技巧11 如何描写景色-高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

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高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练
技巧11 如何描写景色

英语景色描写技巧
　　描写是指对自然景物、社会环境和动植物的描写。描写，是用生动形象的语言，把景物的形体、特征、性质等具体地描绘出来，使人产生如临其境、如睹其物的感受。它是用富有表现力的文字描绘客观事物的一种表现形式。运用描写，可以展现地域、环境、自然景物的画面，可以绘声绘色、有形有神地展示动物、植物的神态。在记叙文中，景物描写可以创造某种气氛，烘托人物性格、展示事件背景等。我们这里选编的主要是单独成文的描写文。
　　一、描写方式
　　所有描写都包含两个要素：一是对象（object），二是观察者（observer）。前者指看到的或听说的客观事物，后者指看或听的人，一般是指描写文的作者。根据二者之中哪一个要素处于支配地位，我们可把描写方式分为两种：
　　1.客观性描写
　　客观性描写独立于观察者的感知和感情，精确记录描写对象的面目。它是一种真实的报道，目的在于告诉不能亲眼看见描写对象的读者景物的真实情况。作者把自己当作是一部照相机，用词语如实摄制真正的照片。从其超然或公正的特点来看，客观性描写文作者很像是科学家，他要从自己的工作中严格排除个人意见和感情。例如，他在描写上楼时，不能写“I am going upstairs”，而只能直接写“on the second floor”；也不能用反映个人意见内涵的词语，例如，要说“大楼”就要用陈述事实的“large building”，而不能用含有感情的表达“a magnificent building”。
　　2.印象性描写
　　印象性描写与客观性描写截然不同。它注视的`是描写对象在观察者或作者心目中引起的情绪或情感，而不是描写对象本身的存在。就是说，它不是向读者传达信息，而是要激发读者的感情。它是让人们去感觉，而不是让人们去看。所以，感情交流是印象性描写的首要目的。交流的过程起始于作者，它必须来源于真诚的感情。作者要想使自己的描写成功，不仅感觉要深，而且要在自己的心目中明确那是什么感情。只有作者了解了自己的心情才能把它交流给读者。
　　二、描写类型
描写文有多种分类方法，有从对象上分类的，有从方法上分类的，还有从描写角度分类的。就我们的需要而言描写文可从内容和技法两方面进行分类：从描写内容上分，我们可以把描写文分为地方介绍、自然景物描写、社会环境描写和场面描写，其中每一类又可分为若干小类。从描写技法上分，我们可以把描写分为动态、静态、动静结合、定点观察、移步换景、托物言志、情景交融等描写。
例如：
①It was beginning to snow, and snowflakes were blinding my eyes.
天开始下雪了，雪花让我看不清了。
②The sun was breaking through the blanket of mist.
太阳穿过薄雾。
③Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with growing rice. During autumn, these same mountains are flash gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost.
夏天，水稻生长群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银装素裹。
④A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.
不远处有一条小溪，在绿色的两岸之间奔流不息，波光粼粼。
　　三、描写文的要求
　　在描写文的写作过程中要注意以下几点：
　　1.要考虑好描写的视角和次序。视角，就是我们通常所讲的人称，用第一和第三人称都可以，但目的、内容和效果却不同。描写次序是指先写什么后写什么的问题。一般来讲，英语描写短文总是按空间顺序（spatial order）来安排次序的。比如要描写一个房间时，要从先看到的部位写起，从上到下或从下到上。
　　2.要选择好重点部位或内容来写。无论描写什么都不可能面面俱到，而要选择最能体现事物特征的一两点作细描处理，其他方面用白描手法一代而过。
　　3.要把描写和叙述结合起来写。在实际写作中，描写多半与其他体裁结合起来使用，尤其是常与叙述交织在一起，二者“难分难舍”。一般来说，叙述是概括地显示行文进程，描写是具体细致地描述客观事物。好的描写总是把记事、写人、状物、写景紧密地揉合在一起，使其浑然一体，既突出重点，又有点有面，点面结合，创造出一种和谐的美。
英语写景段落欣赏
Natural Phenomena 自然现象
1. The Clear Sky 晴空
When you look at the sky on a clear day, it seems as if the earth is covered by a blue dome. If
you stand at a place where the surface of the earth is flat; the sky seems to meet the earth in any direction you look. 在晴朗的日子,你看到天空就像一个蓝色的大圆盘.如果你极目远眺,无论从那个方向,看到的都是天地相接的地平线.
