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通过本课学习，你将会：为了达到目标，你需要：达到这个目标，你能够：
学习冲突写作的3个技能
了解并运用好冲突的力量
写好故事冲突为续写加分
Fr sale, Baby shes, Never wrn.--Ernest Hemingway
冲突有力量：将“事故”变成“故事”，以情动人。
情节的“LOCK系统”主角（Lead）目标（Objective）冲突（Cnfrntatin）冲击结尾（Knckut）
一个好故事，本质上就是对冲突的记录。
A wman is sitting in her ld, shuttered huse. She knws that she is alne in the whle wrld; every ther thing is dead.The drbell rings.
“引线”是扰乱事件，打破主角平静生活。故事伊始，主角过着特定的生活，如果没有扰乱事件，主角将不会改变。扰乱事件不一定是严重的威胁，但会打乱主角平静的日常生活。
When Bill was very yung, they had been in lve. Many nights they had spent walking, talking tgether. Then smething nt very imprtant had cme between them, and they didn’t speak. Impulsively, she had married a man she thught she lved. Bill went away, bitter abut wmen.Yesterday, walking acrss Washingtn Square, she saw him fr the first time in years.“Bill Walker,” she said.He stpped. At first he did nt recgnize her, t him she lked s ld.“Mary! Where did yu cme frm?”Uncnsciusly, she lifted her face as thugh wanting a kiss, but he held ut his hand. She tk it.
(1)主角原本生活：_________________________________________.(2)扰乱事件：_____________________________________________.(3)冲突的组合形式：_______________________________________.(4)扰乱事件可能的影响：___________________________________.(5)结局可能的方向：①_____________________________________. ②_____________________________________.
“诱因”是性格写照，推动情节特定发展。人物形象主要有两类：圆形人物（rund character）和扁平人物（flat character）。圆形人物性格复杂，他往往随着故事的发展而成长，冲突很有可能会改变他的三观。扁平人物性格单一，他的行为模式是固定可预测的，反面人物多半属于这一类，也常常是冲突的来源。在分析冲突本质时，我们思考性格对这两类人物在特定情境下的情绪反应，归因其性格缺陷，比如，怯懦、傲慢、粗暴、狡诈、虚伪、吝啬、偏执、不够勇敢等。研读语篇时，我们可以分析人物性格，推动故事冲突。
A Vacatin with My MtherI had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because f my mther – lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten. （节选自2017年11月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试浙江卷）
(1)主角的人物形象：_____________________________________(2)主角的性格缺陷：_____________________________________(3)性格缺陷可能产生的冲突：_____________________________(4)冲突的组合形式：_____________________________________(5)结局可能的方向：_____________________________________
The big Twn Hall clck was striking midnight when Frank began t crss the bridge. The dark night air was cld and wet, and the street lamps gave little light. Frank was anxius t get hand and his ftsteps rang ludly n the silent night.When he reached the middle f the bridge, he thught he culd hear smene cming near behind him. He lked back but culd see n ne. Hwever, the sund cntinued, and Frank began walking mre quickly. Then he slwed dwn again, thinking there was nthing t fear in a twn as quiet as this. The shrt, quick steps grew luder until they seemed very near.Frank fund it impssible nt t turn rund. As he did s, he caught sight f a human frm cming tward him. After reaching the ther side f the bridge, Frank stpped and pretended t lk dwn at the water. Frm the crner f his eyes he culd nw make ut the frm f a man dressed in a large vercat. A hat was pulled dwn ver his eyes and very little f his face culd be seen.As the man came near, Frank turned twards him and said smething abut the weather in an effrt t be friendly. The man did nt answer but asked rughly where Oakfield Huse was. Frank pinted t a big huse in the distance and the stranger cntinued his way.Then Frank wndered why the stranger had wanted t find Oakfield Huse at such an hur. He knew that the persn wh lived there was very rich. Almst withut realizing what he was ding, Frank began fllwing the stranger quietly.The man was sn utside the huse and Frank saw him lk up at the windws. A light was still n, and the man waited until it went ut. When abut half an hur had passed, Frank saw him climb niselessly ver the wall and heard him drp nt the grund at the ther side.（试题选自浙江省宁波市2018届高三上学期期末考试） Para.1 Nw Frank knew what the man wanted t d. _______________________________________________________________________ Para.2 Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. _______________________________________________________________________
“危机”是读者诉求，营造故事冲击结局。
（选自浙江省宁波市2018届高三上学期期末考试）
Para.1 Nw Frank knew what the man wanted t d. _______________________________Para. 2 Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. ______________________________
