的使用。
标注
【语篇】议论文
【话题】历史、社会与文化；社会现象
2020.7·天津卷2
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the cming-f age ceremny
新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.
Dear Chris,
I'm s glad t hear frm yu.
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am s glad t hear frm yu. The cming-f-age ceremny was held in ur schl n June 8th this mnth. During the cming-f-age ceremny, the headmaster cngratulated us n stepping int the adult, reviewing the grwth perid that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the vide f alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Thrugh the activity, what I felt is that I am able t shulder the respnsibility and make us strnger and mre determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must vercme them. In the future, I will be a gd dctr t heal the wunded and rescue the dying, devting myself t my wrk.
Best wishes！
Yurs,
Li Jin
‘’成人礼“特定表达：
1、成人礼：cming-f-age ceremny
2、Our ceremny fell n May 16. fall n 在某一天举行
3、 In China the age f 18 means we have grwn up. 不能用18 years ld 做主语
4、During the ceremny, dressed in Hanfu, a traditinal dress (cstume)f Han Chinese peple, we perfrmed/bserved a series f rituals. 注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。
5、We gt dwn n ur knees/knelt dwn n the grund t ur parents t express ur thanks t them fr raising us and bringing us up. 注意“下跪 ”的表达。
6、We we s many thanks t ur parents. we sth. t sb. “欠，欠恩、欠情”
7、The ceremny is intended t make us understand the meaning fmaturity and respnsibility. be intended t d 旨在
素材
成人礼cming-f-age ceremny是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式，它标志着告别孩童时代(childhd)，进入成年期(adulthd)。在成人礼上，通常都要进行成年宣誓(take an ath t adulthd)。在中国一些地方，成人礼上还流行穿汉服(traditinal Han cstumes)，祭拜孔子(cnsecrate Cnfucius)等习俗。
cming-f-age ceremny就是成人礼，是在少男少女年纪满18岁时举办的象征迈向成人阶段的典礼。男孩要进行capping ceremny(冠礼)，女孩要进行hair-pinning ceremny(加笄礼)。举办成人礼示意一个人已经cme f age(成年)，在阅历了puberty(青春期)之后，实现了从adlescent(青少年)向yuth(青年)的改变。
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:cngratulate sb n sth., be faced with, heal the wunded and rescue the dying, devte neself t ding sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the cming-f-age ceremny, the headmaster cngratulated us n stepping int the adult, reviewing the grwth perid that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Thrugh the activity, what I felt is that I am able t shulder the respnsibility and make us strnger and mre determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must vercme them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, hwever.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the cming-f-age ceremny, the headmaster cngratulated us n stepping int the adult, reviewing the grwth perid that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Thrugh the activity, what I felt is that I am able t shulder the respnsibility and make us strnger and mre determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must vercme them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
高级句式：
1. 过去分词短语用作状语的使用，如Inspired by the spirit f fearlessness, we'll take n the respnsibility and cntinue t mve frward. 等
2. 定语从句的使用，如We shwed ur thanks t ur parents wh have brught us up and teachers wh have been educating us patiently. 等
3. 强调句型的使用，如It was then that I realized the imprtance f the respnsibility. 等
高级词汇：
1. lk back 回顾
2. sacrifice neself 自我牺牲
3. determined and cnfident 坚定和自
2020.5·天津卷1
假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语, 请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Gd mrning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like t take this pprtunity t talk abut hw I learn English n the Internet.
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【答案】
Gd mrning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like t take this pprtunity t talk abut hw I learn English n the Internet.
First, there are a lt f free resurces related t English n the Internet, s I learn English by reading bks r news, listening t pstcdes and by watching streaming vides f TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance t cmmunicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, vide calling and nline frums, which imprves my spken and written English.
Based n my wn experience, learning English nline is really a great way fr English learners. But I have t remind that nt everything n the Internet is right and we shuld learn t identify the wrng infrmatin. In the end, I sincerely hpe that yu can share yur experience f learning English n the Internet.
解析
本文是要你根据如何利用网络学习英语，写一篇文章，内容要包括题干要点，根据所给提纲、要点为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。
1. 本文人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时态。
2. 写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。
3. 根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
高分词汇：
be accessible t 容易接近的，容易进入的
the develpment f ……的发展
share with 和……分享
as far as I am cncerned 就我个人而言
高分句型：
1. With the develpment f Internet and educatin mde, nline teaching has becme increasingly cmmn.with复合结构的使用和has dne现在完成时态的使用。
2. It is widely acknwledged that nline teaching has its apparent merits.it是形式主义，真正的主语是that引导的从句。
3. Shared resurces nline are accessible t all peple, which csts a little at the same time.非谓语动词shared的使用和which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用。
2020年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友Gerge写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1.比赛时间；
2.演讲话题；
3.报名方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Gerge,
Knwing that yu have a great passin fr Chinese culture, I’m writing t invite yu t participate in the Chinese Speaking Cmpetitin rganized by ur schl.