2. Summer Evenings夏夜
Sometimes I will see falling stars draw bright lines in the sky. There is harmony between the moon and stars in the quiet sky and the slow pace of the village. I really enjoy the peaceful summer evenings in the village.有时我得到流星在天空中划出明亮的线条,宁静的夜空中挂着一轮明月和闪烁的星星,与慢节奏的村庄形成一幅和谐的美景.我非常喜欢村庄宁静的夏夜.
3. The Sun rises 日出
The next day, the sunlight woke him very early, hiding the stars under a pink blue and blue sky. But the stars kept watching him from above. 第二天,日出的光线很早就将他唤醒.夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色的天空下. 但是它们仍然从天上看着他.
4. Beautiful Dawn 凌晨美景
It was the perfect morning for our daily walk: A brisk wind sweeping ocean air across our faces, fresh mounds of kelp laughing in clumps along the beach, and the sun coming up from its flat bed of fog, red and new and full of promises. 对我们每日的散步来说,这是一个宜人的清晨.清冽的微风夹着海洋的气息扑面而来.一簇簇新鲜的海藻在海滩随处可见.旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起,东升红彤彤,新鲜而充满生机.
5. The Moon 月亮
It is a beautiful and quiet night. The moon is like a disc hanging on the dark sky , which casts its light on everything.一个美丽而宁静的夜晚,月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照万物.
6. Summer Rain 夏雨
The first drops of rain are huge; they split into the dust on the ground, and plunk on the roof. The rain now becomes a torrent, flung by a rising wind. Together they batter the trees and level the grasses. Water streams off roofs. There is only water. 开始雨点很大,溅起地上的灰尘,打在屋顶上丁当作响.接着大更大的风助威下, 瓢泼大雨倾盆而下,雨水砸向树木,踏平草地.立即,雨水像溪流一样从屋顶奔流而下.到处都是水的世界.
7. Rainbow 彩虹
I am drawn outside while the rain still falls. All around, there is cool and welcome feeling. I breathe deeply and watch the sun’s rays streak through breaking clouds. One ray catches the drops that from on the edge of the roof, and I am treated to a row of tiny, quivering colors—my private rainbow. They are red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet, which makes a wonderland. 雨一直在下，我跑出去，享受周围那一丝丝清凉的感觉。我深深地吸了一口气，看着阳光明媚穿过残云。一缕阳光正好照在屋檐边的雨滴上，形成了只有我才看见的一条细细的，忽隐忽现的彩虹。五颜六色-----赤橙黄绿青蓝紫，简直就像仙境一般。
9．A Thunder Storm 雷雨
The sky is full of black clouds. Flashes of lightning lit up the courts, old houses, and ramshackle porches, and thunder begins to roar overhead. No birds sing any longer, but the leaves of the trees rustle and a wind blows against our faces. A drop of water falls, then another, and then the rain falls on the leaves of the trees and the iron roofs with a noise reminding us of the beating of drums. A brilliant stripe o flight fills the sky. Suddenly there comes a terrible thunderclap overhead, and then the sky is full of roars of thunder. 天空乌云密布，雷电闪闪，照亮了天井、老屋，还有那摇摇欲坠的走廊。一声惊雷在头顶上炸响。只有树叶的沙沙声。风吹打在脸上，雨开始一滴一滴地下着，雨滴打在树叶和铁皮屋顶上，就像敲锣打鼓的声音。一道闪电越过天空，紧接着头顶上又是一声惊雷，然后天空中轰鸣的雷声不断。
10．Snow Picture 雪景
When I got up the next morning, I saw that the ground was covered with a vast blanket of whiteness. With the white ground underfoot, and the chimneys here and there sending out brown smoke into the clear blue sky overhead, the whole scene might match the most beautiful morning picture in the world. 当我第二天早晨起床时，我看到大地被厚厚的白色毯子覆盖着。在脚下白色的大地上，缕缕炊烟升入头顶蔚蓝的天空，犹如世界上最美的动人画卷。