学生作品：(para.2) Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. An excessive cncern welled up in his mind. S annyed was he that he culdn’t wait any lnger. Feeling determined, he turned arund and ran t the plice statin quickly. Frank tld the plice that there must be a thief getting int the Oakfield Huse. Thanks t Frank’s help, the plice eventually arrested the thief. And Frank became the her in the twn.设计的危机：________________________________________________合理性分析：_________________________________________________
技巧一 冲突双方的“力量”要均衡技巧二 冲突的解决要有“冲击力”技巧三 人与物要有“联系和中断”
营造冲突的3种实用技巧
技巧一 冲突双方的“力量”要均衡
请为语篇设计“力量均衡”的冲突。With the kitchen dr carefully lcked frm the utside, the man threatened t kill us if we made any nises and tried t escape. Sn we heard his heavy and hurried steps. We knew he went upstairs t search the bedrm fr smething valuable. I clearly knew it was the nly chance t stp the rbber cntinuing his crime. I exchanged silent glances with my brther. With my special trick in bunding up, he successfully reached ut his hand t untie himself. Then he cautiusly helped untie the rpes arund me. Obviusly, he was in great terrr as I nticed his trembling hands and tearing eyes. After he made it, I kissed his frehead t cmfrt him. I encuraged him t pull himself tgether. Realizing the rbber was cmmitting the crime, I_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（1）力量分布：_____________________________________（2）力量形式：_____________________________________（3）可能结局：_____________________________________（4）你的续写：_____________________________________
（1）力量分布：the strng rbber V.S. the trapped and weak brthers（2）力量形式：physical strength and wisdm“I”, althugh physically weak, gt us ut f “truble” with my wisdm eventually.（3）可能结局：The rbber wuld be arrested.（4）续写：Realizing the rbber was cmmitting the crime, I cautiusly pened the kitchen windw. Hwever, it was t high fr a kid t jump ver. I was feeling a desperate lss when I nticed the neighbr walking ver. Frtunately, I waved t draw him clse and explained what had happened t us just nw. He was shcked but dialed 911 immediately. Waiting fr the arrival f the plice, he kept calming us dwn. With the plice insight minutes later, I knew we were safe eventually.
技巧二 冲突的解决要有“冲击力”
请为语篇设计“冲击性”结局。My wife Laura and I were n the beach, with three f ur children, taking pictures f shre birds near ur hme in Alaska when we sptted a bear. The bear was thin and small, mving aimlessly.Just a few minutes later, I heard my daughter shuting, “Dad! The bear is right behind us!” An aggressive bear will usually rush frward t frighten away its enemy but wuld suddenly stp at the last minute. This ne was silent and its ears pinned back--the sign f an animal that is ging in fr the kill. And it was a cld April day. The bear behaved abnrmally, prbably because f hunger.I held my camera tripd(三脚架) in bth hands t frm a barrier as the bear rushed int me. Its huge head was level with my chest and shulders, and the tripd stuck acrss its muth. It bit dwn and I fund myself supprting its weight. I knew I wuld nt be able t hld it fr lng.Even s, this was a fight I had t win: I was all that std between the bear and my family, wh wuld stand little chance f running faster than a brwn bear.
（1）力量分布：______________（2）力量形式：______________（3）“冲击性”发展：________（4）可能结局：______________（5）你的续写：______________
The bear hit at the camera, cutting it ff the tripd. I raised my left arm t prtect my face; the beast held tightly n the tripd and pressed it int my side. My arm culd nt mve, and I sensed that my bnes were ging t break.Drawing back my free hand, I struck the bear as hard as I culd fr five r six times. _________________________________
（1）力量分布：the pwerful bear V.S. rdinary human beings（2）力量形式：physical cnflicts（3）“冲击性”发展：We were t terrified t make psitive and effective defense. Thus, we lst the battle with the bear. （4）可能结局：We were safe and sund in the end.（5）续写：Drawing back my free hand, I struck the bear as hard as I culd fr five r six times. The bear pened its muth and I grasped its fur, trying t push it away. I was actually wrestling with the bear at this pint. Then, as suddenly as it had begun, the fight ended. The bear mved back twards the frest, befre returning fr anther attack--the first time I felt panic. Apparently satisfied that we caused n further threat, the bear mved ff, destrying a fence as it went. My arm was injured, but the utcme fr us culd hardly have been better. I’m prud that my family remained clear-headed when panic culd have led t a very different utcme.