Scheduled t be held n January 20 in the schl’s lecture hall, the cmpetitin fcuses n the theme f “first impressin f China”. Undubtedly, yur fluent Chinese, excellent speaking skills, and especially prfund knwledge f China will never fail t impress the audience. S, if yu’re interested, please sign up n the schl’s website befre January 15.
Lking frward t yur wnderful presentatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2020上海卷
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，前几日，你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直犹豫不决。假如你是李华，请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。
要求包括以下内容：
1.解决王磊的困扰
2.音乐会的重要性
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范文1
Dear Wang Lei,
It’s been a while since I heard frm yu. Last time, I invited yu t attend the cncert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Thugh yu did nt reply t me, the hesitatin wearing n yur face ffered me a glimpse f what was ging n in yur mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather r the terrible traffic that hinder yu frm making up yur mind. Hwever, as far as I cncerned, it’s still wrth ur effrts.
This cncert is nt a pp music cncert but a classic music ne where several prestigius symphny rchestras will perfrm many well-knwn cmpsitins. It must be a feast fr all the audience. Mrever, chances are that we may have an album with perfrmers’ autgraphs n it. Yu shuld never miss such a fabulus cncert!
In terms f difficulties yu are wrried abut, I have already fund sme slutins. My father will be available n that day s that he can drive us t the scene. I have managed t persuade him t make his prmise. In additin, in case f a rainy day, I have prepared tw raincats. I am cnfident that we will indulge urselves int the elegant flw f ntes.
I am lking frward t hearing yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Wang Lei,
Hw are yu ding these days? Yu’ve been hesitated t g with me t the pen-air cncert in the cuntry park n Friday. It seems t me what’s hlding yu back is the terrible weather and the incnvenient transprtatin, neither f which, in my pinin, is bstacles.
Firstly, there is n need t bther with things uncntrllable, such as the weather cnditin. We can make plans ahead accrding t the weather frecasting. If yu are nt cnfident with it, we can plan fr bth rainy day and sunny day.
Secndly, mbile navigatin apps can help us chse the best way, saving us frm the truble f wrrying abut the traffic cnditins and the subways’ service time. Lastly, the mst imprtant thing is that this cncert is such a majr event that yu wuld regret if yu didn’t cme.
Besides, yur favrite band will be perfrming! Wuldn’t it be amazing t see yur idls face t face and even get a chance t talk t them!
Hpefully yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin. And I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2019年高考真题
2019.6·全国卷I
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意:：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
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Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua.
【答案】1
Dear sir r madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, wh is studying in Lndn during the summer vacatin. Knwing that the lcal art gallery will hld an exhibitin f Chinese paintings, I am writing t apply fr vlunteering. As a student wh has learned Chinese painting since 5 years ld, I am very pleased t have an pprtunity t intrduce Chinese paintings t freigners. Besides, my fluent spken English and rich knwledge abut Chinese paintings will help visitrs understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I culd be given the pprtunity.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua.
【答案】2
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student frm China. Learning that vlunteer students are wanted fr a Chinese painting exhibitin, I'm writing t apply fr the psitin.
I think I'm quite equal t the pst. T begin with, being expsed t English since a yung age enables me t cmmunicate fluently with thers. Besides, years f being mnitr makes me a brilliant rganizer, which will help a lt t keep the exhibitin in rder. Additinally, I can make full use f my related knwledge t help the visitrs learn mre abut the unique Chinese art frm.
I wuld be grateful if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs，
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：vlunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibitin，lcal city，advantages，a gd cmmand f，beneficial fr，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my applicatin int cnsideratin。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First f all, Besides, t begin with，mrever，as fr me，Last but nt least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【点睛】
本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an utging by, wh is studying in Lndn.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibitin will be held in this lcal city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China fr sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a gd cmmand f English and Chinese, which is beneficial fr intrducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First f all, Besides, Last but nt least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin条件状语从句。
2019·全国卷II
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing t let yu knw that we will have a vlleyball match next mnth. The match will take place in ur schl gym n the afternn f July 4th. We will play against the team frm HngXing High Schl. In rder t win the match, we shuld get fully prepared and practice hard. S frm tmrrw, we need t train fr tw hurs after schl every day. Please cme t the schl gym at 6:30 pm frm Mnday t Friday.
Yu’re an excellent player. With yu n the team, we are cnfident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard tgether!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【答案】 2
Dear Chris,
Are yu excited abut ur cming vlleyball game against Yucai Middle Schl next Friday? Here I'd like t infrm yu f sme detailed infrmatin s that yu can make full preparatins fr it.