11．Autumn Dusk 秋日黄昏
The most beautiful thing during the autumn is dusk. The setting sun looks like a burning ball of fire; it makes the sky look so colorful. A flock of wild geese fly back and forth in the sky, as if they don’t want to leave. The many insects making noise in the grass make fields seem more interesting.秋日的黄昏最美的。太阳像一个大火球，把天空染成五颜六色。一群大雁在天空飞来飞去，似乎不想离开。草中的虫鸣使田野显得更有趣。
12．Winter Night 冬夜
It was cold and bleak in the late winter. The night was dark, not a star was to be seen in the gloomy and dismal sky. The north wind was howling dreadfully outside the house, like the screams of some wounded wild beasts.阴冷的寒冬，夜里一片漆黑，在阴沉的天空中甚至连一颗星星都看不见。屋外北风呼啸，像受伤的野兽的尖叫声。
13．Snow 初雪
The first snow came, How beautiful it was, falling so silently all day long, all night long, on the mountains, in the meadows, on the roofs of living. All white save the river, that marked its course by a winding black line across the landscape, What silence, too, came with the snow, and what seclusion! Every sound was muffled every noise changed to something soft and musical. No more trumping hoofs, no more rattling wheels! 初雪飘零，多么美啊！它整日整夜那么静静地飘着，落在山岭上，落在草地上，落在屋顶上。在一片白茫茫之中，只有河流在美丽的画面上划出一道曲曲弯弯的黑线。初雪飘落时，是何等的宁静、何等的幽静！一切声响都江堰市趋于沉寂，一切噪音都化作柔和的音乐。再没有嘈杂的步行声，再没有滚滚的车轮声。
Colorful World 五彩世界
1．The Setting Sun 日落
When the sun begins to set behind the mountains, its long rays light up the green fields of wheat or rice. And all the trees and bushes with a golden glow. The clouds above the sky also begin to glow with a golden light, and the mountains are of a lovely purple color.太阳快要下山了，柔和的光照在绿色的田野里和丛林上，金光闪闪，天空的云彩也开始金光闪闪，山也变成美丽的紫色。
2．Toward Evening 傍晚
Then as the fiery ball of the sun is gone altogether behind the mountain, the red color of the clouds begins to fade, and gradually fakes away until all the clouds are grey and the mountains become a deep black clear cut against the pale sky, where the evening stars take the place of the sun and shine brightly. 火红的太阳隐没到山后，红彤彤的云彩也渐渐地褪色，天空成了灰色，山也变成了深褐色，像一幅版画映衬在苍白的天空中。 夜空中明亮的星星开始闪耀。。。。。。
3．Colorful World 五彩世界
The sun was already in the west but it was still shining. Its light was so bright that I couldn’t even open my eyes. When I arrived at the west Hill, the light became a bit yellow. After a short while, it was completely golden, then red. The sun nearly set. It was like a great fiery ball. The cloud around it was also painted red. Little by little the cloud covered more and more of the sun. At last it disappeared behind the cloud. It was already dark. 太阳偏西，但还非常明亮，强光刺得我睁不开眼。当我到达西山时，光线泛黄，一会儿，就变成了金黄色，然后又变成红色，太阳快要下山了，就像一个大火球，把周围的云也染红了。太阳慢慢地沉下去，终于躲入云中，天已经黑了。
4．Beach Holiday 海滩假日
I had always liked the beach. I t didn’t matter if the sun didn’t shine while you were hiking in the lake District—in fact, a light rain made it all the more exhilarating. I yearned for the bright blues, yellows and reds of a beach holiday. 我一向喜欢海滩。当来到湖泊地区远足时，天空没有阳光并不要紧。事实上，一场小雨会更增添其中的情趣罗强烈地向往着海滩假日中明亮的湛蓝色、金黄色。