技巧三 人与物要有“联系和中断”
The Stry f AtlantaAtlanta was a Greek princess. She was very beautiful and culd run faster than any man in Greece. But she was nt allwed t run and win glry fr herself in the Olympic Games. She was s angry that she said t her father that she wuld nt marry anyne wh culd nt run faster than her. Her father said that she must marry, s Atlanta made a bargain with him. She said t him, “These are my rules. When a man says he wants t marry me, I will run against him. If he cannt run as fast as me, he will be killed. N ne will be pardned.”Many kings and princes wanted t marry Atlanta, but when they heard f rules they knew it was hpeless. S many f them sadly went hme, but thers stayed t run the race. There was a man called Hippmenes wh was amazed when he heard f Atlanta’s rules, “Why are these men s flish?” he thught. “Why will they let themselves be killed because they cannt run as fast as this princess?” Hwever, when she saw Atlanta cme ut f her huse t run, Hippmenes changed his mind. “I will marry Atlanta--r die!” he said.
（1）力量分布：____________________（2）力量形式：____________________（3）“冲击性”发展：______________（4）主角的主要联系：______________（5）联系的可能中断：______________（6）可能结局：____________________（7）你的续写：_______________________________________________________
The race started and althugh the man ran very fast, Atlanta ran faster. As Hippmenes watched he thught, “Hw can I run as fast as Atlanta?” He went t ask the Greek Gdness f Lve fr help. She prmised t help him and gave him three glden apples. She said, “Thrw an apple in frnt f Atlanta when she is running past. When she stps t pick it up, yu will be able t run past her and win.”Hippmenes tk the apples and went t the King. He said, “I want t marry Atlanta.” The King was sad t see anther man die, but Hippmenes said, “I will marry her--r die!” S the race began.S the next day Hippmenes was waiting when Atlanta came ut. She thught, “I dn’t want this man t die.” S she said t her father, “Tell him t g away.” The race will nt be run tday.” But Hippmenes said, “These are her rule: She will marry the man wh runs faster than her. Cme n—let’s run!”Para.1 When the race started, Hippmenes ran fast, but Atalanta ran even faster. __________________________Para.2 When she finally caught up with Hippmenes the secnd time, he threw the third and last apple. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（1）力量分布：Atlanta’s super running capacity V.S. Hippmenes’s glden apples frm the Gddess f lve（2）力量形式：magic f glden apples, Atlanta’s physical strength and mercy ut f lve t Hippmenes（3）“冲击性”发展：Atlanta’s nearly catching up with Hippmenes in the race（4）主角的主要联系：the tug-f-war in the running race（5）联系的可能中断：the Glden apples’ magic cast n Atlanta, leaving her falling behind Hippmenes（5）可能结局：With the help f three glden apples, Hippmenes wn the race and married Atlanta
（6）你的续写：When the race started, Hippmenes ran fast, but Atalanta ran even faster. He had n chice but t take ut the first glden apple and threw it in frnt f her. Driven by curisity, Atalanta came t an abrupt stp and pick it up. S Hippmenes tk the chance t run past her. Realizing that might be a trick, she tk up all her strength t catch up with him in time. Just then, Hippmenes threw anther glden apple ver her head and far t the side. As expected, she stpped t pick it up again. Hippmenes clenched his teeth and was running past. Nevertheless, within secnds, Atalanta was appraching. It seemed hpeless. When she finally caught up with Hippmenes the secnd time, he threw the third and last glden apple. As it flew thrugh the air, Atalanta was spellbund by the magic f glden apples. She impulsively ran twards the glden apple, bent dwn and picked it up. Hwever, the glden apples were t heavy fr her t bear. Hippmenes was taking the lead again. There’s n chance fr her t surpass him. By this time he was almst at the end f the race. Observing the rules in the bargain, they gt married after Hippmenes wn the race. Thanks t the Gddess, they lived happily ever after.