First and fremst, the cmpetitin t be held in ur schl stadium will begin at 2 pm and last fr rughly 3 hurs. S significant is the game that it is required that everyne shuld present themselves punctually. Further, it is necessary fr yu t take a gd rest, which will prvide enugh energy fr yu. T sum up, I wish yu culd live up t the expectatins f ur schl. And I firmly believe hard wrk will pay ff!
Lking frward t ur victry!
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【分析】
今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I’m writing t let yu knw that we will have a vlleyball match next mnth.宾语从句；In rder t win the match不定式作目状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。
2019·全国卷III
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】1
Dear Allen,
Hw is everything ging? Our schl will hld a music festival next Sunday mrning in the schl hall. And I’m writing t invite yu t jin us.
The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am, and the schlmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be varius fantastic perfrmances played by talented students. Yu are definitely welcme t shw up n stage, which will add clr and fun t ur festival.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】2
Dear Allen,
Yu must have heard f the upcming Music Festival t be held in ur schl. Since yu take much interest in music, I am writing t invite yu t participate in the festival with me.
As scheduled, it will be held n the playgrund frm 5 p. m. t 8 p. m. next Sunday. Additinally, sitting n the grass and enjying the tasty fd and drinks prvided by spnsrs, we will be fully absrbed in the attractive and fascinating perfrmances. Furthermre, we als expect t see yu n the stage then.
I'd be mre than delighted if yu culd cme and share this jyful mment with me. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】
首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Hw is everything ging? a music festival，in the schl hall，The pening ceremny等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：Yu are definitely welcme t shw up n stage, which will add clr and fun t ur festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。
It's a pleasure fr me t invite yu t attend…我很荣幸能邀请你参加……
I think it will be a gd idea/mre beneficial if yu culd… 我认为……是个好主意/有利的。
Thank yu fr yur attentin. 感谢你对此事的关注。
If yu…, yu will… 如果你……，你将会…….。
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me an early reply. 希望尽早得到答复。
2019.6·北京卷1
第一节 (15分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；
2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that yu’re cming t tur in China.
I suggest that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund. Tianjin will be yur next stp. After that, yu can g t Shanghai, where yu can stay fr a week. Yu can take high-speed trains t bth cities. Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu.
Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs,
Li Hua

【写作指导】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that yu’re cming t tur in China.和that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund.是宾语从句。 where yu can stay fr a week.是非限制性定语从句。
解析
shw yu arund 带你参观；
take high-speed trains t bth cities 坐高铁到这两个城市；
take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu 带上夏季服装和雨伞；
Lking frward t yur arrival 期待你的到来。
2019年6月北京卷（2）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以 "劳动最光荣" 为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜 watermeln
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【答案】
Last week I tk part in a farm wrk prgramme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, ur teacher tld us abut the prgramme with the theme "Wrking is mst beautiful". And he stressed the imprtance f wrking with ur wn hands.
When I gt hme, I packed up my luggage fr the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelns. While wrking, I realized hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun.
When I came back hme, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very prud f me.
【解析】
Wrking is mst beautiful 劳动最光荣；
stressed the imprtance f wrking with ur wn hands 强调了用自己双手工作的重要性；
packed up my luggage 打包我的行李；
I realised hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun我意识到在烈日下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。
2019.6·天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High Schl.
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Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs，
Li Jin
【答案】1
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High schl. Hearing that yu will be sent t ur schl t participate in a ne-week cmmunicatin activity n behalf f ur partner-schl, I feel excited t give sme advice n the speech abut western art, which will be given by yu. Here are sme f my suggestins.
Frm my perspective, amng all the themes n western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I wuld like t have a better understanding f music, fr a great number f my classmates are fnd f music. T enhance ur knwledge, I wuld appreciate it if yu add sme infrmatin abut the histry and develpment f western music. In additin, sme excellent wrks f music and the intrductin f several distinguished musicians wuld be a gd way t braden ur hrizn.
Anyway, I can't wait t meet yu frm the bttm f my heart!
Thank yu fr yur time!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】2
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High Schl. I gt the news that yur schl will send teachers t my schl fr a week-lng summer exchange. During the activity，yu will give a lecture n Western art. Yu want t seek fr advice n what tpic the lecture will be abut. Frm my persnal nte，music is my pririty.