5．Natural Beauty 自然美景
On one side, beginning at the very lip of the pool, was a tiny meadow, a cool, resilient surface of green that extended to the vase of the frowning wall. Beyond the pool a gentle slope of earth ran up and up to meet the opposing wall. Fine grass covered the slope-grass that was spangled with flowers, with here and there patches of color, orange and purple and golden. 在深潭的一边，有一片小小的草地，凉爽而富有弹性的绿草地从潭的边缘延伸到皱折的峭壁下面。深潭的另、一边，一个缓坡延伸着直上到对面的峭壁。满坡鲜美的草，五颜六色的花朵，桔黄色的、紫色的、金黄色的点缀其间。
Natural World山川风貌
1．The Morning Dew 晨露
On sunshiny summer mornings, the grass is often wet with dew. There maybe drops of dew on flowers and bushes, and spider webs, too. The drops of dew sparkle like jewels when the sun shines on them. 在晴朗的夏天的凌晨，草上常常沾满露珠，花丛中，甚至蜘蛛网上也有。当阳光照耀在露珠上时露珠像珠宝一样闪闪发光。
2．Lijiang River 漓江
The river is rally very clean and pure. We rented a boat and enjoyed the beautiful scenes along the river. The mountains are so special. I’ve seen many other kinds of mountains, but I like Guilihn’s mountains best. I’ve seen many rivers before, but I like Lijiang Rivers best. 河水清澈透明，我们租了一条小船，沿江欣赏着美景。山很奇特，我见过许多其他类型的山，但我最喜欢桂林的山，我也见过许多河流，但我最喜欢漓江。
3．Night of the Lake 湖之夜
Around the lake are some trees, their slender leaves bellowing in the gentle wind. There must be some frogs in the middle of the lake, whose endless singing can be heard clearly. What an attractive night! 湖周围有些树，嫩嫩的树叶在微风中飘扬。湖中一定有青蛙，我能清楚地听见它们在不停地歌唱。多美的夜晚啊！
4．Ocean at the Sunset 日落时的大海
A gust of wind brought forth the faint smell of fish, and this made me feel joyous. Slowly, the rays of sunlight faded, and dimness surrounded me. The entire ocean changed to a dark violet hue. Later, the red sun escaped into the sea. 一阵海风带来了淡淡的鱼腥味，使我兴奋起来。慢慢地，太阳光消失了，周围一片朦胧，整个海洋变成暗紫色，最后红红的太阳消失在大海里。
5．Sea Beauty 大海美景
From as far as you could see on the left and right was open water and sand. The splash of pieces of seashells lay scattered on the beach and small holes covered the sand where the crabs had dug in. The wind felt soft and warm and the water not very chilling. Far in the distance the sun was changing the color from a yellow to an orange and then to a red ball hanging over the horizon. 极目远眺，你能看见一望无垠的大海和沙滩。海滩上散落着海贝，还有一些小洞，那是螃蟹挖的。风柔而暖，水也并不太凉。远处的太阳由黄色变成橘红色，一个大红球，悬挂在天边。
6．Waterfall 瀑布
From the sky fell the waterfall’s high rising, thick mist. When in contact with sunlight, the seven—colored rainbow hung in the sky, which was very stunning. 瀑布飞流直下，震荡起浓浓的水雾，在阳光照耀下形成美丽的七色彩虹，挂在空中，令人称奇。
7．Canyon 峡谷
It was the green heart of the canyon, where the walls swerved back from the rigid plan and relieved their harshness of line by making a little sheltered nook and filling it to the brim with sweetness and roundness and softness. Here all things rested. Even the narrow stream ceased its turbulent down—rush long enough to form a quiet pool….. 这是峡谷葱绿的中心，在这里峭壁改变了它们僵硬的形式和粗糙的线条，形成 一个小小的隐蔽处，并使之充满甜美、圆润和安逸。这儿一切都很宁静，甚至连咆哮着直冲而下的瀑布也平静下来，。形成了一个宁静的深潭......