通过本课学习，你将会：为了达到目标，你需要：达到这个目标，你能够：
学习冲突写作的3个技能
了解并运用好冲突的力量
写好故事冲突为续写加分
Fr sale, Baby shes, Never wrn.--Ernest Hemingway
冲突有力量：将“事故”变成“故事”，以情动人。
情节的“LOCK系统”主角（Lead）目标（Objective）冲突（Cnfrntatin）冲击结尾（Knckut）
一个好故事，本质上就是对冲突的记录。
A wman is sitting in her ld, shuttered huse. She knws that she is alne in the whle wrld; every ther thing is dead.The drbell rings.
“引线”是扰乱事件，打破主角平静生活。故事伊始，主角过着特定的生活，如果没有扰乱事件，主角将不会改变。扰乱事件不一定是严重的威胁，但会打乱主角平静的日常生活。
When Bill was very yung, they had been in lve. Many nights they had spent walking, talking tgether. Then smething nt very imprtant had cme between them, and they didn’t speak. Impulsively, she had married a man she thught she lved. Bill went away, bitter abut wmen.Yesterday, walking acrss Washingtn Square, she saw him fr the first time in years.“Bill Walker,” she said.He stpped. At first he did nt recgnize her, t him she lked s ld.“Mary! Where did yu cme frm?”Uncnsciusly, she lifted her face as thugh wanting a kiss, but he held ut his hand. She tk it.
(1)主角原本生活：_________________________________________.(2)扰乱事件：_____________________________________________.(3)冲突的组合形式：_______________________________________.(4)扰乱事件可能的影响：___________________________________.(5)结局可能的方向：①_____________________________________. ②_____________________________________.
“诱因”是性格写照，推动情节特定发展。人物形象主要有两类：圆形人物（rund character）和扁平人物（flat character）。圆形人物性格复杂，他往往随着故事的发展而成长，冲突很有可能会改变他的三观。扁平人物性格单一，他的行为模式是固定可预测的，反面人物多半属于这一类，也常常是冲突的来源。在分析冲突本质时，我们思考性格对这两类人物在特定情境下的情绪反应，归因其性格缺陷，比如，怯懦、傲慢、粗暴、狡诈、虚伪、吝啬、偏执、不够勇敢等。研读语篇时，我们可以分析人物性格，推动故事冲突。
A Vacatin with My MtherI had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because f my mther – lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten. （节选自2017年11月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试浙江卷）
(1)主角的人物形象：_____________________________________(2)主角的性格缺陷：_____________________________________(3)性格缺陷可能产生的冲突：_____________________________(4)冲突的组合形式：_____________________________________(5)结局可能的方向：_____________________________________
The big Twn Hall clck was striking midnight when Frank began t crss the bridge. The dark night air was cld and wet, and the street lamps gave little light. Frank was anxius t get hand and his ftsteps rang ludly n the silent night.When he reached the middle f the bridge, he thught he culd hear smene cming near behind him. He lked back but culd see n ne. Hwever, the sund cntinued, and Frank began walking mre quickly. Then he slwed dwn again, thinking there was nthing t fear in a twn as quiet as this. The shrt, quick steps grew luder until they seemed very near.Frank fund it impssible nt t turn rund. As he did s, he caught sight f a human frm cming tward him. After reaching the ther side f the bridge, Frank stpped and pretended t lk dwn at the water. Frm the crner f his eyes he culd nw make ut the frm f a man dressed in a large vercat. A hat was pulled dwn ver his eyes and very little f his face culd be seen.As the man came near, Frank turned twards him and said smething abut the weather in an effrt t be friendly. The man did nt answer but asked rughly where Oakfield Huse was. Frank pinted t a big huse in the distance and the stranger cntinued his way.Then Frank wndered why the stranger had wanted t find Oakfield Huse at such an hur. He knew that the persn wh lived there was very rich. Almst withut realizing what he was ding, Frank began fllwing the stranger quietly.The man was sn utside the huse and Frank saw him lk up at the windws. A light was still n, and the man waited until it went ut. When abut half an hur had passed, Frank saw him climb niselessly ver the wall and heard him drp nt the grund at the ther side.（试题选自浙江省宁波市2018届高三上学期期末考试） Para.1 Nw Frank knew what the man wanted t d. _______________________________________________________________________ Para.2 Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. _______________________________________________________________________
“危机”是读者诉求，营造故事冲击结局。
（选自浙江省宁波市2018届高三上学期期末考试）
Para.1 Nw Frank knew what the man wanted t d. _______________________________Para. 2 Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. ______________________________