I am interested in all kinds f music，amng which Jazz is my favrite. I want t knw abut the histry f jazz，and sme famus jazz singers. I wuld appreciate it if yu can add sme sessins f enjying jazz.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs，
Li Jin
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
本篇写作为应用文体，书信类的建议信。
第一步：审题。
（1）判断时态与写作主语：时态为一般现在时为主，人称第一人称。
（2）根据细节判断文章段落：三段式：开头寒喧说明理由（需要补充），中间发展说明具体事项，结束表达感谢或祝福（已给出）。
第二步：细节补充：
第一段：说明写信目的：根据题目提示，说明写信背景（友好校活动以及老师讲座），点名主题（关于讲座给出建议）。
第二段：针对写作细节详细介绍：从三个话题中做出选择，并说明选择的理由。补充想要了解的内容（建议1-2点）。
第三段：表达见面的期望并感谢阅信。（由于最后一段文章已给提示为感谢，可考虑将期望放到第二段结尾）。
最后，整洁的卷面是写作获得良好印象分的关键，记得用心誊抄哦。
评分原则
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。
3. 词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度的情减分。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
内容要点
1. 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
2. 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
3. 希望从中有何收获。
各档次的给分范围和要求
2019年3月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的 "读书月" 活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以 "Let's Read" 为题的征文活动。要求同学根据个人的阅读体会，从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。
参考词汇：
科幻小说 science fictin 侦探小说 detective nvel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 bigraphy 科普读物 ppular science
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
（3）内容充实，行文连贯；
（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Let's Read
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
【答案】
Let’s Read
Knwing that during “Reading Mnth” in ur schl English Sciety will hld an activity named “Let’s Read” n Wechat, I’d like t share smething abut my wn experience and feeling with all the students.
I have been crazy abut reading since I was a child. My favrite type f bk is always science fictins. Science fictin is based n the latest technlgy and discvery and telling us a fantasy stry that will pssibly happen in the future. In the past decades, science fictin has been mre and mre ppular with teenagers. Therefre, it has cme int a new style and even a culture. While reading science fictins, I nt nly feel shcked and amazed abut the unknwn future made up by the authr but als knw mre knwledge and infrmatin abut the develpment f science.
I’m sure every teenager will like science fictin and benefit frm it! Lking frward t getting yu t take part in “Let’s Read”!
2019.6·浙江卷
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】1
Dear Alex,
Learning that yu're leaving fr the United States sn, I'm eagerly writing t express my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr yur help.
Hnestly speaking,it's s nice f yu t ffer me a class f practical learning skills.Under yur prfessinal guidance,I have made such unbelievable prgress in English.It's indeed a pleasant surprise fr me t even rank first in a recent English speech cntest. WheneverI encunter difficulties, yu always cheer me up and help me ut, which fuels my enthusiasm fr English and prmtes me t regain tremendus cnfidence.N wrds are strng enugh t cnvey hw grateful l am.
Thanks again and wish yu a pleasant jurney hme.
Yurs,
【答案】2
Dear Chris,
I am s regretful t knw that yu are ging t return t yur hme befre lng. We get alng well during yur stay in China and yu ffered me lts f help. I wuld like t express my gratitude t yu fr yur help with my English. While studying in China, yu always spent yur free time in helping me plish up my ral English. It is yu wh shared me with rich knwledge f English and English culture. Never will I frget yu and yur kindness. It is my hpe that yu can remember me as ften as pssible.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
2019年1月广东卷（春考）告知
你是李华，就读于国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bb，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友（pen pal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 表示感谢。
注意 : 1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不算词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，并将开头型结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。
Dear bb,
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Bb,
My name is Li Hua, an internatinal schl student. I am writing the letter t yu t help me t find a pen pal.
I'm an utging and easy-ging by, s I am fnd f making friends. Nw I want t make a pen pal frm English-speaking cuntry, frm whm I can make a gd cmmand f English language and culture. At the same time, I wuld like t share my favrite histry and Chinese traditinal music with him.
I wuld appreciate it if yu can recmmend a pen pal t me. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
考查提纲类写作。本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一封书信：你是李华,就读于、国同学校。你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bb，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友（pen pal），以便相互学习对方的语言和文化：你容易相处，熟悉中国历史，喜欢中国传统音乐。
内容要点：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：an internatinal schl student（一名国际学校的学生）；t help me t find a pen pal（帮助我找一个笔友）；utging and easy-ging by（外向且容易相处的男孩）；fnd f making friends（喜爱交朋友）；make a gd cmmand f English language and culture（精通英语语言和文化）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
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分数档
内容
语法结构和词汇
衔接和连贯
整体效果
第五档21-25分（很好）
覆盖所有内容要点，并有适当发挥。
应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；表达准确、地道；有个别错误，但不影响对写作内容的理解。
有效使用衔接手段，内容连贯，结构紧凑
具备较强的语言运用能力；完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档16-20分（好）
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；表达基本准确，些许错误对写作内容的理解影响不大。
应用了简单的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的
第三档11~15分（一般）
漏掉一些内容，覆盖部分内容要点。
应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求；有一些错误，对写作内容的理解造成了一定影响。
应用了简单的连接成分，内容基本连贯。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档6-10分（较差）
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，有一些无关内容。
语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；错误较多，且在很大程度上影响了对写作内容的理解。
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档1~5分（差）
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关的内容，可能未理解试题要求
语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
基本信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。