8．The Forest 森林
There’s beauty in the woods, too, especially late in the fall. Sometimes you walk among the huge trees where the sunlight filters through. It’s quiet and big, with touches of white and green and gold. And the silence is like that of church.森林也是美丽的, 特别是晚秋的森林. 有时候,你行走在阳光斑驳的高大林木间。森林在这儿那儿涂抹着白色、绿色、和金黄色，深广而且寂静，这寂静就像教堂里的肃穆一样。
9．The Sea 大海
The sea is very big. Some parts of the sea are very shallow. But some places, the seal is quite deep. The sea is salty; Rivers carry salt from the land in the sea. In the sea, there are plenty of dishes and plants. Some live near the top of the sea. Others live deep down. Millions of tiny living things float in the sea. These floating things are so small that it is hard t see them. Many fishes live by eating these living things. 大海很大。 有的地方很浅，有的地方很深。大海是咸的。河流把陆地的盐带到了大海里。在大海里，有许多鱼和植物。有的生活在浅水层，有的生活在深水层。成百上千万的生物漂浮在海里。这些浮游生物太小了，我们大家很难看见它们。很多鱼靠吃这些浮游生物为生。

1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One night, after reading one of the hundreds of parenting books I’ve read, I was feeling a little guilty because the book had described some parenting strategies I hadn’t used in a while. The main strategy was to talk with your child and use those three magic words: ”I love you.“ It had stressed over and over that children need to know that unconditionally you really love them.
I went upstairs to my son’s bedroom and knocked on the door. As l knocked, all I could hear were his drums. I knew he was there but he wasn’t answering. So I opened the door and, sure enough, there he was sitting with his earphones on, listening to a tape and playing his drums. After I leaned over to get his attention, I said to him, “Tim, have you got a second? ”
He said, “Oh sure, Dad. I’m always good for one.” We then sat down and after about 15 minutes and a lot of small talk, I just looked at him and said, “Tim, I really love the way you play drums.”
He said, ”Oh, thanks, Dad, I appreciate it.“
I walked out of the door and said, ”See you later! "As I was walking downstairs, it occurred to me that I went up there with a certain message and had not delivered it. I felt it was really important to get back up there and have another chance to say those three magic words.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Again I climbed the stairs, knocked on the door and opened it.
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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I sit on the edge of my bed, faint smiles sliding across my face, as I sort through old photographs. I hold each memory briefly in my hands before dropping them onto the pile in my lap and searching for the next happy moment to remember. Each picture brings up feelings deep within me.
As I relive the memories, I can't help but notice one photo in particular buried deep in the box. The picture at first glance is lovely. The sun was shining with not a cloud to be seen. I was sting with my arm around a happy-looking girl, her arm rested casually on my shoulders. As I focus on the happy girl, the smile that covers my face becomes a frown. It is Amy Soule, my now ex-best friend. A terrible pang (一阵剧痛) of regret flashes through me, and I feel tightness in my throat.
Our decline in friendship began with different interests. She wanted to go to the mall and shop, while I preferred to watch old movies in my spare time. Soon the only time I saw her was when we exchanged a hurried hello in the busy school halls between classes. No more notes were passed behind the teacher's back, and my parent's phone bill became much cheaper. She found a new group of friends, and so did I. Before I had a chance to repair the friendship, she moved away, causing the crack to become an uncrossable rift.
I made excuses for not keeping in touch. It was too far to visit, too long of a drive. I knew that was not the truth, but I was too nervous to pick up the phone and call. Eventually, the rift grew too large to bridge. Amy had left and she had taken a huge chunk of my heart with her.
I stand up and pull myself back into the now. Glancing up at my calendar, I remember that Amy's birthday is around the corner. In fact, we were born in the same room, two days apart. We started so close and ended up so far. This bittersweet memory causes me to smile despite my feelings of regret.
要求:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly I have an idea.
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I stick the note under the edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Dog Who Saved Our Family
We met Max at the pickup area of Alaska Airlines five years ago. He was a standard poodle(狮子狗)born on Valentine’s Day in 2017， and came to us in a small blue box. We had adopted him from an out-of-state raiser who posted the news on the social network. Our only request was that he have a calm behavior, able to bear the pushing and hugging of our eight-year-old daughter and six-year-old son.
We were a sweet little family:me,my husband, and our children, Sophie and Jake. But for years I’d felt as if we wouldn’t really be complete until we had a dog. Also, my husband worked in a business company and had to travel some 200 days a year for his job, and I knew I’d feel safer with a large animal sleeping by the door.
When we opened the box, the last piece of our puzzle fell into place. With his black hair and intelligent eyes,Max was beautiful. He was so small that he fit into the palm of my hand, his big paws lapping over the sides. He was also a little bit scared. As I pulled him close,I felt his heart pound and wondered if we’d done the right thing, taking him from his mother. But it was too late. Sophie and Jake were already fighting over who would hold him next and who should have the right to take a bath for him.