学生作品：(para.2) Frank culdn’t just stand in the dark and wait. An excessive cncern welled up in his mind. S annyed was he that he culdn’t wait any lnger. Feeling determined, he turned arund and ran t the plice statin quickly. Frank tld the plice that there must be a thief getting int the Oakfield Huse. Thanks t Frank’s help, the plice eventually arrested the thief. And Frank became the her in the twn.设计的危机：________________________________________________合理性分析：_________________________________________________
技巧一 冲突双方的“力量”要均衡技巧二 冲突的解决要有“冲击力”技巧三 人与物要有“联系和中断”
营造冲突的3种实用技巧
技巧一 冲突双方的“力量”要均衡
请为语篇设计“力量均衡”的冲突。With the kitchen dr carefully lcked frm the utside, the man threatened t kill us if we made any nises and tried t escape. Sn we heard his heavy and hurried steps. We knew he went upstairs t search the bedrm fr smething valuable. I clearly knew it was the nly chance t stp the rbber cntinuing his crime. I exchanged silent glances with my brther. With my special trick in bunding up, he successfully reached ut his hand t untie himself. Then he cautiusly helped untie the rpes arund me. Obviusly, he was in great terrr as I nticed his trembling hands and tearing eyes. After he made it, I kissed his frehead t cmfrt him. I encuraged him t pull himself tgether. Realizing the rbber was cmmitting the crime, I_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（1）力量分布：_____________________________________（2）力量形式：_____________________________________（3）可能结局：_____________________________________（4）你的续写：_____________________________________
（1）力量分布：the strng rbber V.S. the trapped and weak brthers（2）力量形式：physical strength and wisdm“I”, althugh physically weak, gt us ut f “truble” with my wisdm eventually.（3）可能结局：The rbber wuld be arrested.（4）续写：Realizing the rbber was cmmitting the crime, I cautiusly pened the kitchen windw. Hwever, it was t high fr a kid t jump ver. I was feeling a desperate lss when I nticed the neighbr walking ver. Frtunately, I waved t draw him clse and explained what had happened t us just nw. He was shcked but dialed 911 immediately. Waiting fr the arrival f the plice, he kept calming us dwn. With the plice insight minutes later, I knew we were safe eventually.
技巧二 冲突的解决要有“冲击力”
请为语篇设计“冲击性”结局。My wife Laura and I were n the beach, with three f ur children, taking pictures f shre birds near ur hme in Alaska when we sptted a bear. The bear was thin and small, mving aimlessly.Just a few minutes later, I heard my daughter shuting, “Dad! The bear is right behind us!” An aggressive bear will usually rush frward t frighten away its enemy but wuld suddenly stp at the last minute. This ne was silent and its ears pinned back--the sign f an animal that is ging in fr the kill. And it was a cld April day. The bear behaved abnrmally, prbably because f hunger.I held my camera tripd(三脚架) in bth hands t frm a barrier as the bear rushed int me. Its huge head was level with my chest and shulders, and the tripd stuck acrss its muth. It bit dwn and I fund myself supprting its weight. I knew I wuld nt be able t hld it fr lng.Even s, this was a fight I had t win: I was all that std between the bear and my family, wh wuld stand little chance f running faster than a brwn bear.
（1）力量分布：______________（2）力量形式：______________（3）“冲击性”发展：________（4）可能结局：______________（5）你的续写：______________
The bear hit at the camera, cutting it ff the tripd. I raised my left arm t prtect my face; the beast held tightly n the tripd and pressed it int my side. My arm culd nt mve, and I sensed that my bnes were ging t break.Drawing back my free hand, I struck the bear as hard as I culd fr five r six times. _________________________________
（1）力量分布：the pwerful bear V.S. rdinary human beings（2）力量形式：physical cnflicts（3）“冲击性”发展：We were t terrified t make psitive and effective defense. Thus, we lst the battle with the bear. （4）可能结局：We were safe and sund in the end.（5）续写：Drawing back my free hand, I struck the bear as hard as I culd fr five r six times. The bear pened its muth and I grasped its fur, trying t push it away. I was actually wrestling with the bear at this pint. Then, as suddenly as it had begun, the fight ended. The bear mved back twards the frest, befre returning fr anther attack--the first time I felt panic. Apparently satisfied that we caused n further threat, the bear mved ff, destrying a fence as it went. My arm was injured, but the utcme fr us culd hardly have been better. I’m prud that my family remained clear-headed when panic culd have led t a very different utcme.
