66 各地中考真题再现02 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

66 各地中考真题再现02  

2023年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 

（1）

近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。

要求：

1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4. 词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

How to Keep Safe

Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.

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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.

【写作思路】

近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【参考范文】

How to Keep Safe

Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.

First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.

After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.

文中用到了非常好的句型：we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.；Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.这些给文章增色不少。

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为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从 4 月 1 日起，学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。

1. 学生吃得健康、安全；

2. 及时发现就餐问题；

3. 食堂提供食品多样；

4. 父母更加放心。

注意：1.词数 80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

      3. 参考词汇:规定 regulation (n.)；食堂 cafeteria (n.)；营养的 nutritious (adj.)

A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.

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【写作思路】

本文属于材料作文，就政府出台的“陪餐制度”谈谈你的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thanks to, take place, be able to, provide sth for sb, in other words, worry about, not...at all, carry on, first, second以及also，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【参考范文】

A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools. It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.

Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, we  eat healthier and safer than before. Second, if there is any problem about food safety or other, our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly. Also, the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us. In other words, our parents needn’t worry about our diet any more.

We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.

（3）

根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。

提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture

提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?

          What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your email _______________________________________________________________

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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.

Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.

If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。

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每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。

      2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。

      3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。

Dear friends,

     Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?

Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________

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    In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.

    That’s all. Thank you!

【写作思路】

本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化．就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修．

【参考范文】

Dear friends，

     Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？

     Here are some suggestions．

　 On the one hand， we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we  must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must  use sidewalks  and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad，  don't eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．

　On the other hand， we should learn to protect ourselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．

　 In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．

    That's all．  Thank you !

点评

高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；

高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；

高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；

高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语

高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．

我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask...for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，protect.. from...短语。

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请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect  Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。

提示：

1. 谨慎交友。

2. 不参与打架斗殴。

3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。

参考词汇：1.  self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）

3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?

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【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

【参考范文】

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.

We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?

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每年三月的最后一个星期一是"全国中小学生安全教育日"．为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定在毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会．请根据所给提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言稿．

提示：1．上学、放学途中的安全；

      2．校园里的安全；

      3．家里的安全．

要求：1． 80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

      2．语法正确，语句通顺、流畅；

      3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名．

Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should _____________________________________

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Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．

Thank you!

【参考范文】

Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should pay more attention to safety．To be safe，we must follow rules．

When we go to school or go home from school，we must follow the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk-side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．

【高分句型一】We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road．Don't play football on the road．（上学、放学途中的安全）

At school，don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs，or we may hurt ourselves or others．Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them，or we'll be hurt．（上学、放学途中的安全）

At home，we should be careful when we use electricity．If there is a fire or a thief，we should call the police for help in time．（家里的安全．）Also，food satety is important．Never eat the food that goes bad．

【高分句型二】

Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．

Thank you!

（7）

根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。

要求：

1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80.

参考词汇： cover v. 遮盖   take the lift 乘坐电梯  exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切断

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【写作思路】

根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【参考范文】

How to Protect Yourself in a Fire

According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire. First, you should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. You mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, you should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm. If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious, you should call 119 for help. These may help us.

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。

内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。

参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。

写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。

参考范文

Dear students,

As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. 

We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. 

In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.

　　Yours,

　Li Hua

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校园暴力

遇见或亲身经历过校园暴力吗？千万别以为这是危言耸听，在学校必须注意维护自己的人身安全。近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学初三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以How to protect ourselves in campus violence为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容： 1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。 2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。 3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。 注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：增强—enhanceHow to protect ourselves in campus violence Dear friends, This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. That’s all. Thank you!   
 

参考范文

 How to protect ourselves in campus violenceDear friends,      This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country.    As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection.     Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury.    That’s all. Thank you.