Over the following months, we spent endless hours watching Max play with his Kong toy or roll around the living room floor. Like most poodles, he was smart. He mastered house-training quickly and never chewed on our furniture or shoes. He considered himself one of us.
注意
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One night we were sleeping in the bedroom when I heard some strange noise.
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At that time,Max ran towards me.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Life never really turns out the way we expect it to. We have dreams and expectations. And dream-come-true stories are everywhere — except, it may seem, in our own lives.
As a child, Barbara never quite found the bond with her parents that all children need. Her father left the family early, and her mother did menial jobs.
“I couldn’t let my life keep me from caring about other people,” she says. “Maybe it’s unfair or just the way it turns out for people, but I still have a son.”
Barbara raised her son the best she knew how and “he turned out pretty well,” she says, smiling. And after the hard years of making ends meet and giving him a good start, she made a career change.
“I never thought I was supposed to feel sorry for myself,” she says. “And I like people.”
Barbara works as an in-home caregiver for elderly people in their last year of life. She spends 10-hour days, six days a week, with people who have Alzheimer’s disease and dementia, sometimes sleeping on their sofa when they are afraid to spend a night alone. Most don’t have families close by, and Barbara becomes the person they rely on for everything: meals, bathing, bathroom duties, daily walks if they can, mental exercises like crossword puzzles and re-learning family faces.
She only charges what the family can afford and only works with one client at a time. “They become the family I never had, over and over again,” she says, laughing.
The spaces left empty in Barbra’s childhood are filled with memories shared with her from lives fading away in the dusk. For 30 years, she has been making people feel good at a time when most would just be waiting to die, alone and unnoticed. When seeing their faces when they are with Barbara, you’d think the last years were the best.
“I’ve found something I never had,” Barbara says. “We make each other happy. So I try to give them what they want most.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She’s learned from her experiences that old people want their loved ones to visit them.
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I posted Barbara’s story online to call on children to visit their parents.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As this term began, I found a new student in my class named Ian Bonus, 16 years old. He was silent, always doing business alone. From his file, I learned that Ian was born in Korea, and spent all his childhood there until his family moved to England. It wasn’t as smooth and easy as he imagined. He had to learn and speak a new language so as to communicate with others. When at school, he tended to avoid crowds. He usually tried every possible means to keep his mouth shut up, even in class. Besides, after class, he didn’t join any clubs or activities even though everyone around him invited him to have a try.
At the beginning, I thought Ian was just a little shy at his age especially in a new place. However, later he still didn’t say a single word when classmates got along well. Having ever dealt with such similar situation myself, I felt I had the suitable experience and the right responsibility to encourage him to melt into our class.Finally, a chance came. One day, in my class, it was Ian’s turn to make a short speech as other students did regularly. But he just stood up, saying nothing. Then I could feel his face red with embarrassment. Next class, we had a P.E. lesson on the court. Again, he didn’t join, just sitting on the bench watching others play. Learning that he was fond of sports and was actually a very athletic and energetic person, I felt a strong desire to persuade him to play together. With this thought in mind, I walked over and sat aside Ian.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Hello, Ian, why not join us in playing badminton?” I smiled, “I know you can play well.”
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The next morning, Ian volunteered to step onto the platform to make up for the speech he missed the day before.
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参考答案
1．Again I climbed the stairs, knocked on the door and opened it. Entering the room, I said with a determined look, “Tim, I want to let you know exactly how I feel. I just wanted you to know I love you, and I don’t know why I hold back on something so important.” Hearing what I said, surprised and overwhelmed, he was frozen for a while. And then he walked slowly towards me, rubbing his hands nervously. As he whispered that he loved me too, we hugged together firmly with tears welling up in our eyes. I think what Tim taught me that night is that the only way you can understand the real meaning and purpose of love is to be willing to pay the price. You have to go out there and risk sharing it.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述了作者读了一本关于育儿策略的书，书中强调向孩子说我爱你表达父母对他们爱的三个神奇词的重要性，因此作者立马去做，去和儿子说“我爱你”，让孩子知道父母真的爱他们。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我再次爬上楼梯，敲了敲门，打开了门”可知，本段可描写作者和儿子说“我爱你”以及儿子对此的反应并和作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：敲门——表达关爱——儿子感动——拥抱——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
1.进入：enter/get into /walk into
2.拥抱：hug/embrace
3.认为：think/figure
情绪类
①.坚定的：determined / firm
②.惊讶的：surprised /amazed
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]. Hearing what I said, surprised and overwhelmed, he was frozen for a while. （由连接词what引导的宾语从句以及hearing作非谓语）
[高分句型2]. As he whispered that he loved me too, we hugged together firmly with tears welling up in our eyes. （由连接词as引导的时间状语从句）
2．    Suddenly I have an idea. Without the slightest hesitation, I drop to my knees and begin to wildly search through my desk drawers. At last, I lay my hands on an old picture frame I have had forever. I pick up the fallen photo of Amy and me, snapping it into the frame. Praying that this framed photograph will prompt her to take a sudden trip back to our happy moment, I write a simple note, saying “Happy birthday, Amy!”