技巧三 人与物要有“联系和中断”
The Stry f AtlantaAtlanta was a Greek princess. She was very beautiful and culd run faster than any man in Greece. But she was nt allwed t run and win glry fr herself in the Olympic Games. She was s angry that she said t her father that she wuld nt marry anyne wh culd nt run faster than her. Her father said that she must marry, s Atlanta made a bargain with him. She said t him, “These are my rules. When a man says he wants t marry me, I will run against him. If he cannt run as fast as me, he will be killed. N ne will be pardned.”Many kings and princes wanted t marry Atlanta, but when they heard f rules they knew it was hpeless. S many f them sadly went hme, but thers stayed t run the race. There was a man called Hippmenes wh was amazed when he heard f Atlanta’s rules, “Why are these men s flish?” he thught. “Why will they let themselves be killed because they cannt run as fast as this princess?” Hwever, when she saw Atlanta cme ut f her huse t run, Hippmenes changed his mind. “I will marry Atlanta--r die!” he said.
（1）力量分布：____________________（2）力量形式：____________________（3）“冲击性”发展：______________（4）主角的主要联系：______________（5）联系的可能中断：______________（6）可能结局：____________________（7）你的续写：_______________________________________________________
The race started and althugh the man ran very fast, Atlanta ran faster. As Hippmenes watched he thught, “Hw can I run as fast as Atlanta?” He went t ask the Greek Gdness f Lve fr help. She prmised t help him and gave him three glden apples. She said, “Thrw an apple in frnt f Atlanta when she is running past. When she stps t pick it up, yu will be able t run past her and win.”Hippmenes tk the apples and went t the King. He said, “I want t marry Atlanta.” The King was sad t see anther man die, but Hippmenes said, “I will marry her--r die!” S the race began.S the next day Hippmenes was waiting when Atlanta came ut. She thught, “I dn’t want this man t die.” S she said t her father, “Tell him t g away.” The race will nt be run tday.” But Hippmenes said, “These are her rule: She will marry the man wh runs faster than her. Cme n—let’s run!”Para.1 When the race started, Hippmenes ran fast, but Atalanta ran even faster. __________________________Para.2 When she finally caught up with Hippmenes the secnd time, he threw the third and last apple. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（1）力量分布：Atlanta’s super running capacity V.S. Hippmenes’s glden apples frm the Gddess f lve（2）力量形式：magic f glden apples, Atlanta’s physical strength and mercy ut f lve t Hippmenes（3）“冲击性”发展：Atlanta’s nearly catching up with Hippmenes in the race（4）主角的主要联系：the tug-f-war in the running race（5）联系的可能中断：the Glden apples’ magic cast n Atlanta, leaving her falling behind Hippmenes（5）可能结局：With the help f three glden apples, Hippmenes wn the race and married Atlanta
（6）你的续写：When the race started, Hippmenes ran fast, but Atalanta ran even faster. He had n chice but t take ut the first glden apple and threw it in frnt f her. Driven by curisity, Atalanta came t an abrupt stp and pick it up. S Hippmenes tk the chance t run past her. Realizing that might be a trick, she tk up all her strength t catch up with him in time. Just then, Hippmenes threw anther glden apple ver her head and far t the side. As expected, she stpped t pick it up again. Hippmenes clenched his teeth and was running past. Nevertheless, within secnds, Atalanta was appraching. It seemed hpeless. When she finally caught up with Hippmenes the secnd time, he threw the third and last glden apple. As it flew thrugh the air, Atalanta was spellbund by the magic f glden apples. She impulsively ran twards the glden apple, bent dwn and picked it up. Hwever, the glden apples were t heavy fr her t bear. Hippmenes was taking the lead again. There’s n chance fr her t surpass him. By this time he was almst at the end f the race. Observing the rules in the bargain, they gt married after Hippmenes wn the race. Thanks t the Gddess, they lived happily ever after.
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