69 各地中考真题再现05 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

69 各地中考真题再现05  

2023年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 

（一）

假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；

2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；

3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。

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【写作思路】

这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。

【参考范文】

Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。

（二）

"你养我长大，我陪你变老．"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文．

要点：

（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；

（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；

（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；

（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）．

注意事项：

（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息．

You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. __

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【写作思路】

【参考范文】

You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of  love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）

Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．

when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，

【高分句型二】

It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．

本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who …

（三）

哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途．请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法．

参考词汇：

注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．

Help with Some Housework

It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I ___________________________________________________________________________________________

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【参考范文】

Help with Some Housework

It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and  sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes

for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平时所作家务）

I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家务的看法）【高分句型二】

（四）

每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶．请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下"景美人更美"的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！

提示词：beautiful views美丽的景色

要求：

1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范．

2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名．

3． 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．

How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．________________________________

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【参考范文】

How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．Let's leave the visitors a good impression  not only for the beautiful views ，but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（开篇点明题意）

First， We must be friendly．Use"please，OK，welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides， we should be ready to help others（高分句型一）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need us，we should help them．What's more， we should follow the rules． For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn't drop litter carelessly．At last ，we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（从四个方面展开对成为文明市民的论述）

Why not do as above points？Let's try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（结尾倡议大家成为文明市民）

（五）

假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

参考词汇：congratulation

祝贺注意事项：

1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Harry,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。  学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。

（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；

（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援   的帮助等）；

写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。

【参考范文】

Dear Harry,

Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!

I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.

Hoping you will make greater progress.

Yours,

Li Hua