    I stick the note under the edge of the photo frame and search for Amy’s address. Thankfully I make it. I hold the frame tightly in my arms, determined not to let this golden chance slip through my fingers. “It’s not much, but it’s a start,” I said to myself, “and the space between us is already smaller.” This time I will not hesitate to be the one to reach out and build a bridge. It may be hard but fixing a broken friendship will leave it stronger than before.  (150 words)
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因为和闺蜜的兴趣不同而分道扬镳，在作者回顾自己老照片的时候，想起了与她之间的种种回忆。由于二人之间的鸿沟太大，导致裂缝越来越大，二人的友谊无法弥合。回到现实，闺蜜的生日马上就在眼前，作者趁此机会与闺蜜和好如初的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我突然有了一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写要修复和闺蜜之间友谊的好方法，即作者是如何运用自己的相册中的照片来庆祝闺蜜的生日。
②由第二段首句内容“我把便条贴在相框的边缘下，然后搜索艾米的地址。”可知，第二段可描写作者查询到闺蜜的地址，并且迈出修复友谊重要一步，同时也可以描述作者心中对友谊的感悟。
2.续写线索：看相片——回忆过去——制作礼物——查询地址——决定送出礼物——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.寻找：search /seek
②.拾起：pick up /take up
③.抱在怀中：hold sth in one’s arms/gather sth in one’s arms
情绪类
①.愉快的时光：happy moment /pleasant time
②.毫不犹豫：will not hesitate/without hesitation/unhesitatingly
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]. Praying that this framed photograph will prompt her to take a sudden trip back to our happy moment, I write a simple note, saying “Happy birthday, Amy!”（句中使用动名词作主语和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I hold the frame tightly in my arms, determined not to let this golden chance slip through my fingers.  （句中使用过去分词作状语）
3．One possible version:
One night we were sleeping in the bed room when I heard some strange noise. I thought it was Max running and hitting something, so I kept lying in the bed and made an attempt to fall asleep again. However, the noise became louder and louder, which had already annoyed me. Swiftly I got up from my bed. I opened the door and found Max was running around the living room, trying to let all the things fall down. These abnormal behaviors really confused me while it also made me a little afraid.
At that time,Max ran towards me. He firmly grabbed my trousers and motioned me to the kitchen. As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened. When I saw the fierce fire in the kitchen, I dashed into my children’s room like an arrow, waking them up at my maximum voice. Rushing out of the house together, I called 911 and asked our neighbors for help at the same time. Fortunately both my family and my house were saved. Thanks to our smart Max, we did escape from death.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一只狮子狗，取名为Max，这只狗给作者一家带来了欢乐，并最终救了他们一家人。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，我们正在卧室睡觉时，我听到一些奇怪的声音。”可知，本段可描写Max努力制造动静，吸引作者注意，作者听到声音去查看。
②由第二段首句内容“这时，马克斯向我跑过来。”可知，本段可描写Max把我拉到厨房，我发现厨房着火了，我及时在Max的提醒下，拯救我们一家人和房子，我对Max由衷的感谢。
2.续写线索：想养狗——收养Max——调教Max——Max成为家中的一员——听到Max制造的动静——去查看——Max让我发现火灾——救了一家人。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①试图：make an attempt/make an effort/take a crack at
②急奔：dash/rush
③接近：approach/move toward
④知道；know/be aware of/realize
情绪类
①生气：annoyed/irritated/infuriated
②害怕：afraid/frightened/scared
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] However, the noise became louder and louder, which had already annoyed me.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened.(As引导的时间状语从句)
4．    She’s learned from her experiences that old people want their loved ones to visit them. Therefore, she tries her best to give more help to the elderly and make them happier. Whenever she serves an elderly family, she will learn about their loved ones, especially their children. She will take down their home address and contact information. She will chat with them to learn about the old people’s living habits in order to better serve them. She also tells them about the old people’s current situation and encourages them to pay as many visits as possible.
I posted Barbara’s story online to call on children to visit their parents. The response to my post was positive. Many people told me they were moved by the story and told me about their experiences. Some people said that they rarely visited their parents because they were so busy at work. When their parents died, they felt very sad and pitiful, but it was too late. Others were happy to tell me that they were inspired by her story, and they now often visit their parents, who are very happy.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作为一个孩子，芭芭拉从未找到所有孩子都需要的与父母的纽带。她的父亲很早就离开了家庭，她的母亲做着卑微的工作。芭芭拉尽自己最大的努力把儿子养大，芭芭拉的工作是在家照顾老人，照顾他们生命的最后一年。作者把芭芭拉的故事发布到网上，号召孩子们去看望父母，得到了很好的反响。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她从自己的经历中了解到，老年人希望他们的亲人来看望他们。”可知，第一段可描写芭芭拉是如何帮助这些老人的。
②由第二段首句内容“我把芭芭拉的故事发到网上，号召孩子们去看望父母。”可知，第二段可描写大家对芭芭拉故事的反响。
2.续写线索：帮助老人——鼓励子女看望老人——发布芭芭拉的故事——人们感动——受到鼓舞
3.词汇激活
行为类
尽最大努力：try one’s best/spare no effort to
写下：take down /write down
去世：die/pass away
情绪类
感动：moved /touched
高兴：happy /pleased
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Many people told me they were moved by the story and told me about their experiences. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Others were happy to tell me that they were inspired by her story, and they now often visit their parents, who are very happy. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)
5．One possible version:
“Hello, Ian, why not join us in playing badminton?” I smiled, “I know you can play well.” However, he shook his head and smiled shyly. Then I told him it was common for a newcomer and I could understand how he was feeling. I hoped he could tell me the reason and be more active. He was moved and told me that the reason was his lack of confidence to speak English in front of others and his fear of being teased. Then I encouraged him to seize every chance to practice and later we decided on some useful tips.
The next morning, Ian volunteered to step onto the platform to make up for the speech he missed the day before. “Hello, everyone. I’m Ian Bonus from Korea. Before my speech, I’d like to express my sincere thanks to you all, especially our teacher.” Then he finished a brilliant speech fluently. After that, he was active in every discussion in class and joined an after-school sports club with new friends. Since then, whether on the court or during speeches, confident smiles were always on his face.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者作为一位人民教师，他发现班上新来的同学伊恩不太适应新的环境，加上他自身的性格比较害羞从而比较难于融入集体。作者也能感同身受，通过用自己合适的经验和正确的责任来鼓励他融入课堂，要请他一起加入运动项目，最后伊恩在他的鼓励之下，变得越来越自信、阳光的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“你好，伊恩，为什么不和我们一起打羽毛球？”可知，第一段可描写作者想要邀请伊恩参加羽毛球赛以及伊恩受到邀请之后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，伊恩自愿走上讲台，弥补他前一天错过的演讲。”可知，第二段可描写作者对于伊恩的鼓励起到了作用，描写伊恩受鼓舞之后的一系列的改变。
2.续写线索：初到——表现不适——感同身受——鼓励——改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发现：find/notice/discover
②学习：learn/maste/take a good command of
③处理：deal with/cope with/handle
情绪类
①感谢： thanks/appreciation/gratitude
②真诚的：sincere/genuine
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Then I told him it was common for a newcomer and I could understand how he was feeling. （由省略的that引导的宾语从句，and并列两个从句）
[高分句型2] The next morning, Ian volunteered to step onto the platform to make up for the speech that he missed the day before. （由关系代词that引导非限制性定语从句）